*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 17

Originally posted by: IssPKaur

SUPERCUTE!! "Have you finished admiring me or do you want to ogle some more?" I am loving it... ASR, finally you see what we see!! It's so not your money, dude 😆
And you smell 'intoxicatingly' good too? Nice!

It's very sweet, wiwy, and you have a real lightness of touch which is so lovely. I totally HEART Rabba Ve playing in the store! Awesome detail that 👏 I could never figure out where RV originally came from but now I know!

I can't get over the image of the bed. Haven't stopped laughing since i scrolled down and saw it 😆 KKG and that bed? Mirror ceiling and all!! Amezing hai ji!!

Waiting for the next one now...keep'em comin ⭐️

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Wah, kya chun chun ke scene nikaal ke chipkaya hai! I love it Wiwy. 😃 It is like rearranging the elements of IPK and making a new design from it. Something, like a kaleidoscope, same parts, but new arrangements. But, whichever way you turn it, it is always beautiful.

I like the way you've brought together some varied scenes under one chapter. From, the seat belt scene from epi 65, when Khushi sits in his car for the first time, then that 'Honewale hain na?' from the Kanya Puja epi to the famous bedwa-cricket dialogue of Mami. And, of course, the regular trademark scenes of Arshi. On the whole, a nice entertaining chapter. Eager to see what happens next. 😳

Oh, by the way, I love that bed too!

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758

Wiwy,

Very nice. Love the bantering. He is so smug and full of himself isn't he? Looking forward to your next chapter!👏

xo Sin

Originally posted by: wiwy

Hey Iss 😃

Thankyou for supercuting my story, the dialogue, the ogle, the bed, the mirror ceiling and all!

Thanks especially for crediting me with the origin of RV! It can't get any better for me!!!!😉

I will keep them coming as long as you keep you laughing! 😆 Deal?

🤗

Originally posted by: chalhov

wiwy the bedwa story update is too good with Manorama mami thrown in and the reverse psychology used by ASR making Khushi buy what she wants like button not working will try later. It made me watch the bedwa episode😆

Originally posted by: lalarukh

awesome,sweet and lovely update and hilarious too :)... u have used the dialgues so perfectly here:)...first samjhay ap...to onwards ...wow loved it to the core :)

its really superb update

khushi so funny yaar...