*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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roshaan

@roshaan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

awesumly funny update loved it

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Hey thnxxx for d pm loved d update. Amazingly good. Very well written. Excellnt update. Keep updating

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

wow tht is niceee and funny update

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

awesome,sweet and lovely update and hilarious too :)... u have used the dialgues so perfectly here:)...first samjhay ap...to onwards ...wow loved it to the core :)

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: cheesemad
res..

edited...
lovely update...
wow loved everyone's expression when she said bed broke because he jumped on it...lol..
everyone thinking khushi is ars's fiancee...loved it...
waiting for next update:)
continue soon...

Thankyou, Komal. Was neck deep in work. But managed to come up with an update somehow!😃

Relieved you liked it. How did the History project go?😃

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: jdd1959
LOVELY & HILARIOUS UPDATE...I m still laughing...
The shopping for bed , the double meaning dialouge;
u have written it so well ...still laughing.ha..ha..haha...
thanks 4 d PM.

I am overwhelmed! Thanks and hugs.

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Too good wiwy.

I can't believe that a broken bed is leading them to where?

It sure reminded me the scene of IPK, where the bed broke and Khushi got so embarrassed. And mami's is here too to make them more embarrassed.

Khushi looks already lattoo on ASR. What about him?. I think he is also falling for her.

Khushi finally chose a sexy bed for her.

But why Arnav is denying to purchase it.

sounds fishy.

Update soon. can't wait to read more of this interesting story.

Edited by sohara - 12 years ago

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saarah96

@saarah96

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

amazing
love the title
and lol arnav and khushi
will buddy you,,please accept so i can get pms=]

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: sohara
Too good wiwy.
I can't believe that a broken bed is leading them to where?
It sure reminded me the scene of IPK, where the bed broke and Khushi got so embarrassed. And mami's is here too to make them more embarrassed.
Khushi looks already lattoo on ASR. What about him?. I think he is also falling for her.

Khushi finally chose a sexy bed for her.
But why Arnav is denying to purchase it.
sounds fishy.
Update soon. can't wait to read more of this interesting story.

Okay sohara! You read me so well! That is why I love your comments. You are right. Something is fishy.😕 You will surely know in the next update!😃 Hugs!

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Really really nice update.

Amazing usage of Ipk dialogues and I loved to see a blushing khushi .

The bed is hot, only if Arnav n Khushi make better use of it. 😳