*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

' aisan ka karat rahe ki bedwa hi tut gawa, cricket khelat rahe the kaa' , this srsly is one of my fav dialogues of IPK!

I soo miss it aftr reading it again.!

You hav made this story out of dat one beautiful scene! The broken bed..! Srsly i loved the concept!

And i loved the way manorama said this dialogue here as well! Just not caring abt the audience, getting khushi all flustered while Arnav all the while was smirking!

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jenshad

@jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

The Discussion About Beds Have Never Been Naugtier ; P

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Good one wiwy...I never found bed shopping so amazingly funny and sexy.Yeah only wiwy can do that but why are you making Khushi flat on him ...give her some back bone with real gussa and fight so she can challenge him in real way ...😆

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 12 years ago

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dhruvilove

@dhruvilove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

funny khushi is too cute 😃

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

ha ha ha ha, that was funny and really smart writing. a lotus fountain in the middle of a gaudy store with rabba ve playing in the background and mamiji with her barbs conveniently in the wings. very very nice, and i wonder why he doesn't like the round bed? to small for him to jump on? wiwy, please don't make me wait too long to find out. 😆

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

With a mirror no doubt! Too cute and too funny. Charming story.

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

@cinthiann1758

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Wiwy,

Very nice. Love the bantering. He is so smug and full of himself isn't he? Looking forward to your next chapter!👏

xo Sin

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8Lucky88

@8Lucky88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

i loved your story...it is funny and creative

continue soon

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bellacoolio

@bellacoolio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

A hilarious update indeed! I enjoyed how you used Mami's character for the showroom owner...something different. Thanks for the PM. Do continue soon.

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Good one wiwy...I never found bed shopping so amazingly funny and sexy.Yeah only wiwy can do that but why are you making Khushi flat on him ...give her some back bone with real gussa and fight so she can challenge him in real way ...😆

😆 Arshi ! I know what you mean. Khushi should not be allowed to fall flat on him. Sohara used the word "lattoo'.😆 I guess shades of "lattoo" ME are being reflected in Khushi! Kya karen?!

But I have a spunky Khushi planned for the next chapter! Gussa with ASR?!😭 Will try very hard😃 Promise Arshi!😆 🤗