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Posted: 11 years ago
di superb update. Arjun ka b'day ahan. Uff but riya ki baat ne to dil tod dia arjun ka :p Annu Bhabhi ;) akhir permotion ho hi gyi :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb and beautiful chapter.
I loved it...
Sam-Annu moments were truly lovely.
Annu came to see the office.
Loved the convo between Arjun and Annu.
Ahaan...
Finally,Annu ji ka promotion hogaya.
Annu se Annu bhabi,Arjun ki Annu bhabi...
Wow...
ChoReeYa and Navika planning to celebrate Arjun's birthday,but,later on,they backed out,coz,it might hurt him.
Arjun hurt with Riya's words.
Lovely.
Continue sooonish...
PS: Like button nt working.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finaly aapki update aa gaya..yayyy..waiting from so long 😊

wah what an update didiji. Loved it. Sam Annu romance se leke Arjun Annu convo..very very well written 👏

Aww Arjun is hurt with Riya's word..yaar kuch bhi ho birthday pe kisiko akele nehi chodna chahiye.

How Arjun & Annu Bhabi"s friendship growing is realy adorable. I think this bond will help Arjun to make his life more easy. Lets see what Arjun would do after her suggestion.

Di next long update jaldi karna. I am so waiting to read Arjun's rest of the day & also Sam Annu's wedding. Once again you rocked the update. Superb, superb, superb Di 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a cute update
loved the team m their efforts.
Sam n Annu is a cute pair
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mujhe rulaaa diya ... but thanks Bhavna Di... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Bhavna di!!!! I am so sorry...I am tad late...but thanks to the flu that I caught on...I could read such a fantastic piece of work. I admit there is still a long way to go for me for I have a lot of catching up to do...but I have made up my mind that its better to read than play hoogly with nose :D Anyways I'll be back and and love you loads for giving us back our Rathod!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
read all the parts which i dont unres my comment and its really beautiful.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful bhavna
love sam n anwesha romantic chat
also the chat between arjun n anwesha it was so touching
Poor sam ka saara mood kharab ho gaya 😆😆
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Friends,

First of all a big sorry to all my dear friends. My broadband was not working since Friday and I was not able to read many updates and also update RNP and Anmol Bandhan.

And a big Thank u for being patient and commenting on this story. I was not able to reply to all of u individually but all your comments and likes are a big motivation for me which pushed me to write this long part taking out some time ditching my sweet hubby 😉
So now without anymore bakwaas here is the next Mahaepisode. Hope u all like it 😳
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Around 2:30 PM
Arjun reaches the lodge and tries to think about what Annu said and is lost in memories.
Flashback begins *
It was a day before Roshni's birthday. And Arjun wished to do something special for her. It was her first birthday after their wedding. And he planned for a romantic outing and dinner with her. While he was thinking about the place to visit, the doorbell rang. Arjun opened the door and was surprised to see his parents.

Arjun was totally confused.
They came inside and Roshni touched their feet to seek blessings and Savita hugged Roshni. Arjun also touched his parents feet.
Roshni: Aai-Baba... aap thak gaye honge... aap fresh ho jaiye... mai chai banati hoon...
Savita: theek hai beta!!
Roshni goes to the kitchen and Arjun follows her. He noticed that Roshni was not surprised to see them which meant she knew they were coming.
Arjun: Roshni... Aai Baba aaj achanak aa gaye? tumhe maaloom tha?
Roshni(while making tea): Haan... maine hi to unhe bulaya yahan...aane ko hi taiyar nahi they... kitne bahane bana rahe they...par maine bhi haar nahi maani... jaise taise emotional blackmail karke bula hi liya unhe (smiles proudly)
Arjun: Kyun? koi khaas baat?

Roshni(looks at Arjun intently): ACP Rawte... pehli baar hai isliye maaf kar rahi hoon... aagey se mat bhoolna... kal mera birthday hai... aur ye din to aapke liye khaas hona hi chahiye (winks)

Arjun(gives her a naughty smile): Mrs Rawte agar aapko lagta hai ki mai itni badi baat bhool jaunga... to aapko galat lagta hai... mujhe yaad hai... par ye baat mujhe samajh nahi aayi ki tumne apne birthday k liye Aai Baba ko bulaya... its strange...

Roshni(emotionally): Arjun... Pata hai... jab mai chhoti thi tab apna birthday apne Aai Baba ke saath celebrate karti thi... par Aai ke jaane ke baad Papa ko Assylum bhejna pada aur mai akeli reh gayi... pichhle kayi saalon se mai apne birthday par bahut akeli mehsoos karti thi... Aai Baba ko bahut miss karti thi... isliye mai chahti thi ki mere birthday par humari poori family saath ho...mai janti hoon... aap shayad mere liye kuch special plan kar rahey they... aur maine aapka plan fail karke aapko hurt kiya na? Hai na? par dekhiye na... waise to hum dono hi yaha rehtey hain... kabhi bhi akele dinner ya lunch par jaa saktey hain... par aise kuch khaas din hi to hotey hain... jab hum apne poore parivar ke saath pani khushiya baant saktey hain... aur ye khaas din bhi mai aise hi manana chahti thi... aap meri baat samajh rahey hai na? (tears well up in her eyes)

Arjun got emotional knowing her need of the family.

Arjun: Roshni... mere liye tumhari khushi badhkar aur koi cheez maayne nahi rakhti... and I promise... humari zindagi ke ye khaas din... humare birthdays and anniversaries... hum poore parivar k saath manayenge...

Next day Savita makes Roshni's favourite dishes for her and does her "Aarti". They go to temple and they go out for the dinner together with Sameer joining them.

After that, they made it sure to celebrate all their special days with their family.

Flashback ends *


His happy mind voice again comes back as Roshni.

Roshni: Kya hua ACP Rawte... Annu Bhabhi ki baato ke bare mein soch rahey ho?
Arjun:haan ... usi bare mein soch raha hoon

Roshni: to kya khayal hai?
Arjun(chuckles): arrey!! tum tto kehti ho ki tum mere dil mein ho aur mere dil ki sari baatein janti ho... to fir kyun poochh rahi ho ki kya khayal hai?

Roshni(giggles): Kya baat hai ACP!!! waise mai janti hoon ki tumhara kya khayal hai... aur mera khayal ye hai ki tumhara khayal bilkul sahi hai...
Arjun: tumhe sach mein aisa lagta Roshni ki mujhe aisa karna chahiye?

Roshni: haan Arjun... tumne mujhse Vaada kiya tha ki hum ye sarey special days apni family ke saath manayenge... par tum ye vaada bhool gaye aur isiliye Aai-Baba bhi aaj k din tumhe takleef na ho isliye wapas Kolhapur chale gaye bahana bana kar...

Arjun is sad.

Roshni: par ab jo tumhari family yaha hai... unke saath hi celebrate kar lo...

Arjun: Haan... tum sahi keh rahi ho... Maa, Papa, Sam aur Mona to hain hi... aur ab to Annu Bhabhi bhi aa gayi hain family mein...

Roshni: aur tumhari ETF family?

Arjun is startled.

Roshni: Haan... wo bhi to tumhari family hi hai... apna zyadatar waqt to unhi ke saath bitate ho... unhe mat bhoolo ...

Arjun frowns.

Roshni: kya hua?
Arjun: unhe meri kya fikar hai? wo log to mujhe akela chhod dena chatey hain?

Roshni: iski wajah?

Arjun opens his mouth to say something but stops remembering that its him who has shut himself. Its him who behave rudely with anyone who tries to come close to him, even Sameer.

Roshni: Ab chup kyun ho?

Arjun is quiet.

Roshni: waise mujhe pata hai... tumhe sabse zyada bura Riya ki baat ka laga hai...

Arjun(tries to ignore it): Aisa kuch nahi hai...

Roshni: Aisa hi hai... kyun tum is baat ko nahi maan-na chatey ki anjaane mein hi sahi... par tum dono ek dusre ko pasand karte ho... aur isiliye tumhe uski baat kadwi lagi... agar tumne usey apne kareeb aaney ka mauka diya hota to shayad wo aisa kabhi nahi kehti

Arjun(trying to defend himself): tum galat soch rahi ho...

Roshni: to fir sahi kya hai? Arjun... tum jitni jaldi is baat ko maan logey... tumhare dil ka bojh utna hi jaldi halka ho jayega...

Arjun: aisa nahi ho sakta...mujhe aisa karne ka koi haq nahi hai...
Roshni: Nahi Arjun... Wo bahut achchhi hai... aur tumhe poora haq hai aagey badhne ka... aur kya pata... shaya wohi hai jo tumhare maqsad ko paane mein tumhara saath de
Arjun is again at loss of words.

Roshni: chalo... ab mai chalti hoon... Happy Birthday !!! (she kisses him on the forehead and disappears)

Arjun opens his eyes and comes out of his trance. He freshens up.

Around 3:45 PM
Arjun leaves to lodge to go to Annu's place.

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After Arjun left Annu was a bit restless. She was not sure if she did the right thing or not.

Around 4:00 PM

Sameer came. She shared her dillemma with him.
Sameer was a bit upset with this.

Sameer(annoyed): Annu... tumhe Arjun se ye sab nahi kehna chahiye tha... tum nahi janti ... ye baat uske liye kitni sensitive hai...usey kitni takleef huyi hogi...

Annu(sad): I'm sorry Sameer... mera irada galat nahi tha... mai to bas...

Sameer(rudely): i know... tumhara irada galat nahi tha... par tumhari baaton ka Arjun par galat asar pad sakta hai...tumhe is maamle mein nahi padna chahiye tha... par galti meri hai... mujhe tumhe pehle hi bata dena chahiye tha...badi mushkil se basket baal ke bahane wo thoda normal ho raha tha... par ab mujhe darr hai kahin fir se wo un yaadon mein na chala jaaye...tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha...

Annu is hurt and is in tears.

5:00 PM

Arjun reached Annu's place and heard Sameer talking a bit rudely to Annu regarding what she said to Arjun. He rings the doorbell.

Annu quickly wipes her tears and opens the door and is surprised to see Arjun. Arjun notices the little tear droplets at the corner of her eyes and feels bad for her.

Arjun: Mai andar aa sakta hoon na Bhabhi?

Annu(coming out of shock): Huh!! haan... i'm sorry... aaiye na...

Arjun enters and Sameer is shocked to see him there but at the same time is relieved to see that Arjun was behaving normally.

Arjun glares at Sameer and Sameer is confused.

Arjun: Kitni zor se baat kar rahe they tum Bhabhi se... bahar tak awaz aa rahi thi tumhari... ye koi tareeka hua? Sorry bolo Annu bhabhi ko

Sameer(shocked): KYA?

Arjun: Annu Bhabhi ko Sorry bolo aur vaada karo ki kabhi unse unchi awaz mein bat nahi karoge...

Annu tries to interrupt Arjun but he raises her hand and gestures her to keep quiet.

Sameer(embarrassed): I'm sorry Annu... mujhe tumse is tarah baat nahi karni chahiye thi... mai aagey se dhyan rakhunga...

Annu: Its ok Sameer... apne kuch galat nahi kaha...aap apni jagah sahi they... mai hi shayad kuch galat...

Arjun(cuts her short): nahi Annu Bhabhi... aapne kuch galat nahi kiya...balki mai to yaha apko thanks kehne aur aapki help mangne aaya tha...

Sameer and Annu both are confused.

Arjun: Haan... ab mai wo karunga jo Roshni ko pasand tha... usey sarey celebrations family ke saath karna achchha lagta tha...yaad hai Sam! hum har occassion par dinner par saath jatey they.

Sameer smiles.

Arjun: Sabko inform kar do... hum Roshni ke favourite restaurant mein dinner ke liye jayenge... "Talk of the Town"

Sameer comes forward and hugs Arjun.

Sameer: tu usey bahut miss karta hai na?

Arjun: haan... aur usey khud se jodkar rakhna chahta hoon... humesha...

They part the hug.

Arjun: Mai restaurant mein booking karke aata hoon... tu Maa, Papa, Mona aur team ko inform kar de...par kisi ko ye mat batana ki ye dinner meri taraf se hai... isey teri taraf se ek get together hi batana sabko...

Sameer and Annu agree to this and Arjun leaves.

Sameer informs his parents and Mona (It's a Saturday, so Mona was at Sameer's place with their parents) and Annu calls up Riya about the dinner but they dont reveal that it is for Arjun's birthday.

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5:15 PM

Riya, Chhotu, Navika and Shree were just out of the movie when they got a Call from Annu regarding the dinner. They were onfused because Neither Annu nor Sameer told them about this plan in the morning. But they agree to it and leave for their respective places to get ready.

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Part 23 B

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Riya reaches home where Sameer is already present. Annu, Sameer and Riya were chit-chatting when Annu gets a call from hospital and she goes out to talk.

Sameer was looking for such an opportunity for long so that he can talk to Riya in private about Chhotu and Mona's love for him.

Sameer: Riya... ek baat poochhni thi tumse... tumhe shayad ajeeb lage

Riya(batting eyelashes and flashish her smile): Kya jiju... poochhiye na... (teasing him) Annu di ke bare mein poochhna hai kya?

Sameer: Nahi... Annu nahi... Chhotu ke bare mein poochhna hai...

Riya is confused.

Riya: Chhotu k barey mein? Kya?

Sameer: Tumhe Chhotu kaisa lagta hai? I mean kaisa ladka hai wo?

Riya: Achchha ladka hai... ekdum seedha saada...(smiles) aksar humare jokes ka target banta hai... par kabhi bura naih maanta...

Sameer: uski koi girlfriend hai kya? Actually kuch din pehle maine tum logo ki baatein suni thi... koi 11:30 baje wali... Bhabhi... Shree aisa kuch bol raha tha...

Riya(a bit scared remembering Chhotu's crush on Mona): Nahi... koi girlfriend nahi hai ... par aap ye sab kyun poochh rahey hain?

Sameer: Riya... wo baat aisi hai ki ... (takes a pause) samajh nahi aa raha ki kaise bataun...

Riya: Kya hua ? koi problem huyi kya?

Sameer: pata nahi Riya... ajeeb si situation hai... Mona Chhotu ko pasand karti hai... aur Chhotu ko jitna mai janta hoon wo ek bahut achchha ladka hai... aur tumne bhi uske baarey mein abhi ye hi sab kaha... to mujhe lagta hai in dono ki jodi achchhi rahegi... tumhe kya lagta hai?

Riya's eyes were ready to pop out. She couldnt believe what Sameer just said.

Annu comes and hears this.

Annu: Kya? Mona aur Chhotu?

Sameer(turns to Annu): Haan... kyun?

Annu(smiles): Achchhi jodi hai... Riya... tum batao na?

Riya was still in a shock. Annu nudges her and she comes out of the shock.

Riya: huh!!! Haan... achchhi jodi hai...

Sameer(smiles): great!!! maine Chhotu k papa ko meri aur Annu ki Shadi ka invitation bhej diya hai... agar wo shadi mein aa jayein to achchha hoga... tabhi Maa aur Papa unse baat kar lenge rishtey ki... hai na?

Annu: ohho... itni bhi kya jaldi hai... pehle ye to pata kar lo ki Chhotu Mona ko pasand karta hai ya nahi...

Sameer(a bit disappointed): haan... ye baat to sahi hai... uski marzi bhi to jaan-ni chahiye na... Riya... to pata kar sakti ho?

Riya: Don't worry sir... mai baat karti hoon.

Sameer and Annu are relieved.

Riya smiles to herself mischieviously planning to tease Chhotu.

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At 7:30 PM Everybody meet at the venue... Roshni's favourite restaurant "Talk of the Town"

Arjun looked at Riya. He was still not able to forget Riya's words. He decides to take a revenge. Of course a sweet revenge. He could never think of hurting Riya. And specially when he knew that it was himself who had created this image. He knew deep down his heart that he liked her but was reluctant to accept this as always

Everyone has a good time teasing Annu and Sameer with DSR and Suman too joining the kids in the fun.

Adding to it, Arjun teases Riya with the Annu's help. And Annu unknowingly gets involved in it and starts spilling out Riya's childhood pranks and Riya is embarrassed.

Arjun enjoyes Riya's frowns when Annu was telling about how Riya had put a cockroach in her teacher's purse, wrote a love letter addressing her teacher from a Principal of the school, used to get into fist fight with the boys of the school and many more.

Riya looked at Arjun and found him smirking at her. She was confused why Arjun did this to her. But then she knew the mood swings of the Akdu ACP.

By the end all of them realise that the get together was actually for Arjun. Team members one by one quietly wish him and he accepts their wishes before leaving.

Riya was the last one to wish him.


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Outside the restaurant.

Shree and Navika leave together.

Mona: Maa..Papa.. Bhai.. mujhe kal ofice mein thoda kaam hai... to ab mai apne flat par jati hoon...

DSR: Sunday ko bhi kaam?

Mona: Haan Papa... kuch issues resolve karne hain... mai next Friday ko aati hoon...

Suman: raat bahut ho gayi hai Mona... abhi kaise jaogi?

Mona: mai taxi se chali jaungi... dont worry

Sameer: Chhotu!!! Kya mai tumse ek favour maang sakta hoon?

Chhotu: Sir aap aisa kyun keh rahey hain... aap mujhe order kar saktey hain... ye favour ki baat mat kariye ... please

Sameer(smiles): Nahi... as ETF chief nahi... balki... ek Bhai, jisey apni behen ki safety ki chinta hai, tumse request kar raha hai... tumhara ghar Mona k ghar ke paas hi hai na? tum usey drop kar saktey ho?

Chhotu is startled.

Sameer(intently): Mai janta hoon wo tumhare saath safe rahegi... islye kaha... agar tumhe koi problem hai to rehne to...

Chhotu: aisa mat kahiye sir... mai drop kar dunga... aap fikar mat kariye...

Sameer smiles and looks at Mona.

Mona leaves with Chhotu.


Sameer: OK Arjun... good night... Mai, Maa aur Papa... Riya aur Annu ko ko drop karke ... ghar chale jayenge...

Arjun: ek min ruk... waise hi tum dono k lunch plan ki waat commissioner sir laga chuke hain... aur dinner ki maine laga di... to a kam se kam tum dono ek drive par chale jao... Maa, Papa aur Riya ko mai drop kar dunga...

Sameer and Annu look sheepishly at Suman, DSR and Riya who were already smiling in agreement to Arjun.

Sameer and Annu leave together and Arjun, Riya, Suman and DSR leave together.


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After dropping DSR and Suman. On the way to Riya's home.

Riya was still embarrassed about her teasing session in the party.

Arjun: Its OK Riya... bachpan mein sab shararat kartey hain... mai bhi karta tha... aur pakda jata tha to maar bhi padti thi...

Riya smiles and Arjun too smiles back to her. Riya feels a little comfortable but Arjun takes a chance and again starts teasing Riya with more things that Annu told him about her in the afternoon.

Riya is surprised but happy to see this change in Arjun.
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It was a beautiful drive for Shree - Navika, Chhotu - Mona, Arjun - Riya and Sameer - Annu.

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