ArHiSS:AnApateAffair#4,Ch21,Pg124,(19/07)COMPLETED

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yusam

@yusam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

hehe.. thyre sooo weird.. thy keep on saying fake-fake-fake.. n keep on doing thngs tht normal couples do!! I the likes its !! :P

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nazca

@nazca

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

To the CUTEST BANDI on the entire forum.

Edited by avcmyd - 12 years ago

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Seethu

@Seethu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Fabulous update !!! it was worth waiting !!!

They think they are in fake relationship but everything they are doing is REAL which they haven't realized it yet :)

Loved the entire outfit thing and Khushi-Arnav's reactions !!!

Arnav can't stand her tears.. that was cute :) I was surprised by Khushi on faking about Savita's absence but it worked out for best …

And the best part is the KISS .. of all fakeness , it is indeed the real one and I'm glad about the fact that Khushi initiated it !!! :)

Last but not least , the two couples are also as cute as Arshi :)

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AR_EternalLove

@AR_EternalLove

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

just loved ur update

finally khusi plan b worked..

he accepted her as sexy...

wowww

it was long update but really compensated for ur long break

pls ud soon

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

great update

she is sexy she is not sexy

she is sexy she is not sexy she is sexy finely

loved it

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Welcome back! By far, Teri Meri was the happiest moment in IPK. I remember being in a happy dazed state for a while, watching the scene over and over on my iPad and calling my sis in England. You did good with the flashback even incorporating her little manipulation scene with the crying. Hope he does not react badly to this like in the show. So they are really getting married? No more pretend? Can't wait to read your update on the collab as you are so good at the rom-com.

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

wow.. mast way of using the teri meri scene... loved it..

specially Khushi innocence of wearing such a revealing and still not seeing the way Arnav was affected.. beautiful update..

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

wow..the update reminded me of those golden days where we were crazy and punctual by 8pm in front of the tv waiting for these characters to come on screen..sigh! you make me nostalgic with your writings dear

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

What a sexy update it was with sexy talks😉
Payal's shyness & akash teasing her😳
Nk's flirting & La's as usual behaviour😆

And then the most awaited sensual dance!
Haye! I once again got totally lost in Arshi world!
It was just fabulous.

I wish you to write on that broken bangle scene & their last cute scene in the show before the snakewa hug!😃 Rest your wish!

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Sisbamboo1

@Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

The Maha update! There were so many moments in this chapter that I hope I remember everything.

First and foremost, thank you for explaining why Sarita couldn't make it to dance with Khushi. What were the CVs thinking? Your explanation is much better!

Second, haayeee Teri Meri will forever be Arnav and Khushi or all IPKKND fans. This song was molded for them. Every lyric described their relationship! Again, what were the CVs thinking when they thought no one would notice that Arnav and Khushi were practically having eye sex during that dance?

Third, the dream sequence you incorporated is one of my favorites. This Teri Meri showed their desperation for each other, the pain of being apart.

I loved it when Arnav said the dress was really sexy! So narcissistic of him 😛 Arnav Singh Raizada does not lose a challenge...except in the case of a crying Khushi. Her tears always broke him.

This is a lovely update! The mushiness was very welcome 😃