TR OS:Emptiness -Tune Mere Jaana Kabhi Nahi Jaana

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heya! my beautiful people .. how are ya ol ? Guyz .. m back with a special OS .. Last OS made ya ol cry and i was arrested for a mass crying attempt .. lolzz .. Yeh be somewhat like dat he .. So jagratai .. hehehe .. guyzz .. plzz read this .. and yea .. i'm waiting for your replies ..

This OS is dedicated to my bhai (Dracoos ) .. He loves this song very much !!


There's someone ..somewhere waiting for you !! 😛


Taarey : Emptiness


"Thak gaya hu mein Taani se .. Ab aur nahi !! Mujhe bas chutkara chahiye usse !! " A lone tear came out from her eyes ! These words were beaming in her ears .. She went still for a few minutes..Her heart was scattered into pieces like a broken mirror .. each piece reflecting several memories..She went blank .. crying, she left the rehearsal hall !


All love of mine
With a song and a wine

Rey broke down into tears after saying those harsh words ..He went weak on his knees and fell on the floor .. She was an angel .. but .. she was to be a broken angel .. all for her own good .. she was to stay away from him .. He didn't want to do that .. but .. he had to ..!! He slowly got up and started walking ..

You're harsh and divine
Like truths and a lie
Taani was crying .. She was running .. didn't know how to react .. All those things .. what he said .. those words were stabbing her .. she was feeling weak .. she was feeling broken .. There was a day when he confessed his feelings to her and there is today when he .. he just swept her out like dust! She went to the fire escape and went crying !

But the tale ends not here
I have nothing to fear
For my love is yell of giving and hold on

Rey kept on walking .. walking .. like a a broken kite .. whose string was broken .. which was floating way up in the sky .. without a direction .. without an aim .. wandering .. in the sky !! But .. still somewhere inside .. he knew .. she would come back to him for she was full of giving and love ! He had nothing to fear .. That is what he believed .. !!

In the bright emptiness

In a room full of it
Is a cruel mistress
Whoa oh!

Taani was all alone at the fire escape ..The emptiness in that room was torturing her soul ! That emptiness had more to tell !! It used to be a fantasy for her .. but now it's a cruel reality .. That single room was filled with so many broken memories now .. The chain was broken .. The beads got loose nd started to fall off .. and the girl.. She was crying .. This is what happened with her .. she was heart broken .. feeling lonely .. Their story was a beautiful chain .. made of many beautiful .. lovely .. pure beads of emotions .. and true love .. but it broke today .. it was broken .. She was enclosed in between 4 walls .. those walls which once used to bring him and her together is now making her a prisoner .. a prisoner of love !! Her confession .. their first hug .. the passion and intensity .. she could not take it any more ..

I feel this unrest
That nest all hollowness
For I have nowhere to go and I'm cold.

Rey entered the projector room .. that room too had many memories !! It was like a cage that contained many mysteries .. only those .. who were in love had the key to it .. the key to the pure and true love !! Those memories .. which he wanted to leave behind him were putting him in a test again .. He was in a state of self interrogation .. He asked .. asked .. and kept on asking .. "Did I do what i was supposed to do ? .. Was it the right decision .. ?? .." Questions came .. one after another .. he was feeling empty .. He felt unrest .. that empty room .. had many secrets within .. He remembered all those times when there used to be a lap for him to cry .. a person to give him the strength .. help him make the right decisions .. Taani .. Aal the answers kept on giving out the same name .. Taani .. But now .. he was all alone .. he had nowhere to go .. no place to rest his head and let out his tears .. no one to support him .. He was left in a state of confusion !!

And I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness

Taani .. wiped her tears .. and decided .. she decided to forget and move on .. She thought .. there is something .. something better than this emptiness !! She should move on !! But still .. something kept on pulling her back ..She kept a stone on her emotionally driven heart and confused mind!! She took her bag and came out of the fire escape .. and kept on moving ..moving on and on .. like a wanderer !!


And I'm so lonely yeah...

There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!

Rey came out of the trance .. He knew he lost everything today .. he was empty now .. he was like the sea without water .. the sky without clouds and a Rey without Taani !!

He kept his feelings aside and tried to get over it with the hope that what he did was right .. What he did will one day make her happy .. make him happy ..make them happy!! He moved out .. like a a bird with a broken wing .. crept outside the projector room and moved forward without an aim !!

Both Taani and Rey came face to face .. they were alone at the college verandah !!

Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera, haaye!

Taani kept on looking into his eyes .. she was not able to understand what was going on him .. he left her with many questions unanswered .. Her Rey .. who promised to be with her always .. left her .. They were standing there like strangers ..

Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera

Rey looked at his Taani .. Her eyes were swollen .. It was clear that she had been crying .. she was looking pale .. still when the wind caressed her hair .. when the wind played with her hair .. she had that elegant look .. she was looking like a goddess .. the only thing that was missing was her smile .. He unknowingly moved his hand towards her face .. and kept her hair aside ..

Aashiq tera
Bhid me khoya rehta hai, jaane jahaan
Poocho to itna kehta hai

His touch was enough to make her shiver .. a current passed through her spine ..She moved her hand towards her face and placed it upon his palm .. still lost in each others eyes .. a chain of good and bad memories passed between them!! Their confession .. a smile crept down through their faces and a lone tear accompanied it .. and at the end .. what Rey told about her today!! She came out of the trance quickly .. and gave him a final look .. she removed his hand from her face and .. and ... left him ...

That I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness

Both of them felt lonely !! Both of them felt incomplete .. They were completely devastated .. still put on a fake smile and moved on !!


And I'm so lonely yeah
There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!


Jodis are made by god in the heavens.. they're bonded by love .. and angels are sent down to complete their loves stories.

Someone somewhere is waiting for you !!


~Fin~


Taarey OS - Bin Tere! 😛 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3468872


Edited by Itz.Me.Charleen - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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maana padega tujhe...
exam ke time pe OS likti hai... 😆
and hate you so muchh cuz i had decided ki aaj iss forum pe hi nahi aana...
but u didnt allow me do dat..huh!

but coming to the OS...
hayeee..i love that sonnggg 😳
and perfect fit to the situation...
it was jus soo amazingg!
all d emotions and everythin...
jus soo perfect...
loveedd it... ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww my sweet little darling sister 🤗 🤗🤗 ❤️ ,
it was really a heart touching , and very emotional story 😭
😭 u wrote it really so so so beautifully , 😭

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and song was also suiting it perfectly ,
i love it 2 d core 🤗
🤗 muahhh muahhh muahhh gudiya ,
Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oww such an emotional os vry well written :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey charli..nice os..well written...luvd it😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW JUST PERFECT THE SONG PERFECTLY SUITS THE SITUATION N THE EMOTIONALS N ALL R REALLY SUPERBUR REALLY A SWEET HEART DEAR...LOVE U FOR THIS MUHAVA...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unress...

omg!!! ye gaana!!!
thats my favourite!!!
n tune uspe OS likh daala!!!
kya likha h re... amazing and awesome!!
ek ek word symbolize karta h...

woah!!! wait!! tere exams hai na?? tune OS likha?!!
hadd hai re... aap mahan hai... hehe lazians ka naam mat kharaab karo...
hehe love you yaar!! seriously bohot mast likha hai...
and main nahi roi... 😃

🤗🤗
Edited by toshi_ta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os
beautifully written loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aaj Kya Rulane Ka Din Hai ... San Ki Storis Pad-Pad Ke either Khushi Se Ro rahi Hun yaa Phir dukh Se ... Aapki OS bahut Hi zyada touching thi and Emotions were expressed so beautifully chahe woh confusion ho yaa anger yaa Dukh everything was just amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Charl is so beautiful, u wrote an awesome OS...

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