MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #10 EPILOGUE PG 40 - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

216

Views

49.6k

Users

90

Likes

982

Frequent Posters

Ash1991 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Superb update...
Loved it alot...
Finally maan successful in gaining geets trust...beautiful update...hope now everything is good good...
Waiting fr next part...
Tyro thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#72
their understanding only increases with time...
MystiqueDew thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#73
lovely .. Beautifully written !!!
luvu4ever143 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#74
awesum update..
loved it..
song sequence is so beautiful..
Wat step are u talking about..
continue soon..
piya- thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Updating in few minutes 😃
Madhuri53 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#76
lovely part
finally they are again coming close
beautiful update
piya- thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next update its a BIG UPDATE hope you'll will enjoy reading it. FF ending in 2 more updates followed by Epilogue 😳

PART 61

With a smile on their face Maan once again scooped Geet in his arms and started walking downstairs

His paradise got the divine touch of beautiful colors as Geet rested her head on his chest' INDEED THIS WAS THE BEST CHAPTER IN THE BOOK OF THEIR BITTER SWEET LOVE STORY

The breeze sang the tunes of pure love and declared

He lived in her eyes and she was the light of his life

He lived in her soul and her name was imprinted in every beat of his heart

He lived in her dreams and she was the first ray of hope in his life

They were different yet no one could separate them as TRUE LOVE FINDS IT'S WAY THROUGH ALL ODDS'

*****

Naintara's operation was a success but like the doctor had mentioned more than the treatment it was Maan's conversation with Naintara that had worked wonders on her condition

Geet felt proud and honoured to love a man who had changed to such an extent that he could give a new hope and a new life to a person who was wishing to welcome her last breath

Once Naintara was conscious Maaneet go to meet her and like Maan Geet too forgave her for her past deeds and wished her a speedy recovery

The loss of her biggest possession "HER BEAUTY" had taught Naintara the lesson of her life; she was genuinely sorry for her deeds and kept on asking for forgiveness

It was only sometime later that Maaneet were successful in getting Naintara out of this self guilt feeling

Maaneet's relationship kept on getting stronger and together they took full care of Naintara who was now one of their very good friends

After few weeks Naintara went to America for further medical treatment leaving Maaneet with wishes of a happy life wherein every dream that they weave would only be blessed with the divine touch of reality

Prem and Sanju also shared a healthy bond with Maan but not even once did they make this truth evident in front of Maaneet that the whole plan of forcing Maaneet to live under the same roof was theirs.

While playing cupid in Maaneet's love story Sanju didn't realize when she had fallen head over heels in love with Prem; she didn't want to lose Prem's friendship hence she never dared to voice the feelings of her heart in front of her Mr. Richie Rich

Maaneet's life had taken a beautiful transition Geet had once again started to laugh and enjoy every moment of her life wholeheartedly

Every day every moment was an unforgettable memory for Geet as Maan would leave no stone unturned to make her smile infact Maan had rewritten their past with the colors of her dream in such a beautiful way that Geet realized today in every true sense she was becoming complete

His small ways of bestowing the shower of love and care on her or his protective embrace that would captivate her the moment she was about to land in any trouble would make her feel as the queen of universe

The moon which was her most loyal friend shined and danced joyfully with the cushion of clouds and the twinkle of the stars giving a divine blessing to her beautiful innocent dreams

Maan had become so protective about his Geet that he wouldn't even allow tears of happiness to flush her face. He would fulfill every desire of her heart even before she could give words to her wishes.

In short he had made Geet his life and the sole reason of every breath of his'

One fine day,

Geet had a very hectic schedule infact she was shooting for 2 movies back to back without getting a considerable break

Maan was equally busy but a month prior itself he had made it clear that this particular day he won't be going in for any shooting and this day will be an official leave for him

Today was the 5th Friendship anniversary of Maaneet and Maan wanted to dedicate this day only to one girl the lady of his life HIS GEET and hence he was utilizing every second of the passing moments to arrange a special surprise for her

He started to decorate every room as per Geet's liking; the floor adorned a carpet of many rose petal layers

Maan used diyas to make a special arrangement in between the room where he wrote a very special name of Geet that only he knew till date

There was a teasing smirk on his face as he wrote the last letter of Geet's special name

The basic arrangements were over but now the main tension was remaining and that was preparation of a special dish that would mark the importance of this occasion in Maaneet's life

Maan looked at his ring as he recollected Geet's words from the past before going to the kitchen to experiment with his cooking skills inorder to make that one special delicacy for Geet that he knew would flood her heart with a never ending happiness

Maan kept Geet's photo in front of his eyes as he continued to prepare his very special dish for HIS GEET

Maan's concentration was disturbed by a phone call. Maan answered the call it was from his secretary who informed him that a big Hollywood director wanted to meet him for his upcoming flick immediately

This was one of the biggest opportunities that Maan had got till date. The director was considered to be the best in Hollywood and it was indeed every actor's dream to play the lead in his movies

Maan requested his secretary to fix another day for their meeting but this was not possible according to his secretary as the director was returning back to his country the very next day

If it would have been any other person he wouldn't have left this golden opportunity but Maan was in no mood to keep anything above Geet and hence without giving a second thought Maan straight away declared his decision that he is not available for the meeting today and he requested his secretary to apologize for his unavailability to the director

Before his secretary could speak another word Maan declared his firm decision by simply ending the call and got back with his preparations without any further delay

Many media journalists had visited Maan's set that day and they had realized that Maan was on leave. This was a good opportunity for them to take a detailed interview of Maan especially when he was nominated in most of the categories of a prestigious award function

They tried to contact Maan but Maan simply kept his phone on silent mode as he was in no mood to divert his attention

He just wanted to arrange a simple yet heart touching surprise for his princess

He kept on ignoring the journalist's call and put his heart and soul in making this day special for his Geet

It was finally evening; almost time for Geet's arrival

Maan lighted the diya arrangement which had the special name of Geet written and started waiting for his lady's arrival eagerly

Meanwhile,

Geet was very badly stuck in her shooting; she had to give extra hours of shoot due to a technical problem on the sets and hence was unable to return on time

Besides this it was pouring cats and dogs and hence inspite of her best efforts Geet was unable to contact Maan and tell him about her late arrival

The wheel of time continued to roll' the oil in the diyas had also lost hope to embrace Geet's glowing face in its embrace; the flowers had also lost their enthusiasm to glorify their beauty with the touch of Geet's angelic fragrance

BUT A PAIR OF EYES WERE STILL ALIVE IN THE HOPE TO WELCOME ITS SPECIAL MOONLIGHT

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_XXRn-27T7A

Music

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte tere bina kya wajood mera'.

Maan:

"The leaves might reject to get tickled from the cool embrace of the breeze

A flower might blossom which would hate to dance on the romantic notes of the bees

The sun might shine and would hate the presence of its beams

The moon might try to escape from the crazy touch of the cloud's tease

Hope might die; the world might end

But without u I wouldn't dream of stepping into heaven

Oh beloved! Life may finish death might arrive but till eternity the hope to embrace u in my arms will survive

I will await your presence till the last rhythm of my breath

I will await your bliss till the thread of my life gets stretched

Destiny might be cruel fate might get depressed

But till eternity my love for u will continue to remain boundless"

His soul searing promise was gifted by the blessing of Almighty as the breeze carried the message of Geet's arrival with it


Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte tere bina kya wajood mera

Tujhse judaa gar ho jaayenge toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Geet was late and hence she was expecting Maan to sleep; she used her spare keys to enter the flat. As soon as she kept her first step inside the arena she knew something very special was bound to happen in the coming moments

Her awestruck eyes got a mesmerizing twinkling glint with the breathtaking diya arrangement that was glorifying the beauty of the room

Her heart skipped a beat when she read "THE SPECIAL NAME" and like a person who had lost the count of her breath Geet continued to approach that area with spellbound captivation

Voice choked in her throat and tears of happiness threatened to flood her face with a moisturizing tickle when two sooting and comforting arms marked its signature touch on her belly making her completely intoxicated and drugged in the shower of love

Kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi mera dard bhi meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Maan allowed his lips to tease the earlobe of Geet as he whispered huskily

Maan: Happy 5th friendship anniversary "MAAN KI SHAAYARI" [Maan's Poetry]

The spacious canvas of the sky would have fallen short to enclose Geet's happiness in its limit such was the overwhelming joy that Geet's heart was experiencing right now

She rested her head on Maan's chest as Maan once again called her "Maan's shaayari" which made her to recollect their initial days of friendship wherein Maan used to tease her by calling her "SHAAYARI" coz of her love for poems and Geet used to tell him how she wished that a day would arrive in their life that Maan would refer her as "MAAN KI SHAYARI" not for teasing but out of love'


Music


A tear drop crossed the boundaries of Geet's eyes and kissed Maan's hand innocently. Maan turned Geet in his direction and lifted her face with utmost love by holding her chin and whispered

Maan: Shaayari didn't u like the surprise?

Geet couldn't get hold of her sentiments and she crushed Maan in a soul searing hug and the only words that made way through her petals was

Geet: I am sorry Maan

Maan: Sorry? For what?

Geet: I forgot such an important day of our life and ruined the beauty of this moment by arriving late. I am so sorry Maan I couldn't complete the colors of this beautiful dream on the day it was weaved'I am'

Maan placed his finger on her lips and silenced her by nodding his head

Maan: I had just laid down an empty canvas Geet but by accepting it u filled the everlasting colors of loyality in this moment. How can this dream be incomplete when both of us are here holding the ends of it securely?

Geet: But I am late Maan'it's already the next day I '

Maan: Geet 10 minutes are still there before the clock strikes 12. Why should we waste this time in some baseless guilt when we can dedicate this precious phase to each other's name?

Geet could only give an assuring smile to Maan after hearing his heartfelt confession

Maan placed his palm on Geet's eyes and took her to the room wherein he had placed his SPECIAL DISH for Geet

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa ek pal dur gawara nahi

The charismatic light of the candles failed to match the heavenly glow on Geet's face when she saw the simple yet special arrangements that Maan had done for her

It was Geet's wish to have an ice-cream date with Maan on their 5th friendship anniversary and Maan had not only fulfilled this wish but had given a characteristic feeling of oneness to this occasion by preparing the ice-cream with his own hands

Geet could die million deaths inorder to safeguard the purity of this blissful moment


Tere liye har roz hai jeete tujhko diya mera waqt sabhi

Maan placed his hand in front of her eyes and without any delay Geet allowed the beauty of her love to slip in his folds. Together both of them took the spoon and got hold of a small part of the ice-cream

With a feeling that reflected unconditional and pure love Maan took the spoon towards Geet's lips and requested her to taste the first bite of this special dish

Geet succumbed to his request happily and allowed the flavor of his love to beautify the glory of her heart

There was a mischievious smirk on Geet's face as she continued to taste the depth of this delectable surprise of Maan. Maan caught hold of her naughty mood and in a teasing way requested Geet to feed him a part of the ice-cream with her own hand

It seemed Geet was waiting for this opportunity and without a second's delay she took a whole spoonful of Maan's special experimental dish and introduced it in the folds of his mouth

Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina har saas mein naam tera'

Maan's loving expression took a turn of a horrified shock when he realized that his so called ice cream had only lumps of ice in it and nothing else

Geet's musical laughter was resonating in the whole flat on seeing Maan's horrified shocked expression

Maan lost his entire self in this one laughter of his poetry; he held her waist and brought her close forcing Geet's heart to pulsate at an abnormal pace

Their lips were very close; his warm breath was caressing her sensitive nape shamelessly' it was a perfect kissing moment when Geet did the unexpected by taking the entire bowl of the so called icecream and introduced it inside Maan's shirt

Maan was dancing like a man falling short of ideas and was just about to catch Geet when she escaped his grip and ran outside in the garden. Geet had awakened the naughty side of Maan he removed his shirt in a go and ran after Geet to give her a tit for a tat

Kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi mera dard bhi meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

The moment Maan stepped in the garden it seemed he had entered a paradise wherein an innocent angel was dancing and flying with her newly found wings of love'

Completely lost in this captivating spell Maan continued to approach his Geet; she knew her life was approaching her and this was what she desired

She adorned her palms with the pearls of raindrops and as soon as Maan declared his arrival she playfully sprinkled the fragrance of her innocent happiness on the man of her life

But the very next moment she herself got intoxicated with the burning passion that was melting every inch of her soul slowly but steadily

She wanted to be complete yes this was what she wanted; it was neither attraction nor the need of the hour but all she wished was to once again become Maan's Geet from her heart and soul

Geet ornamented Maan's neck with the beauty of her arms and allowed the shower of love to bestow its magical spell on them. Yes their lips were approaching one another' his breaths were warm, her soul was desperate' Her throat was dry and his passion was raw' her trembling petal was just about to enter the paradise of his signature mark when a loud thundering sound forced them to leave their dream incomplete even before it could raise to the heights of glory

Music

Maan felt guilty as he never wanted to force himself on Geet his love had turned so innocent that he failed to notice that Geet was ready to make him a part of her life all over again

Without giving a thought Maan scooped Geet in his arms and carried her back to her room. Geet kept on admiring his face and was successful in reading the silent chapters of guilt that was trying to imprison him

Maan requested Geet to change her attire and went to get hot milk for both of them. Geet allowed him to go as she loved this caring and totally transformed part of her man.

After sometime when Maan entered geet's room with the milk he was scared to see a trembling Geet in front of him

Geet had not changed her outfit and coz of getting drenched in rain she had caught a terrible cold. Maan immediately went and hugged Geet with all his love.

Tere liye hi jeeya main khudko jo yub de diya hai

It was finally time to bestow the power of his true love on his Geet. Maan switched off all the lights of Geet's room and once again cocooned her in his protective embrace. It seemed he was taking her permission before going ahead with his mission

Geet drank her saliva as Maan pulled down the zip of Geet's top. The flawless beauty of her spine was shining majestically in the serene light of the moon. She dug her fingers on Maan's shoulder as her whole body was set ablaze when Maan gracefully pulled down her attire from her mesmerizing form making her appear like a delicate angel who was cocooned gracefully in the petals of a charming bliss

Maan caressed Geet's back with a touch that defined pure love. He massaged Geet's cheek with his rough stubble and tried to divert his attention as he allowed his fingers to travel the boundary of her feminine beauty to relieve her chest with the burden of her bra


Teri wafa ne mujhko samala

Saare gamo ko dil se nikala

Fire was set to water when Geet crushed Maan in a tight embrace as soon as her upper beauty became relieved from all the unwanted burdens. She kept on pulling Maan closer and gifted him with a soft passionate chest kiss but Maan's love was far more superior to any wild manly desires of his

He didn't stop Geet from showing her prowess and authority on him but at the same time he didn't allow himself to cross the purity of their divine bond

As soon as Maan undressed Geet without breaking the hug he took her to the bed and placed her on top of it in such a way that her back faced his face

He covered her lower beauty with the satin soft layers of bed spreads upto her waist. He brought warm water and a soft cloth with him and started giving Geet a perfect warm back massage

Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda

Tujhe paake adhura na raha'.

Geet's heart melted with this gesture of Maan as she realized both of them were in a vulnerable position but today the love of Maan had reached such a level that she was all that he dreamt and desired' SHE NEW THAT TODAY IN EVERY TRUE SENSE MAAN HAD MADE HER THE MOST PRICESSLESS POSSESION OF HIS LIFE'

He could risk his life for her but would never do anything that would taint the beauty of their worshipped relationship

Maan turned Geet and closed his eyes before giving her the chest massage' Everytime Geet moaned his name Maan's promise to safeguard her dignity became stronger

Kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi mera dard bhi meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

The night continued to be the sole witness of this beautiful dream of a couple that had fought destiny to get bound by the thread of divinity' Today they had proved that physical intimacy can never be the only way to shower love'if love is true then u can find your paradise by imply getting drowned in the oceanic eyes of your beloved'

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho'

Maan dressed up Geet in a dry outfit once he was done with the hot body massage and later on he allowed his chest to become the private pillow of his Poetry once she was in deep sound sleep'

Maan was unable to find the correct words to tell Geet the importance of her in his life'. He simply narrated his poem all over again with a rare hope that atleast one word of his heart gets imprinted in the soul of his beloved'

Maan:

"The leaves might reject to get tickled from the cool embrace of the breeze

A flower might blossom which would hate to dance on the romantic notes of the bees

The sun might shine and would hate the presence of its beams

The moon might try to escape from the crazy touch of the cloud's tease

Hope might die; the world might end

But without u I wouldn't dream of stepping into heaven

Oh beloved! Life may finish death might arrive but till eternity the hope to embrace u in my arms will survive

I will await your presence till the last rhythm of my breath

I will await your bliss till the thread of my life gets stretched

Destiny might be cruel fate might get depressed

But till eternity my love for u will continue to remain boundless"

Maan: I LOVE U MAAN KI SHAYARI'

These were the last words that Geet's heart heard before the love birds allowed the magic of the night to embrace them completely in its folds'

*****

Sunbeams were bestowing a twinkling sparkle on the mesmerizing curtains of the world's most breathtaking eyes. The morning dew was dancing to the tunes of the rhythmic breeze and was gently singing a song in the delicate ear drums of an angelic beauty in an attempt to embrace her in the shield of a warm morning.

As soon as Geet opened her eyes she found a rose along with the morning paper next to her bed side

The sound of utensils from the kitchen made Geet aware of Maan's new breakfast experiment

With a smile on her face Geet kissed the rose and took the newspaper only to see the most shocking headlines of the day

The newspaper had bashed and mocked Maan very badly and was preaching a message that success had gone on top of Maan's head as he considers media and top Hollywood directors not even worth of the dust of his shoes

A detailed report of Maan ignoring the media calls and rejecting the Hollywood director's meeting was printed in the newspaper with the addition of pepper and salt.

As soon as Maan entered Geet's room with the breakfast he got scared on seeing the depressed look on her face

He went and sat besides her and understood her unsaid words by simply looking at the newspaper

Geet: Maan u got a once in a life time opportunity yesterday and u rejected it just'

Before geet could say any further thing Maan silenced her by cupping her face with loads of love

Maan: Nothing is more precious to me than your smile Geet. These offers are worthless in front of the divinity of those moments that appear like a holy prayer to me when u r by my side' SILENCE CAN ALSO TAKE THE FORM OF PRECIOUS PEARLS IF BOTH OF US ARE TOGETHER then why should I destroy the epicness of such moments by running behind such unnecessary things?

Today Maan had successfully climbed the second last step in Geet's quality list' Maan had understood THE BEAUTY OF RELATIONSHIPS today'

Geet found no reason to stop herself ' without a moment's delay Geet wrote the happiness of her heart on the lips of Maan that worshipped her name and what followed was a soul searing and a breathtaking kiss that defined a life time promise of eternity'

PRECAP 1: Maan: I wanted to be her man but'😲 😭

PRECAP 2: Geet: Tu mujhe chod jaaye ye nahi ho saktha saathiya' meri baato mein tera zikr sadaa, meri yaado mein teri fikr sadaa, main jobhi hoon tum hi toh ho mujhe tumse mili apni adaa' 😭 😳

PLS PRESS D LIKE BUTTON N DO COMMENT

ALL THOSE WHO WANT A PM ADD ME TO UR BUDDY LIST

Love- Divya (aka Piya)

Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
bokul thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Master Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#78
beautiful and outstanding update piya...u write so well ⭐️
gill123 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Just loved it but precap se dar lag raha hai waiting 4 next
Syed695 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Awesome and beautifully written...Superb..waiting for next n Thnks for the PM..!

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

3 months ago

Aradhana & Reyaansh SS : Na Jaane Kyun (last chp + epilogue pg 3)

COVER BY AISHWARYA (Mystic_Muse) SUMMARY Suzanne Miller , an Indian Origin Canadian Citizen adopted by the Miller family, who goes on a quest to...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".