MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #10 EPILOGUE PG 40 - Page 13

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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the LAST UPDATE of this FF 😳 I have put my heart and soul in penning down this part pls give me big and detailed comments for one LAST TIME 😳

LAST PART

Geet: Maan u got a once in a life time opportunity yesterday and u rejected it just…

Before Geet could say any further thing Maan silenced her by cupping her face with loads of love

Maan: Nothing is more precious to me than your smile Geet. These offers are worthless in front of the divinity of those moments that appear like a holy prayer to me when u r by my side… SILENCE CAN ALSO TAKE THE FORM OF PRECIOUS PEARLS IF BOTH OF US ARE TOGETHER then why should I destroy the epicness of such moments by running behind such unnecessary things?

Today Maan had successfully climbed the second last step in Geet's quality list… Maan had understood THE BEAUTY OF RELATIONSHIPS today…

Geet found no reason to stop herself … without a moment's delay Geet wrote the happiness of her heart on the lips of Maan that worshipped her name and what followed was a soul searing and a breathtaking kiss that defined a life time promise of eternity…

*****

After few days,

It was finally time for the most prestigious award function to make its presence felt in the world of glamour

This award ceremony was one of its kinds as it was a union of both Hollywood and Bollywood celebrities

Many unique categories which were unsaid and unheard of till date were being introduced in this event for the first time; the importance and expectations of this event were so high that it was being telecasted live on all big channels throughout the world

Adi and Brad had also flown down to Mumbai to attend this event

Prem was stuck up in a business meet and hence was late by few minutes

As he entered the venue he overheard Sanju's telephonic convo

Sanju: Yes Mom I have decided to return back to US; tonight is my last day of stay in India.

Prem was shocked to the core. It seemed as if someone had snatched his breath away from him

Sanju: Everything is perfectly fine in Geet and Maan's life I am sure very soon the last loose thread of their relationship will also get strengthened. I don't think there will be any reason for me to wait in India after this.

The thought of losing Sanjana itself send shivers down Prem's spine. He could not afford to lose her at any cost…

Without a moment's delay Prem went and placed his hand on Sanju's shoulder and confessed

Prem: What if I give u a reason to stay?

Sanju was surprised as she hadn't expected Prem to be here right now

Before Sanju could give any answer Prem went on his knees and continued

Prem: I won't hide anything from u Sanjana; u very well know that I was head over heels in love with Geet right from our first meet but to be honest for me the definition of true love started and ended on Geet's happiness and her happiness and her paradise was Maan

Prem: Never in my wildest of imaginations had I thought to experience the beautiful bliss of drowning in love anytime in this life again but destiny proved me wrong

Sanju's heart beats were running at a rapid pace as she continued to listen to Prem's words

Prem took Sanju's hand in his folds and locked her eyes with his in an innocent ocean of true and pure love

Prem: U entered my life as the ray of new hope; you made me laugh when the showers of grief were at its glorious best; u held my hand when I was lost on lonely paths … U made me fall in love with love all over again with your innocence Sanjana I have only one reason to make u stay here with me and the reason is a promise that has arised straight from the core of my heart….

Prem: A PROMISE TO LOVE U UNCONDITIONALLY TILL THE LAST BREATH OF MY LIFE

Sanju's heart skipped a beat as Prem confessed his feelings for her in a simple yet soul searing way

Prem: A PROMISE TO SAFEGUARD U IN THE FOLDS OF MY HEART SECURELY WITH THE COCOON OF TRUE AND PURE LOVE

Prem removes the ring that Sanjana had seen days before while they were going for Geet's success party

Sanju was surprised to see the same ring in front of her eyes right now

Prem: I love u Sanjana. Will u marry me and bless my destiny by making me a part of your life?

Sanjana declared her love for Prem by simply submitting herself completely in his folds

Words died a silent death as love allowed the hearts to speak

An innocent story of Maaneet's friends had finally reached a perfect conclusion

Maaneet's relationship had rekindled in a beautiful way but still something was missing; a small yet integral thread was still lying alone with its loose ends hoping to be tied in an unbreakable knot…

*****

Sanjana and Prem joined Maaneet, Adi and Brad in the hall

The award ceremony started in a magnificent way. Brad, Adi, Geet and Maan won numerous awards at the function

The different and unique nominations were a delight for each person who was a part of this ceremony tonight

One such unique nomination was "THE IDEAL MAN" award

The hall started resonating with a loud applause as the name of the winner who bagged this title was announced it was none other than MAAN SINGH KHURANA…

As Maan walked onto the stage to collect his award something started to prick his heart very badly … it seemed his conscience was asking him a question are u really AN IDEAL MAN?

He moved his eyes towards Geet who was declaring her happiness by clapping her hands joyfully and he knew the answer without a second's doubt

The presenter presented him his award but with a simple smile on his face Maan moved towards the mike to voice the biggest truth of his life

Maan: Before accepting this award I would like to narrate something in front of everyone.My words might appear strange but in every aspect of comparision it is just going to be a simple yet bitter truth

There was pin drop silence in the hall with this one declaration of Maan

Maan: "An Ideal Man" sounds good isn't it? It would be an honour for any man to bag this title but I have a question in my mind. What are the criterias on the basis of which this title can be bestowed?

Maan: In our glamour world this title is adorned with the fake colors of popularity, outstandingly good looks, killer and charming personality along with a deadly combination of breathtaking attitude

The presenter nodded his head in approval and agreed with Maan's words

Maan: These qualities look appealing yet they have a mask of fakeness in them and today I disapprove to be a part of any fakeness as my outlook and my definition of living life has changed

All of a sudden the mood of the entire audience turned serious

Maan: Let me take this opportunity to tell the definition of a perfect man through the innocent eyes of a special angel

Maan moved his eyes towards Geet

Maan: She never dreamt of worldly riches but she weaved a dream of a mesmerizing bond of trust that her man would cherish and safeguard throughout their journey

Maan: I was the man who destroyed and crushed her trust even before it could get the wings of colorful feathers. I was the one who ignited the fire of doubt to dig the grave of a bond that was purer than a holy prayer … How can a man be perfect when he does not possess the potential to protect his most cherished relationship from the storms of uncertainity?

Maan: Her love was a temple and her man was her worship; her feelings were so divine that she chanted his name selflessly in every prayer of hers…she only knew to give and in return she never expected anything from him

Maan: I only knew to snatch. Her happiness; her wishes were never important to me. I was drowned in my selfishness to such an extent that I used her deepest pain as a stepping stone for my success. How can a man be perfect when the pearls dripping from the eyes of the lady who is actually his biggest possession seems worthless to him?

Maan: She had captured the beauty of a blissful paradise in the folds of her UNCONDITIONAL TRUE LOVE. Every word of his was like the words of Almighty to her such was the divinity of every beat of her heart that took his name

Maan: I tainted the beauty of her love by playing a FAKE LOVE GAME with her just to maintain the popular streak of fame that I enjoyed. I destroyed the sanity of a beautiful bond called marriage by making it a publicity stunt. How can a man be perfect when he happily sacrifies the life of his soulmate in the ruthless flames of self supremacy?

Maan: She knew the language of his breaths; she knew she would be ruined if she continued to hold his thorn studded hands yet she continued to hold his hands in a tight grip like a LOYAL soulmate

Maan: I never gave any importance to the words she spoke I made a mockery of her submission towards me by stabbing her heart with the knife of deceit. She didn't leave my hand but I didn't give a second thought before opening my grip and leaving her alone to face the world when she required me the most. How can a man be perfect when he dances in the rain that has the colors of his lady's bleeding heart in it?


Maan: The chapters of my life were a blessing coz of her presence but I sprinkled a poisonous curse on it by tearing every page that had her sunshine smile imprinted on it… I not only broke her heart but I tampered with the pieces of her soul… I am ashamed of myself today as I was the one who was wrong in our entire journey…

Tears were making way through Geet's eyes

Maan: This is the real identity of Maan Singh Khurana that was hidden behind the veil of popularity, fame and success. Today I was able to remove this mask and show the real devilish tinge that I once possessed in front of the whole world just because of my angel's love…

Maan moved his eyes towards Geet and confessed

Maan: Her love gave me the strength to become a better human being; I got the power to open the blindfold of deceit, selfishness and fakeness due to the prayers of her love… Yet something is missing as the truth remains the same SHE WAS ALWAYS THERE WITH ME EVEN WHEN I LEFT HER HAND BUT I WAS NEVER THERE WITH HER EVEN WHEN I HELD HER HAND

Maan stopped for a second before continuing

Maan: I wish I could change the past then maybe we could have dreamt of a better future

Maan: I wish I could tell her that in the true relations of the heart's world all I want to see is her name

Maan: On every page of my fate during my life after my death I wished she could be mine

Maan: I wished I could reduce half my joys and smiles to stop that one tear drop from rolling down her cheek

Maan: I wished we are never separated not even for the sake of saying

Maan: She is the path of my life I wished I could remain hers only

Maan: I WISHED TO BE HER MAN but today I realize she is an angel who deserves someone better…

Maan: I love u and will continue to do so till eternity but…


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Tu mujhe chhod jaaye
Yeh nahi ho sakta saathiya


These were the last words that Maan spoke before he walked down the stage leaving behind his fame, his popularity just to maintain the beauty of the one relationship that he worshipped

Today by accepting his mistakes in front of the whole world he had defamed himself at his own will; but at the same time; he had returned the honor and respect of Geet back and had made her realize the depth of love that he possessed for her

Not even once had he taken her name during the entire conversation; to make her stand tall he had happily bowed down… today in every true sense Geet's love had emerged victorious.



Meri baaton mein tera zikra sadaa
Meri yaad mein teri fikra sadaa
Main jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho
Mujhe tum se mili apni adaa


Maan's advancing steps were forced to stand still when he heard Geet's one innocent statement

Geet: I was there for u when u didn't need my presence; u were there for me when I tried to walk away from u…our story was incomplete as both of us were never together… I don't know whom I deserve but if today destiny grants me a wish all I would say is I WANT TO LEAD THE REST OF MY LIFE BY RESTING MY HEAD AND HOLDING THE HANDS OF THE MAN WHO LOVES ME MORE THAN I LOVE HIM…

Geet: I wish to be Maan's Shaayari all over again not only in this life but in all the upcoming lives of mine…

Geet held her hand in front and continued

Geet: Maan can we complete our love story by holding each other's hands throughout our journey? Will u bless me with the happiness to be called Maan's Geet or will u snatch away my paradise by stepping out and leaving me in the folds of death all over again?


Kyun ki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

This one statement of Geet was enough to make Maan realize the strength of their relationship

He opened his arms wide and welcomed Geet to enter the paradise of THEIR LOVE

Leaving aside the whole world; without any further delay Geet ran towards Maan's direction and hugged him with a passion of blissful pure love that could defeat every blessing of the universe in no time… such was the beauty of this reunion of two hearts that always shared the same heartbeat


Tum hi ho, tum hi ho
Karz bhi, mera marz bhi..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Geet kissed Maan all over his face as if thanking destiny to bless her with the love of her dream in the most beautiful way she had ever dreamt of

The entire hall rose to its feets and started applauding in happiness on seeing the beautiful reunion of these two love birds

Adi, Prem and Sanju found it difficult to get hold of their overwhelming joy the trio went and gave a group hug to their friends and took the level of happiness to a new height

Music

Maan had designed a very special mandap to mark the importance of their D day. Adi and Prem had also helped him lots by making his dream surprise for Geet a reality

2 days later,

Geet was walking down the aisle adorned beautifully in a bridal wear. The glow and the sunshine blush on her face was far more superior than the shine of the precious pearls that were decorating her beautiful form

As soon as she reached the last step she found herself in the embrace of a loving dream… her Maan was there to lead her safely to the place where all their dreams were just about to take the form of mesmerizing reality

The mandap had a very different appearance there was a small passageway that opened into the area where the holy fire was ignited

It seemed there was something hidden about the decor that was still not evident in front of Geet



Tere liye hi jiya main Khud ko jo yun
De diya hai

The priest gave the garlands to Maaneet and requested them to go ahead with the Jaimala and Varmala ritual

Maan took the garland and as soon as he went ahead to decorate Geet's neck with the fragrance of his love Sanju and the rest of the girls lifted Geet high and showcased their naughty antics

Before Adi and Prem could take Maan out from this situation Maan amazed everyone present there with his soul searing gesture

He went on his knees and bowed down his head making it evident he could wait till eternity for Geet such was the beauty of his love… he would never force his wishes on her as all that mattered to him was her happiness…

Geet melted with this simple gesture of her Maan without any delay she sat down on her knees and beautified the magic of this moment by capturing Maan in the folds of her love garland

Maan kissed her forehead and helped her to get up making it evident as long as he is alive his Geet will only touch the heights of glory he would never allow her to fall…

Teri wafaa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikaala

It was now time to glorify Geet's existence with the colors of his love and a promise that till his last breath he would safeguard Geet as his most priceless possession

Maan joined his hands and took blessings from the holy fire and finally decorated the divinity of their love in Geet's maang by introducing sindoor in it

Pearls of happiness flushed Geet's eyes as she allowed her heart to write this moment with a permanent ink in the chapters of her soul.

Their relationship got a sacred touch when Maan placed the mangalsutra on her neck it seemed the heaven was dancing in joy after watching this memorable depiction of pure divine love

Maaneet were drowned completely in each other's eyes but the priest forced them to break this romantic conversation of theirs by announcing the phere rituals

Adi, Prem and Sanju had a huge grin on their face as this ritual was the key to Maan's actual surprise for Geet

Maaneet get up for the pheres; Geet looked at Maan as if questioning him that the space for taking pheres is not enough there is something different about this mandap

Maan replied her with his characteristic mischievious smirk and requested her to place her feet at the mandap on the area wherein the word "SHAAYARI" was written

Geet nodded her head and did the same; as soon as Geet touched the words with her feet the area transformed into a big artificial yellow rose. The rose had 7 layers one for each phere

This out of the world mandap decoration made a special place in Geet's heart coz of the color of the rose "Yellow" this rose was the basis of Maaneet's relationship and without its presence this moment would had indeed been incomplete

Geet hugged Maan as she found difficulty in expressing her happiness. Maan gifted Geet a forehead kiss and scooped her in his arms as he entered the first layer of the rose petal marking the start of their first phere


Main jo mit bhi gaya to wajood mera
Sada tujh mein rahe zinda..

As soon as Maaneet stepped the silky folds of the rose layer all the curtains from the huge sized windows parted aside and welcomed the romantic dark star studded night to become a witness of their union

Geet's mesmerizing eyes got a twinkling spark when the walls of the entire mandap took the form of a glass studded beauty wherein all the beautiful moments of Maaneet were being displayed in a pictorial form with a beautiful message at the end of each picture "I LOVE U MY BELOVED!"

Maaneet completed the first phere with the notes of their love resonating in every direction of the mandap it was now time to enter the second layer of the rose to mark the entry of the second marriage vow



Kyun ki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Ki zindagi ab tum hi ho..

As soon as Maaneet entered the arena of the second layer a mesmerizing sprinkling shower of scent started to bestow kisses on them… Geet looked at Maan as if asking him the significance of this fragrant sprinkling shower…

She got a perfect answer from Maan when he allowed his eyes to confess THEIR RELATIONSHIP WILL ALWAYS REMAIN FRAGRANT WITH THE SCENT OF LOYALTY AND TRANSPARENCY

Geet realized her most beautiful dream could also not replace the sacredness of this moment she felt blessed to be the biggest possession of his heart

A spring of soft gentle flowers started teasing Geet's existence as soon as they entered the third layer of the rose to take their next wedding vow… The heartbeats of Maan evoked his promise to maintain the soft yet firm beauty of honesty in their relationship forever and ever…

Geet's love and admiration for Maan was just about to make its presence evident in the form of pearl drops when a dreamy shower of artificial snow made her feel like a queen of heaven as soon as they entered the fourth layer of the rose

Her soul realized the bliss of this moment and this snow shower simply indicated that no matter what MAANEET'S RELATIONSHIP WILL REMAIN TO BE PURE AND SACRED


Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Maan and Geet's eyes were locked into an intense eyelock as the beauty of the fifth phere was highlighted with the sparkling shine of artificial diyas that formedthe border of this particular rose layer

This arrangement required no description as the promise to keep the flame of their eternal love alive permanently in each other's heart was getting reflected beautifully in their eyes

There was nothing special in the 6th layer but Maan wrote the importance of Geet's presence in his life by gifting her soft doses of gentle kisses on her forehead, eyes, cheek and chin making her realize that she will continue to remain the most beautiful girl in his life in every phase of time


Tum hi ho, tum hi ho
zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

The last phere was very significant as Geet could read an intense confession through Maan's eyes. As soon as Maaneet stepped out from the mesmerizing folds of the rose petal layers and the priest declared the completion of marriage

Maan placed Geet's hand on his chest and showed her the SPECIAL RING OF HIS [made up of Geet's original mangalsutra pearls] and confessed

Maan: I couldn't return u the entire part of your dream that I had once crushed but the only gift that I could think of giving u on this important day of our life was that part of the crushed dream that I had kept safe in all those moments wherein u were not by my side…

Maan: Geet this ring is made up of the pearls of your mangalsutra that u had left with me. I couldn't throw them away as somewhere deep down in my heart I knew that my existence revolved around u and these pearls were the only way through which I could make u stay by my side even when u were miles apart from me

Maan: I am sorry Geet

But before Maan could say anything else Geet placed her bracelet which had the remaining pearls of the broken mangalsutra in it and confessed

Geet: Maan u kept a part of our dream safe and I kept the remaining part with me this proves the beauty of our relationship doesn't it? Destiny tried to separate us but in our own little way we were always there by each other's side… Our story was incomplete in the beginning as we were walking separately but now…

Geet placed the bracelet along with the ring and confessed

Geet: No storm can ever cross our path as finally all loose ends of our divine bond have been strengthened and from now onwards we will walk but together so that even after ages when we get tired and look behind we can see the mark of our footprints that will be enough to make us realize that together we are perfect and without each other we have no existence

Maan introduced the ring in Geet's finger and Geet tied the bracelet on Maan's hand

In every sense Maaneet were complete today; they fought destiny; they fought with their own insecurities but at the end True love emerged victorious…

The promise of their hearts was getting the words from the universe tonight

"After forgetting both the worlds
I just want to acquire You
I have so much love for You
It is so difficult to describe
What is this life of mine
It is just the faith I have in You
Now, I just have this one desire
I want to give each and every breath of mine to You
We won't be separated every again
We flow through each vien like blood
I reside inside ur Heart

U reside inside my heart"

Finally LOVE CONQUERS ALL…

PRECAP: Epilogue

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ending
loved prem n sanju confession
Maaneet declared their love at the award function
The yellow rose part was superb...unique one
Waiting for the epilogue
Edited by -Mithuna- - 12 years ago
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awesome finish...apart frm maaneet i loved sanju n prem...
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It Was True Love From The Start

Author: Kaylyn Lloyd

The touch of your hand,
and the taste of your kiss.
Oh how I wonder,
How our love is as strong as this.

The sound of your voice,
And the twinkle in your eye.
Oh how I thank God,
For such a wonderful guy.

The warmth of your smile,
And the touch upon your face.
Oh how I love,
Your caringness and embrace.

The way you look into my eyes,
And the safeness when I'm with you.
Oh how I'm so happy,
Now that I'm with you.

The touch of your body,
And the feel of your hands on me.
Oh how I see,
That this is truly meant to be.

The love in your heart,
And the glistening in your eyes.
Oh how I believe,
That nothing will tear us apart.

The words upon your lips,
And the determination on your mind.
Oh how I love,
When your hands are on my hips.

The beat of your heart,
And the bravery in your soul.
Oh how I knew,
It was true love from the start.

loved the update beautifully done loved maan explanation of the ideal man loved how he said all the wrong and showed all his flaws and all the hurt he did all because he did not understand the his love loved how he showed her at the madcap she will always have him loved the pheres and the flowers beautifully done awesome ending thanks for writing this amazing story and finally they are married again loved how he gave her the ring and she gave him the bracklet loved it

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Beautiful ending to a beutiful story
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Awww it so dreamy update loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
O M G
last part
itni jaldi😲😲😲😲 yyy so😕😕😕
isiliye season 2😆😆😆
kk my cute sweet comment😆😉😉

chlo sanju n prem also settled mean confessed😆😆😆
n my maanu got "THE IDEAL MAN" award wooww
i lv manu's every word on this
it was amazing n made me speechless so so much lvd it
he accepted his mistake in front of whole world
only my maanu can do this
they married again aww it was so lovely n dreamy
maanu made her live her every dream
it was all so dreamy n beautiful
me off to my dream land hayeee
Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful written !!
loved Prem's confession
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful update! Superbly written! U have a way with words! Prem confesses to Sanju! She accepts! Maan wins Ideal Man Award n gives an emotional speech! Maaneet get married! Maan does it in a special way! Thanks 4 a fab FF! Loved it! U r an excellent writer!👏⭐️ So sad its ended! bt have season 2😉 waitin 4 epilogue! pls update Ikraar by chance! thanks

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