Falling for his brother ;) KR OS #W vs R challenge

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Challenger/Requester: Nisha

-Writer: Deetha
-Date Of Challenging: 7/5/2013
-word limit: Over writer
-Type: OS
-Couple: KR
-Status: Accepted
-Situation: Beach, Ice cream, confusion, confession
-Due Date: Over writer



Falling for his brother


Reyaansh and swayam Singhania… the most popular besties, brothers!!! Fraternal twins…..

Both the brothers are different from each other . One is very studious, a shy and simple with a simple jeans and light coloured shirts looking very simple and a smile always on his charming face .coming to the second one he is naughty, a big flirt a hood always falling on his forehead along with his zulfein.

PS: hehe…ulta samjha hoga na :P

Saturday , time 3:30 PM.

"Yaar utho ab bohut hogaya" swayam whinned walking back into the room and fell on the bed taking off his hood .

" a big no..mujhe iss chapter mei problem horahi so mujhe padne de.tu jaa !! "Rey said never looking up from the book

" dekh tu abhi mere saath nahi aaya toh ….."he gave a smirk

"toh kya?? "rey finally looked up…

"toh…"swayam gave a evil grin…

Rey pouted and said "dress change karke aata hun rukh do minute" he stamped his foot and went to washroom to freshen up……

Swayam grabbed the car keys and zoomed out …but as he descended the stairs his mom shouted…

"swayam kaha jaa rahe ho??"she shouted from inside

"mom bas ghoomne jaa raha hun"swayam made a face

" ek din toh aaram se baith jab dekho ladki ke peeche "she started her lecture

"mom hum bas thodi der ghumne jaa rahe hai "rey shouted back hearing his moms lecture

" Rey tum bhi jaa rahe ho??? Toh jao donon"she said when swayam pouted and followed a laughing rey.

Time : 4:50 PM

"Rey!!"swayam tapped rey's shoulder

"kya??"rey asked looking at him confused at his expression

"wo dekh wo meri item hi haina??"swayam pointed at someone rey looked and could only say "haa"in disbelief.

"wo yaha??"swayam asked

"bas aise hi aayi hogi beach haina"rey said disappointed looking away into the sea.

"excuse me"reyam turned on hearing the voice knowing well who it is.

"hey kriya"rey said slowly…

For a second both looked into each others eyes and kriya looked away.

"mujhe tumse baat karni hai "kriya said looking at swayam

"bolo"rey said ..

"akele mei??"she fidgeted with her scarf and looked at swayam

"sorry wo nahi ho sakta "he said as she looked away . Rey glared at him when swayam gave a evil grin to him.

Kriya once took a deep breathe and started "dekho swayam tum ye jo kar rahe how o sahi nahi hai!! Tumhe pata bhi hai log kya kya baat kar rahe hai tumhare aur mere bare mei?? Tum har roz har time mere peeche kyun aate ho … for god's sake stop all this mujhe nahi pasand…rumours hai ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho …if it is so then let me tell you clearly I don't love you so please stop following me . "she said in one go….

At first reyam were confused but as soon as it licked to them rey was about to say something when swayam interrupted

"kya??? Tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti??par kyun ?? kya kami hai mujhme?? "he said as she looked away …rey made a cry baby face and swayam had a hard time controlling his laugh.

"okay reason chahiye tumhe toh suno pehli baat pata hai tumhare mere peeche padne ki wajah se meri bestie kitni upset hai "she was cut

"koun kyun??"swayam asked totally blank of what she is talking

"Sharon….wo tumse pyaar karti hai par wo mujhse wo share nahi kar rahi hai ….life mei first time wo mujhse apni feelings chupa rahi hai just because she thinks wo humare beech aajayegi aur doosri baat mai kisi aur se pyaar karti hun"she said looking at rey at the end

"kisse??"reyam asked her tensed …

"rey se"kriya said closing her eyes .

"please mera peecha karna band karo aur"she was stopped by swayam…

" bhai msg karta hun mai padal chalejana ghar "swayam winked and left leaving a confused kriya.

"dekho rey I know mujhe confess nahi karna chahiye..but yeah it's the truth but that doesn't mean you too should hold the same feelings. Par please tum swayam ko samjhao ki wo mere peeche "she was cut

"nahi padega"rey said making her more confused .

"ice-cream??" rey asked casually and poor puzzled kriya nodded her head .

He said her to walk and joined her .

"Rey I am really sorry I know tumhe ye pyaar vyaar acha nahi lagta par …."

"Ilove you "Rey said looking towards the sea making her stop right at the place with wide eyes in disbelief and kept looking at him …..after few seconds rey turned towards her and smiled at her and took the Ice-cream away from her mouth which she kept in her mouth with shock and gave her his one of the die-for- smile making her gulp slightly. His mere touch created wonders in her body and she fluttered her eyes still in shock.

" Yes I do love you , pichle 6 mahinon se tumhe confess karne ki koshish kar raha hun "rey said looking at her . She opened her mouth in a "O "shape in shock .

He smiled seeing her cute face making her breathless with that one charming smile and walked a step closer to her. Kriya tried to take a step back but her foot betrayed her .She held her breathe as rey leaned a bit close to her face .He slowly touched her lips making her jump and showed his finger with which he rubbed the icecream stuck on her lips.

"toh aapne swayam ko"rey sighed and said

"well jab se maine tujhse pyaar karna shuru kiya I tried a lot to know you habbits , likes and dislikes and all but all your fault jab bhi tum saamne aati ho I just want to see you aur haath mei jo kaam hai wo bhool jata hun so swayam helped me in that…. Aur uski badle mei I have to complete his assignements too "Rey pouted at last making kriya smile.

Suddenly a unknown silence occupied none spoke . They just kept walking along the shore when rey slowly took her palm into his interwining her fingers with his .

Time : 6:03 PM

She grabbed his shirt placing her head on his chest and laughing her heart out along with him as he hugged her tight who was sitting in between his legs he pulled her more close crushing her back into his front and snuggled his face into the crook of her neck as she sighed and closed her eyes catching his hands tight .

~~~~check the message please~~~

Rey's mobile beeped saying this . Kriya sat straight when rey too sat right and took his mobile out . She was searching for a stone when rey smiled and said "nothing personal chaho toh pad sakti ho"

She looked at him and leaned back on his chest when he again wrapped his arms and opened the message and kriya read it out .

"mere bhai!! Tujhe info dene ki chakkar mei meri kismet khul gayi…college ki hottest ladki mujhse pyaar karti hai….wah wah..well wish me luck uski ghar ke bahar hun …aur haan raat ko party karenge "

Kriyaansh chuckled reading it . suddenly kriya took the mobile and called swayam

"haa bol rey.." swayam said

"kya party mei mai aur Sharon bhi allowed hai??"kriya asked as rey smiled

"ohh……. Messages padne tak aagayi baat..chalo…aur party ki baat….hmm then no daaru today!! Sharp 8:00 tayyar rehna "he said and hung up when kriya looked back and both laughed .

"pata hai tum swayam ki item ho" rey giggled

"kya??"kriya asked confused

" har jagah tujhe mention nahi kar sakta na isiliye wo tujhe "meri item "bulata hai "rey laughed at this as she punched him on his shoulder and laughed along with him as they walked towards her car.


Hope you people liked it especially nisha!!


waiting for your valuable comments guys !!!

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Deetha. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I didnt recheck srry for spelling mistakes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

unres

1st to comment😲

wowwieee

awesomeee os👏

and nisha nicee challenge👍🏼

loovveedd ittt😊

beautifully written👍🏼
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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welcome back deetha🤗
thank u sooo much accepting my request😃🤗
comming to update
it was mindblowing update👏👏👏
loved it so much😃
OMG rey aur study🤣ye kaise ho gaya😛😆swayam aur flirting🤣dono ko itana opposite bana diya😆
OMG swayam said meri item😲wo bhi kriya ko🤣deetha tum kuch bhi kar sakti ho👏
bachari kriya khud bhi itani confuse hai aur sath mein rey aur swayam ko bhi confused kar diya😆wow kya confession tha seedhe seedhe bol diya😃proud of u kriya😊aww 6 month poor rey😛finally rey ne bhi bo diya...aww cute KriYaansh and ReYam scene😊
thank you deetha🤗
Edited by NishaP_Arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres
party party party party
dink chika dhink chika
first time main first page pey comment doing
wo b diu apkey work pey
vesey meri itni kismat kha always late ho jati ho
u know i missed u allot diu
app gayab he ho gyi thi
love u *bear hugs*



u know firs tline i thought Swayam k liye hey but jha to ulta ho gya rofl
reyaash or prako😲 hahah next to impossible
ho he nahi sakta
esa sun kar hasi nikal jati hey na chahtey huye b
r u serious REyaansh singhania or studious 🤣
but kuj b kho
but Swayam ko imagin kar sakti ho main
kyu ki vo jesa dikhta hey vesa hey nahi
shupa rustam jo hey vo
meri item haha
main b scohu Swayam ki baat Rey ney kesey maan li
wow i love this di
or last part so cute
romace season is back
diu u know app to queen ho
apka work dekhtey he 32 daant show honey lagtey hey
after all app romantic work likhti hoo
haha b besharam wali line follow karing main to 😉

final;y u r back m happy
love u
osam OS
aroma_rubharu
comment long ho gya 😛

Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unres

Awesome os di

Finally reading ur work after long time.

I can understand why u r not writing much.

Short yet sweet.

Kriya rey ki item 😆
Edited by lil_devil_himu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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resss...

unres

awesome os di..!!
just loved it..
reading ur works after so long time di..!!!
missing them...😳😳
now back to the os..!!!
kya Os tha...
rey shy types n swayam flirt..hehe..😉😉😉
n bechari kriya to confuse hi ho gyi...😆😆
n swayam calls kriya "meri item"...haha...😆😉
just loved the whole OS di...😃😃
keep writing more..😉😉
Edited by esha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deetha

koi toh unres karo :(

Maine kar diya di
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read now re... but yeah swayam calls kriya "meri item ":P😛😆
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Originally posted by: deetha

koi toh unres karo :(



hehe sorry i was typing upar dekho kar diya unres
miss u alot diu luv u 😉

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