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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

just wat i needed at this point of time somehow wanted too see them together abb wait nahi hota yaar thanks for writting such a gr8 n adorable os ,atma ko shanti mili nahi toh itne patience ke baad tar majhi staklich hoti .luved it .

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

res a Done

Awosm OS jladi say show mein bhi ho jayeee😃😃

Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago

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rashmi

@morning_dews

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

wow..that was awesome...!!!!

loved it :))

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Hey Ria and Mihika...this is amazing...and so apt...i so wish they adapt this as the confession lovely dear and thanks for the pm i loved it to the core😊😊😊

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arshi_snia

@arshi_snia

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awsome update.like the way sharon propose swayam.thanks for the pm.

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

awesome os

its was heart touching

sahron confessed wow

my expectations frm cvs for swaron confessions are very much high after reading these os

thanx fo the pm

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Its simply awesome one shot with beautifull confession..Now,at this time every SwaRonian want swaron confession..and u make such an amazing concept..U both are just perfect in writing skills..

So moving on,i loved the begining,sharon was dreaming about swayam to confess his love..Just like current swaron condition in D3..Thats great sharon recognized his cycle..

After that rey and sharon part was amazing read..I like their convo..Rey called her swayam ki deewani and she blushed..

Well,i love the idea of sharon to proposing swayam..Becoz for sharon rai prakash it is most impossible task...She never do that..

But yes,she done that...i loved her confession to swayam..that was unique and beautifully expressed...In short,that was perfectly written..and adorable confession..

So at last,i just loved it and i really enjoyed it..And i hope CV's take some moral from this OS..

Thanx ria for PM

Prateek

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Guys you two did a wonderful job together. You both should come up with combined works often. I have already read almost all works of Mihika, who surely is a talented writer but Ria I havent read any of her works yet but I am surprised to read such an outcome and concept by you two.

Definitely Sharon and day dreaming that too about her Majnu. Well that was completely amazing. Rey really said that? "Swayam ki Deewani" and Sharon was blushing. No doubt only a best friend can do that. Teasing and,all.

Well the confession was really unexpected but thats how Sharon Rai Prakarsh. Finally they did confess. Finally evedy Swaranians dream became true.

Amazing job guys.

PS: sorry for the late comment.

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shantanu.swayam

@shantanu.swayam

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Mihika!
I know you're mad at me for not commenting.
But I didn't comment cause I haven't read your recent works only.
I'm catching up on my reading today.
So first thing I'd like to say is sorry.
Please don't be mad.

Now coming to the OS, Ria and Mihi, GREAT work!
I loved it.
Thank you for making Sharon propose to Swayam.
After all that he's been through, he deserved.
I loved how Sharon was constantly thinking about him and couldn't concentrate on the rehearsal.
Loved how Rey tried to make her understand that it's okay for the girl to propose.
Especially loved the dialogue, "Sharon Rai Prakash can do anything."
The proposal was beautiful.
Loved how Sharon was speaking straight from the heart.
Though the "Slap me because..." dialogues reminded me of a scene in the movie Mohobbatein (don't kill me for saying this). :P
But most of all, I loved Swayam's response to the confession.
Basically I loved it.
And I just gave you a long comment, so please don't be mad at me anymore.
Pretty please. :(