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Geet : Maa



Raj and Urmila were thrown te other side by te truck. Raj hold her in his arm and crying

Raj : no urmila u cant leave me

Urmila was breathing heavily



Geet rush to them. People started to surround them, some one called ambulance

Geet sat near her parents, holding her hand and crying : maa



Urmila look at Raj and then Geet , took they both hands together, and kissed them

Urmila : raj Geet and closed her eyes

Police and ambulance came , and took them to hospital, raj too lost his conisous

They reached te hospital, Geet don't know wat to do,

Police came to her

Police : can pls say who are they

Geet didt look him but staring te ot : my parents

Police : they name

Geet : RAJ HANDA AND Urmila handa

Police : u mean te businessman Raj handa

Geet didt react to him : hmm

Police at once inform to Maan


Delhi,


Maan was working in his laptop wen he got a call, he was shock te hear te news tat his uncle got accident, he inform Sonali who fainted hearing te news, they at once took his private jet and rush to Mumbai, informing to Dadi who went hosirapur.




Geet was standing outside and staring at te ot, her brother also not there as he went to delhi but address, so she went to reception and called to his phone but it came not reachable


Geet was crying and shivering as she thinking she left alone in a deserted place,

Geet was praying to god, dr came out

Geet rush to him

Dr : sory to say Miss. Geet , we cant save ur mother , she had several blood loss , but ur father is struggling


Hearing, te news Geet, hold her heart and fall , at tat time Maan holds her


Actually Maan and Sonlai entering te hospital, saw Dr was saying to Girl tat her mother is no more and she is falling on te ground, at once Maan rush to her to hold without knowing who she is. but wen he hold her, he got te shock, seeing her face. same face which was craved in his heart . Sonali rush to him and she too got shock seeing Geet who look like Drasti.



Maan was seeing Geet and her eyes , her almond eyes which only have happiness but tis eyes only pain. They both were watching Geet


Geet stood snapping his hand

sonali : r u ok

Geet nodes her head, and went from there

At tat time police came

Police : Mr.khurana

Maan : ahan, my uncle

Police : he is in icu

Police : but we cant save his wife

Both got shock : wife

Police : hmm Urmila handa and she is they daughter Geet handa

Sonali ground was slipping from her feet, she holds Maan for support : no it cant be, mo Maan why he did tis to me why


Maan : Maa pls, he hugs her

Maan : wat u saying inspector

Police : sory to say sir , she is no more, they daughter was they wen they met with an accident



Dr came : Mr. Khurana , ur uncle wants to talk with u both


Sonali was shivering to face te truth , Maan holds her and both went inside Raj ki room, Raj was lying on te bed with all life saving equipments. Raj saw Sonali and with her look he know she came to know abt Urmila, he gesture both of them to cum near him




Raj took te mask, Maan nodes no holding his hand

Raj in crack voice : pls Maan let me speak

Sonali didt look at Raj, Raj holds Sonali hand

Sonali : why

Raj : pls forgive me , im sory

Sonali : how can u raj

Raj : I not only betrayed u but Urmila too

Sonali look at him

Raj : sonali from col days we both love each other

Sonali got another shock, he loved Urmila : then why u married me

Raj : pls Sonali let me finish, now atleast I want reduce my burden before my last breath

Maan : uncle pls


Raj : sonali u remember ,wen we are in final year we had a project tour to goa, u didt cum as buaji (savetri-dadi) was ill, so u stayed back. Me and urmila went to trip. There we had a party at last day, I and urmila drank by mistake , we both lost in each other. Morning wen we realize I felt bad seeing urmila , so I took her to near by temple and married her


Sonali hand lossen from Raj ki hold


Raj : I decided to talk to Buaji (savetri) at once I return, but after I return we had a big shock tat Maan ki parents ki death, then I have to take over kc, buaji ki health everything made me to hide. Urmila became pregnant and gave birth to my son Yash




Sonali staring at Raj


Raj : Then ur marriage fixed, I thought after ur marriage I will talk to dadi, so urmila too came happily thinking tat I will annonce her as my wife to te world, but fate I have to marry u, coz of Buaji, and Urmila too took te mangalsutra with her own hands making her heart hard coz of buaji (savetri)


Sonali was crying , Maan was listening to his uncle


Raj : urmila decide to leave but , I forced her, she agreed with a promise tat I have to accept u as my wife, I cant deny her. Really Sonali I have accept u , but still I was lying on te throne bed thinking I have hide a big thing, but I cant say to u, u already had a heart break, due to ur first love , so I thought I should not break ur trust on me


Sonali : but u did Raj


Raj shed tears : I know , urmila also staying in delhi till her second baby, but once she saw u in mall, and te way her neighbours treat her , she left me without informing to anyone, she took promise tat I should not search her


I felt lonely, I cant share my feelings, so I engrossed in my work and took KC to stable. Now wen Drasti died , I was in guilty thinking of my sin , and god punished my daughter Drasti, so I decide to see Urmila once and ask her forgiviness . I went to Mumbai but ,

Sonali holds his hand and crying

Raj : sonali Im sory

Sonali : don't Raj, im te one to be blamed , I came between u and urmila, before our marriage I should have talk with u once


Raj : pls u both promise me tat u wont say tis to buaji (savetri) , or she will be In guilty thinking she spoil my life, . she give me all te love as a mother and father. She wil think tat she forced her decision on me. Pls I don't want buaji too live in guilty ,


Maan and Sonali nodes they head, Raj kissed they hands


Raj coughing, and breathing heavily Maan was caressing his chest , Maan try to get up to call dr


Raj holds him : I want one more favour from u both, my last wish

Sonali closed his mouth and nodes no


Raj : I know sonali, pls I want to say my last wish, Maan without informing u, I took one descision

Maan : uncle u can take any descision

Raj : I have transferred my shares on Geet , my daughter . till she completes 21 u will be her guardian.

Maan was shock to hear tis : uncle


Raj : yes Maan , till then I wish her to stay in km, before urmila dies she gave me her responsibility to me, but I cant fulfill. Wen she is alive I didt do anything to her Maan, after her death atleast I want to do something , pls Maan, sonali I know its very hard for u but


Sonali : raj tis much u know abt me, she is my daughter too


Raj : thanku sonali , Maan im giving her responsibility to u Maan, I know u will look after her well.


Maan: uncle

Raj : pls Maan

Maan nodes his head


Raj : and I wrote my hp house on My son Yash's name , and some cash on him, give to him Maan , I know Maan u will fulfill me last wish


Person : How dare u give my family share to some illegal childrens


All look at te direction and saw fuming Dadi standing near te door



Actually Dadi came to hospital with her sister in law maya. She came to know abt urmila and she got angry tat Raj betrayed her daughter, with tats he came inside wen she heard tat Raj wrote te wil on his illegal Childrens she got got angry and betray thinking Raj cheated her. She didt hear te first part, she only heard te will part and thought how she love Raj more than his son, but he betrayed her and his daughter she hurt , so she bursted on him


Dadi : how dare u cheat my daughter

Sonali : maa pls

Raj stare at Dadi : im sory buaji


Dadi : don't , don't say tat I wont forgive u for wat u did to my daughter, how can u do tis to me


Maan : pls Dadi be calm, we will talk later



But Dadi was angry , she came near Raj, who was just staring at her without blinking

Dadi shook him : how cum but her words died seeing Raj ki lifeless body fall on te bed

Sonali : Raj

Maan : uncle

Sonali fall on him and started to cry


Maan call dr , dr declared he is no more, Dadi sat on te couch


Maan kow Raj died in his guilty , before facing Dadi. He too shed tears , he love his maamaji, his uncle his godfather. Wat he is now coz of him, holding sonali in his arms he stares at his uncle




Dadi was shocked , wat ever she said she said only in angry as she cant see her daughter life spoiled but she didt expect tis. Wat ever Raj was her son, who she loves more, thinking tis Dadi fainted holding here heart


Maan rush to her and admitted in icu at once, Maya who came along with DaDI , HOLDS Sonali, soothing her


Here Geet , stood numb hearing her mother is no more, her world shattered , now wat she will do without her mother, wat ever even they lived one meal a day but with her mother they lived heaven, now her mother left her to struggle all alone I tis world,




She slowly went to te room and saw her mother's lifeless body, she fall on her mother and started to cry


Geet : why maa why u left me, while dieing also u went with tat man, leaving me alone, why u love him so much who only give u pain nothing , maa dont tis to me ma, pls I cant bear . I cant leave alone , maa im so scared now , maa pls cum back to me maa maa, she was screaming



Sonali and Maan came to see urmila and stood numb seeing Geet lying on her lifeless mother and crying

Sonali just rush to geet and hugs her, caressing her back


Geet crying like a baby : I want my Maa back, ask her to cum , ask her to get up, maa she was screaming




Sonali holds her : pls Geet control urself ,

Sonali saw urmila, took her hand with her other hand : sory urmila sory , pls forgive me

Geet realize whom she hugging, at once she snap and look at her mother once and went out


Maan and sonali was shock to see tis small girl ki numbness, and her pain in her eyes, they too followed her





Geet came out like lifeless soul , Nurse stop her

Nurse : mam, cal any one from ur home, we have finish te formalities

Geet look at her : no one is there, no one

Nurse : then how u will pay te bill and who will take her


Geet look at her and went inside te room, which was open so everyone can see , she removed Urmila ki chain and bangles , she came out she removed her chain too. Sonali hold her mouth crying, Maan was shock to see her cold behavior


Geet gave urmila chain to sonali : tis is not mine , tis is ur husband's , and she went to nurse



Geet : I don't have anything other than tis, u take tis I will take my mother

Nurse : but mam how we will, and how u will take her alone

Geet : while we are living no one is there , now she is death I don't need anyone

NUrse was so shock to see Geet, Geet was walking to her room, sonali holds her

Sonali : ok then Maan finish te formalities

Geet : who is he to do

Maan stare at her , he know she was in so much pain, for small girl it is not easy to accept all tis,

Sonali : pls Geet for ur mother

Geet didt say anything, Maan went inside to se dr

Sonali : Geet I know wat is going through u, coz of me Raj and urmial have to go through so much, but I don't Geet tat urmila is Raj ki patni, if I have known I have not let tis things happen, wat ever pls forgive us

Geet look at her

Sonali : pls Geet after her death atleast let her get some peace , call ur brother

Geet : I don't know were he is , I don't know

Maan came : all over we have to take them, her brother

Sonali :she don't anything abt him Maan

Maan : then wat we will do

Sonali : Maan u do her last rituals

Maan : maa me, how

Sonali : she is also ur bua, Maan , u have to do

Maan look at her and then Geet, who was standing stil

Sonali : pls Geet for ur mother

Geet look at her mother for last time : hmm


Tat is te word she said, Sonali ask Maan to finish all te formalities and arrange for te last rituals, Maan too went to talk with dr. Sonali turn to look at Geet but she was not there


Sonali ask te nurse : were is she

Nurse : she left mam

Sonali : left , she run out to see , but she cant find


Geet left te hospital walking in te road aimlessly, rain started to pour, she is walking in te rain.she didt cry, her tears dried, so nature is crying for her.





She went to her room, and saw it , her every place resembles her mother, te way her mother cooking , te way she scolding her, . she took her photo , her mother is caressing her and calling her Geet, she closed her ears


Geet : no noo, she fall down on te floor,


Maan did all te rituals for both raj and URMILA ,. They went to they guest house in Mumbai


Everyone sitting in te hall

Sonali : Maan we have to get Geet did get her address

Maan : ahan Maa,

Dadi : no need to get her

Sonali : maa pls

Maya : yes sonali u don't wat kind of people they are, her mother spoiled ur life and ur thinking to take her daughter ,

Sonali : pls bua

Dadi : I said she will not cum to delhi, and abt share , pay some thing to her and get back our shares

Maya : bhabhi why we have to pay for our share, ask her to sign she will do, if she deny we will show who we are


Dadi : I don't need to take her burden and more over seeing her, I only think Raj and Urmila ki betray so better she should not cum to km


Sonali : maa pls , tis Raj ki last wish, u both like or not she is staying with us

Maan : maa don't wory I will fulfill Raj ki wish

Dadi : u both do wat ever u want , Maya pack our bags ,we are leaving

Maya : yes bhabhi


Maan and sonali left to Geet home, Maya saw them, going


Maya (st) : tis wat I want to see , I wont leave tat Raj ki beti he is one who spoiled my dream of making my son as khurana son I law but coz of Raj my all plans failed , now I wont leave ur daughter Raj, she have to pay for wat ever u did.




Maya , is savetri ki sister in law and planed to marry his son to Sonali , but raj married Sonali and her plan failed , then she planned to marry her grand daughter to Maan, as her warise have to became khurana , but tat time too Drasti came in between , but now no one is there she can plot her plans and he decide to take revenge on Raj ,



Sonali and Maan reached chwal, they went to Geet house , Sonali open te door as it was not locked


Sonali was scared to open, as she thinking some thing happen to Geet seeing very silent, they both went inside . they both stood shock to see te sight. Sonali sheds tears ,seeing Geet




Geet was cuddling on te floor holding her mother's pic, still in te same dress which had te blood stain

Sonali rush to her : Geet Geet


Maan went to kitchen to get water and give to sonali, sonali sprinkle water on Geet face and made her to sit, geet slowly open her eyes, and look at them. Sonali made her to drink some water




Sonali : Geet wat u have done to urself , now get up, freshen up and cum, we are leaving

Geet sat and confused , Sonali took her to washroom and ask her to freshen up

Geet came out after she got ready and staring at them

Sonali : now get ready we are leaving pack ur bags

Geet cant understand were they taking here and look at them



Sonali : we are going to delhi

Geet : no im not cuming any were

Sonali : Geet we cant leave u alone, cum with us

Geet : no im not cuming

Maan lost his control : wat u r going to do here all alone

Geet look at him scared

Maan calm himself : u want to find ur brother, u said he is staying In delhi, if u didt cum how will u go to him

Geet : he will cum

Sonali : Geet he don't know tat ur mother is not any more,wat if he thinks u r safe with urmila and decide to cum after some time


Geet : I will wait for him

Maan to sonali : ma I think she don't want to fulfill her mother's last wish,



Geet look at him

Maan : Urmila aunty took promise from raj uncle , before she leave us, but I think Geet don't want to do tat, leave her cum lets go


Sonali know why Maan is saying tat : Geet , pls listen to me, cum with us, we will search ur brother and more over staying alone is not good for u, pls Geet


Geet (st) : hmm, yes she have to search her brother by going with them, she know sonali is not tat bad , she is her mother's friend , and she can see her brother too, so she decided to go with them


She started to pack her bags, Maan smirk at her, Sonali help her to pack.




Geet look at te house for alt time, were her memories was there, and went with them hoping for new beinging
















PRECAP : GEET IN KM,

Next part- PART 4 - PG 19




Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
very emotional n sad part
geets parents died
sonali accepted geet
as its rajs last wish..
maneet meet..
he is comparing geet n drashti who are poles apart
one was happy n other is filled with pain..
geet crying on her mothers dead body n asking her to come back
heartwrenching..
savitri n maya hates geet..
hearing half part of truth..
geeet accepted to go with sonali n maan..
poor geet how will be her life there..
will yash come to know about his moms death n raj s will on their name..
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Fabulous and it was so emotional
this maya ki tho 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Part 3

So so emotional part made me cry all the time
From geet mother death to raj confession
Everything is so painful
Geet is fully broke down
But liked sonali intelligance here
Maya I hate u so much
How can any one thing like that in this situation
And maan is clever made geet ready to come with them
Lovely I am you ac instead of fan hehehheheeheh :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh god kitna saddy wala part di
urmila died geet crying
maan hold her but sonali nd maan both r shocked to geet coz she is carbon copy of drashti
finally raj told the truth
he gave geet responsibilty to maan
uff ye dadi kya problem hay bina bat jane kya kuch bol dia
raj died .sonali went to geet.but geet crying for her mother

sonali col soul her but she cant accept it.chalo somhow sonali manage her.maan do raj nd urmila all formality .

geet went to her house

uff ye dadi ka naya drama ufff.maan nd sonali went to take geet .

abb ye maya kya karne wali ahy .

sonali shocked to see geet state .
sonali try to understand her
geet refuse to go km chalo maan ne mana liya
Edited by sumaiyariya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
very emotional n painful update 😭😭😭😭
maan n sonali shocked to see geet😲
sonali n maan come to know abt raj n urmila 😭
raj tell hw he married urmila n in wat circumstances he had to marry sonali😭
urmila is dead n gave the responsibility of geet n yash to raj😭
dadi heard them bt nt totally n she is very angry on raj n refused to accept geet😭😭😭😭
sonali accepted geet😊
aww sooo heartwrenching the way geet crying for her mother n asking her to return😭😭😭😭
geet went away n maan doing last rfituals of urmila n raj😭😭😭😭
dadi going with her sister as she dnt wanna accpt geet 😡😭
grrr dadi sister😡😡
maan n sonali found geet n taking her to delhi will they be able to find yash n will he cme to know abt his mother😭😭😭
feeling really sad for geet😭😭😭😭😭😭
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very emotional update...
geet is going km .dadi is against geet...
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very painful...emotional update...

urmila and Raj both died leaving Geet alone...

but thank God police informed Maan and they come...

Daadi still hates Geet...and Maya is pouring oil on fire...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow nice one..👏 👏 👏 👏
Very emotional too😭 😭 😭
i had tears reading this update😭 😭 😭😭 😭
hate this maya😡 😡 😡
y cant dadi see what is the truth😲 😲 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
thx 4 a super long part.very emotional also.I neva thought that urmila & raj wud die.I'll really miss them.But the truth is out.luckily sonali understood everything.But dadi is so irritating.hop she'll accept geet soon.liked maan-geet meeting.So finally they r taking geet 2 KM.Maya is so cunning.hop he does'nt succeed in creating probs.waiting eagerly 4 d next part

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