MG NEW SS SHATTERED HEART, PT-10,PG -64, MAR'22,2015 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
Poor geet
Hate this dadi and maya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was sooo sad
the way geet cried for her mother i had tears in my eyes
poor raj he died in guilt bcoz of dadi
n sonali n maan are managing everything

urgh this maya i hope she n dadi stay away from km for sometime till everything is fine

waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heart wrenching update...maya chudail ke saat dadi bhi milgayi...
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Sonali ask Maan to stop at near by restaurant, they went inside te restaurant, Geet after seeing a big restaurant , she hesitate to go inside, she have never seen like tis hotel in her life, now going inside was something different, she was thinking will they allow her inside so she stood there knotting her dupatta. Sonali sense her uncomfortable




Sonali: Geet wat happen cum lets have BF


Geet with her, they settled in they seats. Geet still look nervous, waiter placed te menu in front of her , Geet seeing te menu, she don't wat to order , she don't know some names in tat book, for her it is book


Geet : no , im fine, im not hungry

Sonali : how cum, u r not hungry, Geet I know from tat day u have not eat anything now have something

Geet was over whelmed seeing her affection : coffee, , ji I mean mam

Sonali : Geet u call me maa, not mam, im ur maa.


Hearing te word from maa, Geet at once hug Sonali and started to cry pouring her pain.Sonali to hug her and started to cry, both te ladies crying holding each other.




Maan was shock to see Geet ki outburst, he already very much hurt to see her painful eyes, and over all her tears, which he cant see. Why he is feeling some kind of emotions seeing her, it si coz she look like Drasti or she is Raj uncle ki beti or now Geet is his responsibility. But some thing bond him with her.




Maan : Maa pls stop

Sonali wipe her tears and wipe Geet ki tears too : ok now order something

Geet node no

Sonali : how cum, ok she order Indian dish . they had they BF and left te hotel.

They went to airport, Geet clutching Sonali ki arms, first time she is going to airport and first in flight hearing te name , something started to roll in her stomach

Geet : maa , Sonali and Maan turn to look at her



Sonali : wat Geet do u want some thing

Maan was looking at her, Geet tilt her down and looking here and there how to ask

Sonali wen near her: wat u want Geet

Geet whisper in her ear : I want to go washroom

Sonali smile at her and took her to washroom, Maan saw them going to wash room and node his head seeing her


They get into they private flight. After getting inside Gee saw te seats and thought flight will be like tis.. there was only minimum seats. She went and sat beside Sonali. Te flight start to take off. Geet got scared and hold Sonali ki arm, sonali seeing her pat her back


Geet after some time close her eyes and lyed on her seat, thinking of her new life


They reached delhi, a limo was waiting for them. Geet was shock to see a car no a bus, she don't know wat kind of vechicle is tat. She have never seen like tis In movies too. A well armed mens came to open te door for them, she got scared seeing them,


They get into te car, , te car took them to km. as te car went inside , Geet was shock to see a palace like thing in front of her, she know they are rich, but she didt expect tis much.. te way car enter inside , from gate to entrance they 15 mins. She look at herself and te palace in front of her. She at once felt she is some standing odd in front of tat palace were she does not belong


Sonali took Geet inside, Maan to were standing with them, at once they step into te mansion, Dadi stop them




Dadi : sonali I said I don't want to see her, she remains me Raj ki betray

Geet didt react anything , any how she know she does't belong here

Sonali : maa we already discussed abt it


Dadi : I also said I don't want her to stay here, I cant tolerate her. How cum u can do tis Sonali, she is ur sautan ki beti, who snatch ur happiness. I didt thought Urmila will do tis , I helped her for her studies but she


Maya : that s why bhabhi , they will say help for te people who worth for it, see now tat lady shows her place were she belongs, by snatching OUR Sonali ki happiness


Geet closed her eyes hearing words against her mother

Maya : from starting I didt like tat urmila, but u people did listen to me, now see she have cum between Sonali and Raj, atlast she took Raj from us leaving sonali as widow


Dadi heart prick hearing widow, yes her daughter too became like her widow. Te society ill avoid her for everything , wat all she beared til now, her daughter too have to face it. Seeing Geet her gussa increased coz of her mother Sonali became widow


Dadi : I said I don't want her, here it only reminds Raj ki betray

Sonali : Maa he didt do, before she say anything Maan hold her hand and node no

Sonali took along breath : maan , Raj ki last wish , tat we have to take care of his daughter


Dadi didt say anything, Geet who was standing there wat to do, people there were talking abt her and taking descision for her, but who should take, she is standing there like statue.


Sonali : maa pls more over , Raj have written 33% share o her name, till she became 21 , Maan is her guardian, so she have to stay here atleast for te shares,


Sonali atlast took te weapon which make her maa to agree. But Geet thought so they brought me here for some property, not for me, but for property they showering they love . I don't need anything, I didt want his surname too, then why I need his property, I will sign and leave from here




Dadi : then get her sign

Sonali : maa it is not so easy, till she is 21 she cant transferred to anyone, after tat she can do anything, if she want too, she cant sign

Dadi : hmm, I brought Raj as my own son, for tat he have given me nice gift

Sonali : maa don't forget he is ur daughter's husband

Dadi : tat s te big mistake I done, saying she left to her room, Maya too left

Sonali touch her shoulder, geet now hesitate to cal her maa,


Geet : maa , wo mei, pls I will go some were , I don't know anything abt te will , I will sign and leave from here, for tat u dot need to take my responsibility


Sonali : Geet im sory, for maa. She is little bit angry on everyone for hiding te things, but she is very nice, don't mistake her. And abt leaving , don't think tat , u are not going anywere . u understand, this is ur house, now cum I will show ur room


Sonali took her to her room, Geet saw te room, it big more than her whole house. There was big size bed in te middle, a balcony, she is feeling she is a alien to they world

Sonali : from now tis is ur room, u can ask anything u want

Geet : yes maa

Sonali : now take rest Geet, and she left

Geet(st) : I cant think bad abt Sonali, but why she said abt property , oh babaji why u doing tis to me, I feel like a stranger here . how im going to stay here . first I have to find my brother then I will shift there later after 21 I sign te will paper. But how I wil search him, will I ask Maan sir. No no he is talking to me , then how will I ask him, and more over tat day in hospital i ask him who he is to do, wat I will do





Geet went inside te bathroom and shock te see te way it designed. It was so big and full of advance equipments. Geet took bath and came inside , she don't wat to do. So she sat on te bed, which was so soft





Here outside , Maan was thinking how to talk to her , he wants to talk with her and clear her doubts make her to accept his uncle ki last wish and now she is his responsibility. After long thinking Maan went to Geet room and knock,





Geet : ji, Geet thought Sonali


Maan came inside and stood mesmerized seeing Geet in wet look, as just now she c took bath and wiping her hair. She was looking like a fresh flower , with wet hair.Maan staring at her, Geet seeing hims standing still, called him




Geet : ji sir

Maan came back to his sense : ahan wo I want to talk with u

Geet : ji sir

Maan : Geet don't call me sir, call me Maan

Geet : ji wo mei



Maan cut her:' Geet Raj uncle have given ur responsibility to me, so it is my duty to look after u.dont take Dadi ki words, she is hurt so she said tat words

Geet : hmm, no sir she is right ,

Maan : thank u Geet

Geet : sir , she I right , but if I say here it will increase her gussa more, so

Maan look at her : so

Geet : sir will pls do me one flavor

Maan :wat geet

Geet : find me my brother address sir, I will stay with him, I don't want to be burden , before she finish

Maan : Geet pls, I will find ur brother any how, to hand him his share of property, but u have to stay here

Geet : sir he wont accept ur property, we don't need ur property

Maan : but it is my duty to give to him

Geet : sir pls, I will stay with him , if u want I will sgn now

Maan glared at her (st) : wat is tis girl here im talking abt her safety but she oh god




Geet : no I mean I wont take ur property u don't need to worry for tat, I will stay with my brother , after wen I complete 21 I will sign te papers


Maan got angry hearing tis from her , he is trying to fulfil Raj ki duty but here , she is thinking we are doing tis for her, only for property


Geet without knowing she go on babbering , tat she want to move from here, Maan got angry and he shouted at her


Maan : CHUP BIKUL CHUP



Geet got scared seeing his high voice and te way he shouting at her, Maan sense her fear and calm himself

Maan : for god sake stop ur leaving kahani

Geet was looking at him with a small puppy eyes


Maan : see Geet try to understand , I know now at situation u were , but no can change anything at happen to u. seeing her silence , he got irritated




Maan : atleast stay here till u became 21, if u like or not ur my responsibility till tat, u cant leave from here, in stern voice and left te room

Geet look at him(st) : till 21 his responsibility, so he is doing tis to me, but I don't want to be burden to anyone

She was angry on Raj for doing tis to her

Geet : wen u are alive too u didt let us live I peace and now too im struggling here and there, I hate him I hate him




She sat on te floor and thinking wat her fate done to her.. after her mother died her life changed.she was lost in her thought , until Nakul called her for dinner.Geet fresh up and went out


DINNING TABLE,

Dadi was sitting in her seat, Maya was serving her , Geet came

Dadi turned her face , Geet was hesitating to sit



Dadi : ask her don't stand in front of me

Maya : way naa bhabhi , she have not seen like tis food in her life, so she got shock seeing te table for first time tis much variety

Geet stare at them te words pierce her

Dadi look at her and left te table without having her dinner


Geet (st) : wat I will do, she is not bearing my presence, now I cant stay here, but I cant go , were will I go. I don't know any one. Geet better stay here ,w at if they think u have run away with they property and will taunt my mother. I don't want make my mother to be low in front of them. Wat is tis from te time I came here only one word surrounds me property money. Thank god I didt brought her , or else like them me too will be thinking only abt property. Ok so I will stay here some more days,




Geet (st) : if I see my brother also , I don't know in wat condition he is, I don't want to be burden for him too, wat if they taunt him also, babaji why u testing me like tis, if I have died with my mother itself, I don't need to face tis things


Maya was angry te way she is standing still,

Maya : why u standing here, 1st day itself u made my bhabhi to starve , oh god wat else u r going to do

Geet turn to leave te table, Sonali came there

Sonali : hare Geet cum lets have dinner

Before any one say Maya interfer : Sonali she had her dinner, wat naa, bechari she was so hungry had her dinner before every one

Sonali smile at her : ok Geet now go and rest

Maya : ahna, go and rest , why not wen she saw cozy bed , she will sleeping na

Sonali : bua pls

Maya : no Sonali I was just

At tat time MAAN came , to have his dinner, Geet left te table, Nakul was watching all tis and felt sad for Geet

Geet In her room,

Geet took her maa ki photo : why u left me maa so tat I can live like tis life. Se maa, ur daughter how is living, everything is there even nothing is there maa, nothing is there, she started to cry




Geet saw te bed , only Maya words haunt her , she took her mother's sari , spread on te floor and slept holding te photo


At night Geet was feeling hungry, she was rolling on her floor, she suddenly got up to drink water, te jug was empty, she got up and went to kitchen to get some water. As she switch te lights Nakul came


Nakul : Geet beti wat u want

Geet : hmm,I want some water

Nakul know she didt eat : Geet sit here

Geet got confuse and stare at him

Nakul : pls beti sit here



Geet sat on te chair , Nakul placed dinner late

Geet : wo mei, I was not hungry

Nakul : it I ok beti u eat for me

Geet look at him and over whelmed with his affection. Geet had her dinner and went to her room, thinking te whole day wat happen.



Te next day all were sitting in te BF table, Geet came and sat

Sonali : Gudmorning Geet did u had nice sleep

Geet : ji maa



Dadi got angry : cal her mam

Sonali : ma pls she is my daughter

Maya : sautan ki

Sonali : pls stop it, geet have dinner

Geet node her head

SOnali : maa I thinking to go to hp for some days

Maan : why maa

Sonali : Maan u know naa, they hospital ki construction is going so some one is needed there to look after it

Maan : maa we will hire mens

Sonali : no Maan it is Raj ki dream I want to look after it

Dadi : hmm ok every one leave me and go

Sonali : maa only for few days

Dadi : ok

Geet (st) : oh god she too leaving , I will ask her if I can cum with her

Maya : wat sonali I ask simran to cum here but u r leaving

Dadi : wat simran is cuming

Maya : yes bhabhi she want to spend some time here

Dadi : it is so good to see here after long time

Sonali : bua I will cum soon, till then she will stay here naa

Maya : hmm

Maya (st ) : why not she is going to stay here forever as khurana ki bahu, Maan ki patni,

(Simran is Maya ki granddaughter)

Sonali was packing her bags, Geet knock her door,

Sonali : hare Geet cum in

Geet knotting her dupatta: wo mei

Sonali made her to sit : wat u want to ask,

Geet : wo I can cum with u to hp

Sonali : why Geet u didt like here

Geet : not like tat but

Sonali : Geet u can cum, but not now, first some legal formalities are there, u have to do it. Maan will look after it and then u have to see ur brother naa, Maan hired was searching him so stay here for some time and then u can cum to hp, tat is ur native, ur father ki born place

Geet : he is not my father pls

Sonali look at her

Geet : im sory

Sonali smile at her : it ok

Next day Sonali left , Geet came to her room,














PRECAP : GEET LIFE IN KM AND ?

NEXT PART- 5 -PG 26



Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
poor geet
all are playing football with her feelings
maya dadi now her grand daughter will join
maan is feeling something
but couldnt find it
feeling pity for geet
thanks to nakul atleast he cared for her..
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
A big thanks 4 updating it.Sonali telling her not 2 call her Ma'am,but Maa..geet hugging her crying calling her maa was so touching.dadi is so rude 2 geet.plz clear her misunderstandings & make her accept Geet.plz.i cant c dadi being rude 2 geet.Maan has feelings 4 her as she is drashti's look alike.liked maanet scene too.but geet thinks that she is a burden.Oh!What'll b geet's condition without sonali?I hope maan'll protect her.Is simran -ve?Oh!but excited 4 a new charac.Geet htes Raj,bcz of him indirectly she is facing a lot of probs.Geet also thinks that d luv showered on her is bcz of property tho she does'nt misunderstand sonali.Oh!plz dn't let her misunderstand anyone .
plz update nandri too
Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
finally geet in going to delhi😛😛.
geet shocked to see all of the things 😊😊.she never see this kind of things.geet call sonali as maa.sonali so happy today 😊😊.

maan cant see her tears 😉😉.geet dar gaye for flight .

uff ye dadi nd maya grr😡😡.poor geet kya kare kya ba kare.
ai hayeee maan drooling on geet😆😆.love maaneet moment.geet adat dal lo ye glare ki ye tumhare day to day active rehne wali hay😆😉.

kamini maya geet ko khana kahne nahi dia 😡😡.
geet so innocent .sleep in the floor 😭😭.
chalo kamse kam nakul tho jo geet ki care karta hay 😛😛.

sonali going to hp abb kya hoga🤢🤢.maya call her gd simran.tera sapna kabhi pura nahi hoga dekhlena 🤬

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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Great Update👏 👏
Poor geet😭...All new for her and scared...
Maya,daadi taunting her😡...So sad for her😭😭
Maan is feeling something to geet...Maaneet convo nice
Now Simran is coming..Is she positive for maaneet or negative🤔
Hate Maya.😡😡😡..Glad that atleast nakul cared and give dinner to her⭐️
Precap sound interesting
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next

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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
update poor geet sonalli love good maya bi...



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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
hate maya
n dadi v uski baat me aa rahi h
iss maya bua ka bash chale toh woh geet ko bhukha maar de
nakul is soo nyc, geet ko dinner karwaya
n geet want to go with sonali but leagal matters
ab yeh simran ku aa rahi h
maya kam kya thi jo uski poti v aa rahi h geet ko pareshan karne
but one thing is nyc maan hai uske sath
waiting for next

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