MG NEW SS SHATTERED HEART, PT-10,PG -64, MAR'22,2015 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part dear
loved it so much
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
cant believe that she has to go through this now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very emotional n lovely part
maneet first meeting😊
waiting 4 nxt
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Posted: 12 years ago






nw geet's life will b hell...plz maan bacha lena geet ko...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...






thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...






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Posted: 12 years ago
iam back with coments red when u updated itself but net ditched me and power cut uff
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Posted: 12 years ago
part3
ohoo geet was in full pain me also felt bad for her
raj was not at fault sonali understand his stand thank god
maan was ready to acept her but as responsality interest4ng story line
maan played wel to make geet say yes
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Posted: 12 years ago
part4
iam pretty sure dadi wil acept geet but when me waiting for that
geet was so stuborn yar but maan is there na lol
maan babu control ur anger wo bachi hai ha
i like nakul atleast he is there
sonali gng maan wil be busy with ofi what wil hapen for geet in km
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Posted: 11 years ago



SORY FOR TE DELAY, AS MY PC GOT STOMACH ACHE


THANKU FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES FRIENDS..LOVE U ALL
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Geet came out of Sonali ki room , lost in her thought , and suddenly bump into a hard rock body. Here other side Maan was cuming to sonali ki room for calling her, while talking in te phone and bumb into GEET. It was so sudden, both lost they balance and fall on te ground.Maan on te floor and Geet on him



Both were lost In each other's eyes. Geet ki soft body was pressing on Maan ki rock body.making both of them to shiver in they closeness. Geet's breath falling on Maan making him to lose himself. He was drown I her eyes, her hand went to hold his shoulder.

Both felt some kind of familiar in they touch like they know each other for long..Maan ki hold on Geet became tight , pressing her towards him. Soali who came out hearing some noise seeing Maaneet o te ground got worried and went to them

Sonali : hare Geet , Maan wat happen

Her voice broke they intimate and brought them to sense making them embrass, Geet try to get up, but her duppata was under Maan, so she again fall on him

Geet : ouch

Sonali got worried : hare Geet be care ful, she help Geet to stood and Maan too stood, glaring at Geet

Maan : keep ur eyes front and walk



Geet scared hearing his tone and tilt her head down, Sonali sense it

Sonali : Maan wat if she ask u te same , were u kept ur eyes

Geet giggled , Maan glared at her

Sonali : Maan better control ur gussa, and don't threaten Geet with ur big big eyes

Maan : maa

Sonali : wat maa, Geet take care of urself, I will cum soo and if u want some thing u can ask Maan .

Geet was overwhelmed with her words and look at her

Sonali : he will be look like a hilter but he is baby who don't know to look after himself

Maan : maa

Sonali smiles : Geet if u want u can call me ok, and Maan look after my daughter

Maan : ok Maa now we will go, its already late, wat ever u want to say u call her and say

Sonali : ok ok, she hugs Geet and kissed her on her forehead

They left to airport, geet was sitting in her room and thinking abt sonali and her love for her.

Geet looking up : babaji thank u for giving back my maa in form of Sonali maa

Suddenly her stomach grumbles and she know she is hungry

Geet : wat is tis nowadays im feeling hungry often, Geet u better control urself, after seeing so may varities of food u r eating too much , but think one thing all tis are only for few days after wards same old life , so don't get use of it

She try to control her hungry but cant and went to kitchen and saw Nakul was cooking, she stood there knotting her duppata



Nakul saw her : hare Geet beta u want some thing

Geet : wo mei ,

Nakul smiles : Geet beta u can ask me anything

Geet : kaka im hungry

Nakul smiles , he ask her to sit I te chair and serve her lunch, Geet had it and went to her room

She decide to avoid going in front of Dadi and Maya , as she don't want to make them angry and hurt her with they words , thinking she slept

Evening she got up and decide to go to garden, freshing up , she came out to go to garden, suddenly she heard some sound from one direction, she went to there and stood numb seeing te scenes In front of her

Hmm it was Maan ki gym, he came early and doing his tai chi with upper bare body. Geet was shock but started to see his sturcture te way his each muscles stretch wenever he raise , his biceps. Her gaze travel on him were his sweat travel from his face and land on his waist , making her to glup her saliva.


She was drooling him, butterflies flying I her stomach, making her mouth dry and she is licking it with her lips. Geet standing there lost I Maan, tighten her hold on te curtains making it sound which made Maan to stop in his track

Maan : who is tat

Making Geet to cum back to sense and she felt embrass and rush out before she get caught

Maan saw no one and started to do his exercise, Geet rush out to her room, lock her room and stood there holding her heart which is heavening up and down

Geet (st) : why I feeling like my heart came out my body, wat kind of feelings is tis, she touch her stomach, I feel like thousands of butterflies flying around here, babaji wat happen to me, but I feel familiar to his touch, his voice, morning too wen he touch me I felt his touch like before



Geet blush thinking abt te morning incident and smiling, suddenly she remembers his glare

Geet : no babaji, if he cums to know wat I did , he will burn u with his big big eyes, she closed her eyes to control herself

That night she had her dinner before anyone and went to sleep to avoid Maan

At night Maan came to see Geet as he didt see her after tat morning incident, so he just want to see whether she is comfortable or not. Wen he enter her room shock to see te bed was empty, he try to move to balcony but some thing struck on his foot and he saw and was shock seeing Geet sleeping on te floor



Maan : why she is sleeping on te floor, pagli, he carried her I his arms and placed her on te bed , covered her with duvet . He stood for some time watching her, and went to his room

Maan in his room rolling on te bed thinking abt te morning incident

Maan (st) : why I felt similar in her touch and I felt I know her well, Maan why u thinking like tis, already she is scared of u, if u again think tis she will surely run away, he smile at her scared face and slept

Next day Geet woke up and saw herself on te bed

Geet (st ) : how cum im sleeping on te bed, I slept on te bed naa, no Geet ur forgetting urself for Maan so control, she went to get freshen up

Maan was getting ready , Nakul knock his door

Maan : cum in

Nakul : Maan babu some documents came from lawyers office

Maan (st) : oh I forget I have to get sign from Geet

Maan : nakul kaka were is Geet

Nakul : In her room babu

He took te documents and went towards Geet room, Geet who was cuming to hall trying to avoid facing Maan, she is seeing here and there whether she can see him , but suddenly she bumb into some one

Maaneet : ouch

Geet thought she wil fall but before tat Maan holds her and making Geet to feel jolt with his touch she at once pull herself before she drown in his eyes, and turn to leave

Maan calls : Geet

Geet : im sory and she again about to go , Maan holds her hand

Maan : Geet listen to me

Geet : ji

Maan : I need ur sign in tis papers

Geet signed te papers without reading, she want to move away from te place at soon, or else she will do some thing stupid I her nervousness, she signed and about to go

Maan : Geet u signed without reading

Geet smile sadly : I dont have anything tat u can take

Maan felt her api in her words , he left , but turn hearing some nosie and saw Geet was bumb into te table , and te way vase was abt to fall but she hold and arranging te flowers in tat, Maan saw her and Geet saw MAAN bitting her lips

Maan nodes his head : chalta pirta disaster , he left



Geet arranging te flowers, at time Maya came hearing some noise and saw Geet holding te vase

Maya : hey bagwan ki kasam, wat u did ,

Geet : im sory mam, I didt see

Maya : how can u see, do u know te cost of it, I know u have not seen like tis things in ur life so in excitement don't break all te things,

Geet eyes welled up and tilt her head down

Maya : hmm wat is aid ur crying for tat, don't show ur innocent face to take sympathy from us, we all know wat type of girl u r,

Geet run away from there before they speak anything further

Night Geet was sitting In garden

Geet : I have to ask Maan sir to know abt my brother , I have leave tis place soon, but will Maan sir leave me, he is a no : 1 stubborn man, will scare me with his eyes, DUST DHANAV. Wat I will do


Here Maan in his room came to balcony to get some fresh air before sleeping and shock to see Geet sitting In te garden late night

Maan : why tis girl is sitting here, as she became mad, he came down and stood In front of her , but Geet was lost In her thought didt notice Maan

Maan couged to gain her attention but she didt , so MAAN screamed

Maan : GEET T T

Geet who was not In her sense got frightened with te voice and with a jerk she fall down from te chair to te ground hitting her head on te ground

Geet : ouch

Maan roll his eyes : not again

Maan : Geet u always keep ur eyes at back, but before he completes he saw her eyes welled up showing she was in pain, he got worried and sat beside her trying to hold her

Maan : Geet r u ok, did u got hurt

Geet head was spinning but she control and open her eyes to see Maan, she saw full of worried In Maan ki eyes

Geet try to get up rubbing her head , : hmm im ok

Maan : no ur not ok, let me see u, he touch her hand and legs to see whether she hurt , making her to curl her toes bitting her lips, as his touch making her nerves weak

Geet hold his hand , : Maan sir im ok,

Maaneet stood up

Maan : Geet why u always get scared wen ever u seeing me, a im looking like ghost for u

Geet : no wo mei, she turn to run away from him, but Maan hold her hand, making her to jolt

Maan : see down and walk, again don't fall down, with a smirk, making her blush , she rush to her room, Maan was smiling at retreating figure

Geet went to her room, blushing thinking te way his care and te way he touch her , she hide herself in te pillow and slept

Morning,

Geet was siting in te balcony, Maan came to her to call her for BF

Maan :Geet cum we have our BF

Geet was happy tat Maan is caring for her , she was flying in te sky and felt tat god was blessing her with Maan

They both having their BF,



Maan : Geet I have hired some mens to search ur brother soon u will get him

Geet turn to him she was over whelmed with his concern : thanku sir thanku so much

Maan :pls Geet u don't need to say thanku , and one thing pls call me Maan no sir, it feel odd

Geet : ji sir

Maan nodes his head : ok Geet im leaving for office we will see in te evening

Geet was happy with Maan , she felt tat she belongs to him,

Geet : Geet how can u think like tis , it is bad to think abt him like tis, u wont deserve him, see urself and him. U wont stand in front of him , so better control ur feelings

Geet : why cant I think like tis, yesterday night also he was so worried abt me , te way he showing his care and concern, se urself saying care and concern, so Geet it just sympathy nothing else, so better control urself.

Geet : but how can I control, I LOVE HIM


Geet froze hearing her own words, she closed her mouth

Geet : wat I just said how can, but wat is wrong in tat I love him, does he love u,

Geet : babaji pls answer my questions, looking up she asking Babaji



Here Dadi and Maya were cuming to dining table, Geet got to move but stood behind te pillar hearing Maan ki name

Dadi : im so worried abt Maan

Maya : don't wory bhabhi we will see a nice girl for him

Dadi : hmm , tis tiem I have to see a good girl according to his taste and status, I don't want to do te mistake I did for my daughter

Maya : yes bhabhi before some low girl trap him, we have to see girl who suit our status

Dadi : hmm for tat he have to agree naa

Maya : bhabhi he wont go against u

Dadi : yes I know, for tat oly im worried I should't spoil his life

Maya : then u ask Maan bhabhi

Dadi : hmm

At tat time , Maan came down talking in his phone, he was in foul mood as te meeting postpone

Dadi was calling him : Maan Maan

Maan who was talking in te phone : hmm dadi

Dadi : Maan nowadays u have grown , u r not having time for ur dadi

Maan : dadi u know how much I love u, then why u asking like tis

Dadi : I want u to settle In ur life soon

Maan didt understand wat she is saying : dadi do wat ever u wish, now im getting late, she kissed dadi and left, making dadi to grin

But one person who was standing there , felt te ground slipping away from her feet

Geet look up : thanku babaji , u gave me te answers



She went to her room, crying , thinking her new found feeling SHATTERED at once it blossomed . she buried her love inside her heart forever

PRECAP : GEET IN KC

Next part : PG 31


Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ops maaneet fall 😳
dono feelling something something 😉😉😉.
sonali but take care of geet very well😛😛😛.
get also feel very happy for this😃😃😃.
maan ko bhi kuch kuch horaha hay😉😉.
ahem ahem geet drooling on maan😃.
geet loves maan 👏.
uff ye maya ki tho 😡😡😡.
ops geet ko misunderstanding hua😭.

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