MG NEW SS SHATTERED HEART, PT-10,PG -64, MAR'22,2015 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome n amazing update dear


continue soon


wen r u updating LB?????


thanx fr d pm😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
iss maan ki daadi n maya ko koi akal dedo
bichari geet ki pi6 padi hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
READ ALL THE PARTS IN ONE GO DI..
U BROUGHT TEARS IN MY EYES IN PART 3

FINALLY SOMEONE OTHER THAN VALLI DI MADE ME CRY...
TO TELL U THE TRUTH I AM RELIEVED THAT DRASHTI IS NO MORE ELSE SHE WILL BE THREAT TO MAAN AND GEET
JUST ONE QUERY IS GEET AND DRSHTI TWINS

IS GEET YOUNGER THAN DRASTI..COZ SHE SEEMS LIKE
I LOVED YOUR CHARACTERS SPECIALLYRAJ , SONALI URMILA AND MERE BHAGWAAN KI KASAM BUAJI..

AMAZING WORKKK
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Posted: 11 years ago

Haiii di ahaa at last fursat mila update keliye thanks for that huh

Wow maaneet blooming love marjawa really loved it

Ye maan bhina har taraf gussa ye kab suderegi don't scar her maan haa

And romace was at peacks ahaa kya bath hai Nalini ji

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing ff i read all 5 part drishti n geet r same features r they twins uka b,day bhi same
urmila n raj died n raj give geet responsibility to maan sonali except geet what a big heart n dadi didnt maya bua grrr she taunt geet poor she who she stay waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
liked a lot dear
geet shattered😭
intresting precap
continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
missed this ff a lot.maan n geet geeting attracted 2 each other.geet in luv.but geet is shattered knowing abt maan's marr alliance
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THANKU FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES FRIENDS..LOVE U ALL
Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago




-6



Geet started to lock herself from others. she almost spend her time In her room or some times with Nakul.Geet avoid to have her food in dinning table, she will be either having in her room or with Nakul, nowadays she became close to NAKUL, te only person who she talks, Nakul too look at her like his daughter


For 3 three reason she don't want to cum out of her room

First, she want to avoid maya and dadi, and don't want to make them feel irritated with her presence

Second , Maan, wat ever she tries, wen ever he cums in front of her her heart beat started to raise, she don't want to dream abt him, which will never became real

Next , she think she does't not belong here,

Maan too busy in his business, as after Raj ki death all responsibility came on his head, so now he have to work double te time as new projects came. He went early and came late. His interaction with Geet became less

At nights wen he cums, it will be already late night, he thinks as Geet will be slept and went to his room, without knowing Geet will be having sleepless nights. But he will keep track on Geet with Nakul

One day , morning

A girl enter to km, wearing a short dress reached her things and her top stop on her waist, with a low neck


She enter , at once Maya became happy to see her

Maya : simran beta

Simran : dadi how r u

Maya : im fine how r u beta

Simran : fine , were is nani and Maan

At tat time Dadi came : hai Simran beta

Simran : hello nani , how r u

Maya snuggle her to touch Savetri ki feet but she snap her shoulder and sat on te couch

Dadi : simran , wat r doing

Simran : I finished my ug In business nani , so I thought to spend some time here

Maya : bhabhi u know she In interest in business


Dadi : its good, nowadays it is very rare to se girls Interest in business

Maya : bhabhi if u don't mind , can u make simran to work In kc, as she will get some experience

Dadi thought : I will try Maya but I cant assure u, u know naa , now Maan was looking after , I wont interfere in his decision

Maya : ok bhabhi

Dadi : ok simran

Simran : call me simi ani, pls

Dadi smile : ok simi u take rest , I have a meeting in ladies association, we will meet In te evening

Simi : ok nani

Dadi left, both took a long breath

Simi : oh god tat old lady

Maya : try to impress her, she is one who will make Maan to accept u

Simi : for tat only im talking to her so politely

Deepak servant, came to give her juice

Simi : Dadi , u said some thing abt a slum girl, were is she

At tat time, Geet was going to kitchen

Maya : hmm, here thinking of te devil and here she is


Simi look at Geet , who was so pale, her dress was faded, like a low class girl,she started to laugh , Maya got confused

Simi : dadi she is one who u have been saying, she will trap Maan

Maya : hmm, Geet

Simi : really dadi , u have to check ur power I think so

Maya : simi ,wat u saying

Simi : then wat dadi, look at her, te way she dressed , she will trap Maan, leave him, not even road side romeo will look at her

Maya : but don't forget she shareholder of kc

Simi : hmm, don't wory dadi I will show her place, and she smirk

Simi intentionally, poured te juice on te floor

Simi : oh god , she look at Geet, hey

Geet didt hear her

Simi : hey u girl,

Geet look at her and ask like me

Simi : hmm u cum here

Geet came near her : ji


Simi : clear tis place, indicating te juice on te floor

Geet look at her and then Maya , who glared at her

Geet : me

Simi : yes u, why u standing like a statue, oh god nowadays servant don't listen to their boss,

Geet turn to go to kitchen

Simi : hey I said to clean tis

Geet : ji I will bring te cloth

Simi : hmm

Maya : do wat ever u want to do with her, I will call to ur dad to inform abt ur arrival

Simi : ok dadi

Maya went to her room

Geet came with a cloth and she was abt to clean te floor but a roar stop GEETT T T ,her track and she look at fuming eyes who will burn her, she at once stood up frightened with his eyes, yes it was Maan ki voice

Maan who came to km, to take his file and he want to see Geet as he didt see her for some days, but wen he enter he saw GEET was abt to clean te floor he got angry and started to shout


Maan was angry seeing geet : Geet

Simi was shock to see Maan there

Maan came near Geet and hold her shoulder tightly making her to winch in pain


Maan : wat te hell u doing Geet

Geet was wriggling : sir

Simi : MAAN ,

Maan look at simi with angry , simi was taken back seeing his gussa

Maan : who are u

Simi felt insult te way he ask who u are: Maan u forgot me , im simi , simran, maya dadi ki granddaughter

Maan : so tat didt give u any right to order Geet

Simi : why u supporting for servant

Maan shouted : simi, making her to jump back, who said she is servant, dare u utter one more word, he left Geet and turn to simi

Simi : Maan

Maan : she Is te owner of km, Raj Handa ki beti, Geet handa

Simi faked : oh, im sory Maan, I don't know she is raj uncle ki beti, seeing her appearance I thought she is servant

Geet look at simi , smile sadly and left te place

Maan : simi u r guest here , so better behave like tat, he turn to see Geet, but she was not there, he followed her, leaving fuming simi

Simi : I wont leave u Geet, dadi u r correct, she is using her innocence as her weapon to trap Maan, but i wont leave u Geet, coz of u today Maan insulted me, I wil soon throw u out of km, wait and see

Maan went to Geet ki room and saw her sitting on te window

Maan : Geet

Geet saw Maan and stood up : yes sir

Maan got angry first her silence and te way she didt fight back for herself


Maan : Geet wat u think of urself, ahan, for god sake Geet , ur daughter of km, ur Raj uncle ki beti, so show ur place to others, why u obeying others, if some one cums to ur own house and ordering u, u r standing still, don't be like tis Geet, tis is ur right

Maan saw Geet , who was standing still, he got angry

Maan : Geet im saying to u, damit

Geet : sir first of all im not Raj's beti, so pls don't say it again, im staying her only for te sake of property, after tat I will leave from here

Maan glared at her wen she said tat words

Geet continue without knowing wat effect her words were on Maan

Geet :tis is not my place, I don't need to fight for anything were I don't belong . any how u r providing me food and accomdation, for tat I have to do somethi, , before she completes

Maan roared : Geet t t


Geet stop and look at Maan , back off to see his red eyes

Maan holds her shoulder , Geet was wriggling

Maan : dare u say tis again, u accept it or not, ur Raj uncle ki beti and granddaughter of khuranas. If some one point they finger at my family , I wont spare it

Geet : im not ur family, so wat is there, if some one insult me

Maan hold tighten on her : ur my family samjhe tum u r my family,dare u say one more word

Geet was looking at Maan , who was glaring at her like he will burn her with his eyes

Geet was shock to see Maan like tis, till now he was very soft to her but today and she realize he have crossed her limit

Geet : im sory sir

Maan calmed seeing her frighten face , he left her and saw her , she was rubbing her arms

Maan then realize her have hurt Geet : im sory and he left her room

Geet started to cry : im sory Maan sir , im sory , sat on te floor

Geet really didt want to hurt Maan, but for hiding her feelings she have argued back him, but it turn out like tis



kc

Maan went to his office in foul mood , he broke all te things in his office, till now he was very soft , but today wat happen to him, while seing geet like tat some thing inside him made him like tis, his angry came out on Geet , but he know he was wrong , but he cant control wen she utter those words



Maan : why I hurt her why, i not like tis why

Both were thinking they hurt each other

Next day

Maan came to Geet ki room to ask sory to her ,Geet saw Maan, both felt awkard to face each other

Maan : wo

Geet: pls sir, im sory I should have talk with u like tat, but I didt know why I said those but im really sory, i wont do it next time,

Maan was watching her, here he came to ask sory, but she not even letting him to say but started her blabbering, Maan smiles at her , he know now she wont stop her bakwas

Maan : chup bikul chup

Geet look at him, and snap her gaze

Geet : wo wo

Maan : wo im sory Geet I should behave with u like tat

Geet was shock : sir

Maan : Geet wat ever u try u cant deny tat ur my family, only were there is right we will agrue and fight,

Geet turn her face with a smile on her lips,

Maan smiles : Geet , one more thing, now we will forget wat happen yesterday and became friends

Geet look at him

Maan : hmm

Geet : hmm


Maan : smiles : good, one more thing u have to cum to kc, for signing some papers

Geet : ji sir

Maan : I have asked Nakul to bring u

Geet : ji sir

Maan got irritated with her ji ji

Maan : r u dumb

Geet node her head : ji, the she realize wat she said , and look at Maan who was smirking at her, she pout her lips

Maan : ok Geet , bye, he left

Geet started to blush thinking of his tease,but she know its just he is pity on her

After some time, Nakul came to her room, to take her to kc

They came out and wer abt to get into te car, but simi stop them

Simi : Nakul go I some other car, I have to go to parlour

Nakul : but mam, now only tis car is avaible

Simi : so wat wait for another car and go

Nakul : but mam, we have to go to kc, Maan sir have said to bring Geet

Maya came there : then take her in bus,

Geet and nakul look at her

Maya : do u know te spelling of car and u want to go in tat, Geet better think abt ur past life then u know now how u living, u have not seen all these things in ur dreams too, so better stop dreaming, for low class girls like u, there are many bus or u can go by walk


Nakul try defend, but Geet hold his hand and, both left te place, simi smirk at Maya

Nakul : Geet baby if Maan babu cums to know he wont leave them

Geet : no Nakul kaka, don't say to them, going by bus is not new to me, many days we don't have money to go by bus ,we will be walking to school, after long time im cuming out, we will go by bus

Nakul know he cant make Geet to accept , so he left her

Nakul : ok baby, but we will get late, so we will go by taxi

Geet : hmm ok, kaka

They were waiting for taxi , but they didt get any,

Geet : kaka I think we wont get any taxi, see a bus is cuming we will go, or it will became late

Nakul too agree as now no other choice , they took a bus to kc

Kc

Maan was watching his watch and thinking wat taking them so long to reach kc, wen they left km, 2 hr before, and more over his family lawyer Mr. Gupta and friend of Raj is waiting for Geet,

Gupta : Maan don't wory, I will wait

Maan ; sory uncle

Gupta : Maan don't be formal, more over i want to see my friend's daughter

Maan : hmm

Nakul and Geet reached kc, as Maan already informed abt them, receptionist allowed them

Everyone was shock to see a girl , they all twisted they face to see her outfit, her face, her faded dress, her rubber slipper, her dress was short as it reached little above her anklet as it was old dress, her dress was torn on her shoulder, as Geet getting down from te bus , her dress got struck with te window


Geet was so conscious to enter , as everyone were watching her, she adjusting her dress and fridgetting her duppata . she was feeling uncomfortable te way all looking at her. She felt like a garbage standing in front of them, she want to run away from here , but she cant , she tilt her head down , and walking

At tat time tasha came : Nakul , who she is, we are not taking any persons for housekeeping, if Maan sir cums to know , he will fire us, so pls take her out


Nakul : no actually she is Geet

Maan : Geet handa

Maan came out, as he got information tat Geet arrived KC, then wat taking them so long, so he came out and got angry we they thought her like tat

Maan came near her : Geet handa , daughter of Raj handa

Everyone became shock and felt sory for her

Maan : now everyone get back to ur work

Maan took geet inside and there Geet saw a old man

Gupta was shocked to see Geet who look like Drasti : Maan she look like drasti naa

Maan became sad hearing it

Gupta : hare Geet beti cum here , im ur father ki friend, how r u beta

Geet : ji, im fine, kduging her dupatta

Gupta : hmm Geet nice name, ok cum here sit

Geet sat on te chair, and adjusting her dress again and again, to cover her torn part, But Maan got it and got frustrated on him, as he didt buy anything for her till now

Gupta ask geet to sign some papers,

Gupta : ok Maan, im leaving I will file tis papers

Maan : ok uncle

Gupta : bye beta

Geet : ji

He left, Maan look at Geet who was avoiding his gaze, she was abt to leave , Maan hold her hands

Maan : wat te hell u r wearing


Geet saw her dress , she is wearing suit oly, she thought he want her to wear short dress like te girls who were standing outside wearing

Maan : I mean u dress was torn , he showed her, Get trey to cover it with her duppatta

Geet : wo , while cuming in te bus it got torn

Maan got shock : bus , u came in bus why u doing like tis, wat ever u do I should not ask or u will start to cry or argue back, naa, u know how long we are waiting , but u have to cum in bus, saying u wont belong to tis place and u don't want to use car naa

Geet felt hurt with his words , till now she didt feel anything wen other treat her, but Maan he didt understand her, her eyes welled up and tears started to flow


Maan saw her tears which prick his heart, he came to wipe her tears, but she back, wiping her tears with her dupatta

Nakul knock te door, ad came inside to take Geet : Geet baby we will leave

Maan shouted on him : nakul why u took her in bus

Nakul saw Geet ki crying face and Maan ki gussa, he gussed wat had happened

Nakul : sir we were abt to cum in car, but simi mam want to go out so she took, as no other car was available , we were waiting for taxi, but it was getting late so we just took bus

Maan was shocked to hear tis and felt guilty for hurting Geet with out knowing anything, he look at Geet who avoid his gaze, she went out, nakul too followed her

Maan who was frustared to se te way she standing n front of everyone and her torn dress , te way his guilty ate him a she didt look after her well, in his gussa without asking her he shouted at her, her painful eyes still piercing him

Maan watching them through his window, and he was angry on himself

Maan : why te hell im shouting at her always, i not like tis, even Drasti shout on me, I will be very calm, but wat happen to me now , I have to ask sory, will she forgive me tis time


Maan : but before tat I have to arrange a press meet to announce Geet handa, I have to conviece dadi too. How im going to pacifly her, oh god

Geet : wat he think of himself always shouting at him, yes i agree I don't want any privalige from him, but today I thought he will be waiting for me, so I was taking car but tat chudail came in between wat I will do. so I took bus but he, without asking anything shouting at me, tis time I wont talk to him, wat he think showing his big big eyes and scaring me, dust dhanav






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Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
i hate that simi and maya..
loved the way maan is trying to interact with geet.
geet ki innocence ..
update soon

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