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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Polo_s
O plzzz update dis story! U r such a blackmailer! M dying 4 dis!;-(

lolzzz sryyy but kya karu m vry greedy... 😉 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

INTERESTING PROLOGUE AENNA
VERY DARK CONCEPT BUT SOUNDS VERY INTERESTING
N UPTADE SOON AB TO 50 LIKES BHI HO GAYE AB TO UPDATE DE DO AUR MUJHE UPDATE AJ HI CHAHIYE
N PM ME PLSS

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: luvmylife
INTERESTING PROLOGUE AENNA
VERY DARK CONCEPT BUT SOUNDS VERY INTERESTING
N UPTADE SOON AB TO 50 LIKES BHI HO GAYE AB TO UPDATE DE DO AUR MUJHE UPDATE AJ HI CHAHIYE
N PM ME PLSS

Thnxxx alot...
Hawww 50 ho gai omggg *runs to write*.. 😊

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Strikhedonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

You got 50 likes yaar...👏

Congrats...🥳

Now no more excuses...😉

Update fast dear...😛

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Tuba KHAn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

yaaahuu !! 🤪
50 Hogae .. chaaalll updateee 🥳🥳

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Ab toh 51 ho Gaye .. Chal ab Update kar 😉

Edited by .aliyah. - 12 years ago

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Hayeee 51 kaise ho gaye..??
Maaf kr do mere ghr me abhi function hi chal raha hai thats y
i was asking for 50 lyks ki ho na jaldi but plzzz guysss wait krlo sryyy

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

arggg i hate myself i just came here to post dat i will update in half an hour nd in btw dis my update got deleted.. uaaa... 😭 i dont wana write now i dont wana write dis storyy arggg...maine itni mehnat ki thi..or ab mai bhul bhi gai ki kya likha tha... m vry depressed 😭 mera hard work waste ho gaya maine function ke beech me sara likha argg i hate myself.. 😭

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Tuba KHAn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Bravo 👏👏👏👏

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

HELLOOO HONEYBUNS... LOL SRYY FOR MAKING U ALL WAIT WHAT TO DO M VRY GREEDY.. NOWDAYS... WELL D PROLOGUE GOT 50 LYKS ND HERE I M WITH D UPDATE...OK NOW M SHUT!! READ D UPDATE.. 😆

CHAPTER -1

THE BITTER TRUTH...

manvi's P.O.V

No no...dis cant happen!!!! how cud he?? no cud u say dat??? shouted manvi on her bst frend!!
"manvi listen to me m not lying how cu.." he tried to explain but manvi didnt gave him a chance she cut him in btw nd started shouting...
"just shut up how dare u say dat i no u r lying i trusted u soo much nd u how could u say dat Viru..u r my bst frend u no..i luv him so how can u say dat ??? answer me damnit!!!!

manvi was shouting nd crying sitting on d floor... she was crying coz she no dat her bst frend can never lie to her but today how can she listen sumthing about d luv of her life?? offcouse he was way more important dan her bst frend but little did she no dat her frend viru had always thought about her happiness..nd today she is cryingg over d fact dat what if it come true??
what if all d things said by viru come true???
dats y she is crying nd shouting on him hoping dat he may say dat its not true...he may say dat dis tym he is wrong!!

Dis side her frend who cannot see his frend in pain come nd sit beside her on floor nd tries to console her...

" manvi u hv understand it is d truth m not lying" he said keeping his hand on her shoulder.. manvi just shugs his hands away nd cought his collar nd ask him in a trembling voice..

"what do u want huh?? cant u see me happy!! (shouting) i no u care about me but viru plzzz think about me ( crying still holding his collar) how will i survive without him!! plzz say its not true plzzz say u r just joking plzzz viru" manvi just brokes down in her viru's arms...

viru consoles her "manvi plzz be strong u hv tounderstand its d truth..." manvi immediately comes out of his grip nd stood up followed by him...
"no u hv to understand viru dat it will not be d truth.. it will be d biggest BITTER TRUTH of my lyf nd i will not let dis happen!!" viru who was now worried for manvi came towards her nd put his hand on her shoulder nd tries to explain her.. "manvi plzzz understand he is cheating on u" manvi just shrugs his hand off her nd turn wid a jerk...

"what?? he is cheating on me ?? how could u say dat didnt u knew how much he loves me?? dont u no how he gets hurt if i even got a little bruise?? dont u no dat i cant live without him" (manvi's voice was raising by the passing seconds with her continus sobs) "hv u forget dat we can die for each other... !! hv u forget dat i was d freaking damn person who had fallen for him first!!! hv u forget dat he was not d person who came to me nd purposed i was d one damnit!!! " manvi screamed in her last lines...

"manvi plzzz understand i no u luv him but he doesnt nd i will even gv u d proofs" viru tried to explain her..

. "viru plzzz say it dat u r joking plzzz coz if dis tym heart will break i will be broken...nd i no he luv me it can be ur misunderstanding...ok lets go him nd u clear ur misunderstanding plzzz viru plzzz i no he can never do dat nd i will prove it"

manvi was about go wen viru hold her hand nd make her stay dere.. "ok manvi i will come wid u but we will go tomorrow not now first u relax u will get to no d truth tomorrow..." (viru in mind started thinking.. manvi i dont want u to go now coz den i dont need to gv u d proof u will get to see it in his bed...)

his thoughts were broken by manvi... "viru u no wat y i luv him so much coz he was d first person who touched my heart completely... without saying anything he always said everything through his eyes... d more he ignored me d more attracted i got towards him...nd now i cant leave him i just cant" (again a tear slipped from her eyes )

viru removed all d tears from her eyes nd said.. "manvi just remember dat m wid u nd u hv to bear d truth whatever it is plzz"

(viru in mind - "manvi u says u were attracted towards him noo its just dat he was attracting u from his fake luv... manvi u hv to be strong ndi will never let u be weak")

he came out of his thoughts nd saw her silent he knew dat she was praying inside her dat dis tym he shud be wrong but its d truth d bitter truth which she has to accept.. he broke her chain of thoughts...
"ok now manvi sleep its already 12:30am now" she nodded nd he dragged her towards her bed nd make her lay nd he was about to go wen she hold his hand.

. "viru i luv him alot nd without him i will not be able to live nd i will kill myself" as she says dat viru just make her mouth shut with his finger..
"ssshhh no i will not let dis happen m with u now sleep i also hv to go... hum neighbours hai iska matlab ye nai mai yahi chipka rahu isse pehle wo tumhari khaddus frend aaye mai tumhari balcony ne ja raha hu apni balcony me."

he just stood up wen manvi told him to stay here as she is not feeling gud nd he agrees nd sits beside her.. they both were silent wen manvi broked it..
"u no wat viru how i started luving him?? how he became my lyf ?nd how we met??"

viru looked at her den thought ( in mind - "manvi i want u to forget him nd never remember him but y dont u understand??) he just comes out of thoughts nd speak.. "no i think i no each nd everythibg dat u urself told me on phne as i was not here at dat tym"..
manvi just sits nd then hits his arm nd replies...

"oh buddhu u were not here so u shud no it by face to face den only u will understand"..

Viru thought "i really wish ki kash mai tumhare sath hota..." (in mind)

manvi who now just wanted to be lost in d thoughts of her luv started telling him nd got back in flashback...

SCENE SHIFTS

"Bhai u will not understand u r young now.. u cant understand my pain" a guy said crying to his younger brother..

nd here his brother was thinking sumthing else ...(in mind- "no bro i no what u had gone through nd u dont hv to worry d person who hv done dis to u will hv to suffer more pain i hv given till now)...

d big brother was crying over sum pain nd d younger was giving pain to d person who hv caused it... !!!

every1 says dat if u get a chance in anything just grab it same applies wid luv
if u r getting it from sumwhere just grab it but
no 1 said dat think before grabing it coz we dont no dat if it is for us or not
nd do we need it or not? or how it is?
so being smart is gud but being extra smarter is injurous to health so think before doing anythingg...

(i no update was hell boringgg but to do but u will get more exciting updates after dis )

END..

here chapter 1 ends..nd guys it got deleted from me nd i had already forgotten d same lines i wrote.. so i thought of writing again dont no how it is?? so tell me after reading.. nd sryy for making u all wait i hv been greedy now nd same think applies here before 50 lyks dont ask me for an update... nd if i didnt get den i wil think i was not worth it.. nd discontinue.. kk guys if u lyk it then hit d lyk button nd leave ur feedback or any suggestion u want to gv...-luv aenna 😊