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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG!!!

did i just read that at the end!??!?!

i hope to never hear that ever come out of someones mouth EVER!!!

thats so embarrasing!!!

back to the actual Os which was fantastic!!!

especially the basketball game!!

poor Swayam was trying so hard to talk to her!!

and sharon was trying so hard to not talk about it!!!

and in come the boys to ruin everything!!!

but seriously a great OS!!

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Its such a cuteee OS...

u write romantic/light and tragic concepts with equal brillance 👏👏

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Trouble_Magnet

@Trouble_Magnet

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Posted: 12 years ago

Haha.!!

Nice one..😆

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Prachi

@preitygal99

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Posted: 12 years ago

Fantastic as ususal...

The best thing about your writing is u come up with concepts which no one can think off and then u beautifully pen them down...

Keep writing

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely os.. Sharon's father asking swayam to kiss her again so that he could capture the moment and sharon's mom getting all teary on sharon's first relationship the no banging warning..:p. Great os and a different concept..:)

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

an amazing os once again

u have n art of writing such beautiful things n always ur concepts r diff which I really like

the os was wow n some part were funny too

the basket ball game was fantastic

n swaron was awesome as always

thanx for the pm

keep writing

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

OH!!! my god

loved it

wow!!!

the ending 😲😲

fantastic

great job

BB was amazing
boys have to ruin everything.. 😛😛

great OS
thank you for the pm
do write more
and do pm me

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darkes

@darkes

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J
OMG!!!
did i just read that at the end!??!?!
i hope to never hear that ever come out of someones mouth EVER!!!
thats so embarrasing!!!
back to the actual Os which was fantastic!!!
especially the basketball game!!
poor Swayam was trying so hard to talk to her!!
and sharon was trying so hard to not talk about it!!!
and in come the boys to ruin everything!!!
but seriously a great OS!!

thanks for the comment