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Nikita

@--coco--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Gosh, was that really her father... 😲
He is so cool, Swayam might be superhappy !!! 😆
I, loved the way you portrayed their friendship...
And when Sharon got confused after complementing Swayam , I was like awww...* hehe really loved her confusion *

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Neel

@neeliyer

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

no hanky panky 😆😆😆 .. that was one hilarious os .. nice work .. sharon's dad overshadowed swaron this time ..

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veronica

@SwaRon_rocks

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awesome as usual...hilarious as well..

The end defo justified the title with the father doing the unexpected..

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

beautiful os.. loved it.. swayam wanting confess but not able to n sharon confessed her love to swayam n he was happy.. n said even he had crush on her from d time she kissed him on cheeks was nice n cute.. papa n mama rai prakash were funny n cute.. d way papa was asking swayam to kiss sharon so can take pic was great.. loved d way he said no hanky panky but can kiss n loved d gang's reaction to it.. awesome os... loved it..

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rope_and_anchor

@rope_and_anchor

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Such a cute OS... 😳 lovd it!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Weird. Yes you heard me right. Weird, that was the though that i had when I read the title. But here it is. To my surprise an entirely exceptional and untouched concept. Which according to me no one would have thought abour even in dreams. But you did it in Real. Like seriously what makes your brain work so much? Anyways to be honest this kinda hatke topic deserves appreciation. No doubt you did a fab job. Right from the thought to the execution part. You were amazing. Hatts off to you. Do keep writing such stuffs and keep us updated.

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darkes

@darkes

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -shenz-
Weird. Yes you heard me right. Weird, that was the though that i had when I read the title. But here it is. To my surprise an entirely exceptional and untouched concept. Which according to me no one would have thought abour even in dreams. But you did it in Real. Like seriously what makes your brain work so much? Anyways to be honest this kinda hatke topic deserves appreciation. No doubt you did a fab job. Right from the thought to the execution part. You were amazing. Hatts off to you. Do keep writing such stuffs and keep us updated.

thanks for the comment
and about writing in this subject it just that i've also gone through the same situation in front of my fiance parents so this subject is not unknown to me😆😆

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

It was short and sweet.
I liked how even after Swayam planned his proposal Sharon beat him to it😉
Cool dad!!
I know i'm very late in commenting but i was out of town and got back today.
Sorry about that and thanks for the pm😊

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Rabina

@raveena2807

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

This was so cute...

Both of them liked each other since kindergarten... That is something...

The best part was her father. As soon as he came into the picture after their confession, I just could not stop laughing... A father wants to take picture of his daughter's first kiss... No wonder they were so socked... But remember, just a light peck on lips, no hanky panky!!!

Really enjoyed reading this...

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Cute os :-)

Loved how Sharon was cheering for Swayam

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