What Comes Next? a TaaRey ff - Page 30

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Posted: 12 years ago
Promo seems interesting!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting promo dear...
Waiting for the update..
Hope Taani is fine...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing promo di
Feeling scary for taani
Update soon n PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
intrstng promo...
plz kick karan out soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
😃Hey guys!! thnk u so much for liking n commenting on d promo..i hve finished writing d 10th chapter bt before posting it, just wanted to say thnx to evry1 whu has been reading dis ss, liked dem n commented!! widout u guys i wudnt hve kept going wid dis ss 😃
anyhoo..here's d 10th chapter!! hope u guys like it 😃

Chapter 10

Taani - h..h..hello?? koi hai??😕

* there ws no answer..taani den started banging d door n askd if any1 ws dre for help bt dre ws still no answer..den again a sound ws heard from d RH*

Taani(panicking) - Shit ab main kya karoon!!darwaza toh locked hai n my fone is also dead!!😕mayb I should go to RH..lagta hai waha koi hai..mayb d d3 team r practicing..bt itni raat ko? Chal taani, tere pass koi aur option nahi hai

*Taani den walk towards d RH..once she enterd, she ws shocked! D entire hall ws decorated wid flowers n balloons.. some rose petals were laid down on d floor n spread through d whole area and a romantic tune ws playing in d bg..taani ddnt knw hw to react*


Taani(to herself) - haye krishnaji..yeh sab kya hai??😲 Its so beautiful! N rose petals..my favourite😃..lekin yeh sab,mere liye? Nahi nahi..taani tu pagal hai kya..yeh sab kaun karega..kahin rey toh nahi?lekin woh kyu yeh sab karengge..mayb aaj subah jo hua tha, uske liye maafi mang rahe hai?

Guy - So u liked it?😃

Taani(turned to face whre d sound came from)- Tu! Yeh sab tune kiya kanu?😲

Karan - SURPRISE!! So u liked it motti? Yeh sab maine tere liye kiya hai..tujhe accha toh laga na?😃😃

Taani - tune yeh sab mere liye kiya? Kyu?😲 Aur tune main door lock kiya? Yeh sab kya hai kanu..mujhe kuch samajh main nahi aa raha😕

Karan - motti I hve been wanting to tell u somthng bt kabhi moka hi nahi mila..toh maine socha aaj hi tujhe keh doon yaha pe..hum ek dum akele hai abhi..just u n me..toh I cn tell u nw properly😳

Taani - kanu pls..ur scaring me nw..jo bhi hai tell me nw

Karan - accha baba..ek second

*Karan den goes to d centre of RH..dre ws a small curtain wid a rope attachd to it..karan pulls d rope n d curtain opens..a big banner ws behind d curtain n "I LOVE U" ws written on it*

Karan - I love u taani shikhawat!! 😳I hve been loving u since I laid eyes on u..bachpan se hi I luvd u motti bas kabhi bol nahi paya..bt iss sunehri raat mein,in dis RH..just u n me..i wanna profess my love to u😃..i luv u n I knw dat u luv me too😳

Taani(shocked) - KYA??😲 Kanu..r u mad??yeh sab..kanu I cnt blve it..tu mujhse pyaar? Nahi kanu u hve it all wrong..main tujhse pyaar nahi karti hoon..i mean I like u bt just as a frend, use badkad nahi...main..main..i luvd rey n I always will..im sorry kanu bt I dnt love u..maine tujhe weise kabhi dekha hi nahi😕..u r n always will b my best frend kanu..im sorry..i hope humari friendship iske baad tuttegi(break) nahi kyunki kanu I really cherish our friendship n I dnt wanna loose u..😊

Karan(hysterically) - wat?😡 Motti..nahi..i dnt blve u..ur joking na? pls motti..i knw u love me too..nahi pls motti😭..u cnt do dis to me!! I cnt live widout u motti..wen I moved from jodhpur to Mumbai, I ws so alone widout u😭..fir papane mujhe USA bheja so dat I cn 4gt abt u bt I cudnt..n wen I heard abt u cuming to Mumbai, I took collge transfer here, st.louise..aur ab jab tum yaha ho mere samne, I cnt let u go dat easily..not after all d plans dat I executed n all d hard work I did to make u mine😊

Taani - karan tu pagal ho gaya hai😲..wait wat plans ur talking abt? Kaunse plans n hardwork?😕

Karan - woh kuch nahi..nothing

Taani(shouting) - KARAN!!😡 Tell me at once..which plans??

Karan - okok I will tell u bas dnt get angry..i dnt like it wen u get upset..main batata hoon..woh taani main..woh😕..i ddnt want u to b wid dem..d so called dance team d3..woh log acche log nahi hai taani..dey r nt good for u..dekha na pehle din hi mere sath kya kiya!😡Toh maine bhi socha ki main unko chodungga nahi..n I had to separate u from dem..especially dat mr.attitude, ur mr.reyansh singhania😡..kya samajhta hai apne aap ko..he still thinks he cn get u n seprate u from me! 😡Toh I had to create a distance b/w him n u na baby..toh maine hi woh article likha aur tujhe convince kiya ki d d3 team or rey wrote it..aur ur brthr, swayam..he is very chipku😡..woh mujhe tere se durr karna chata tha..toh maine jhoot bola abt d clubbing thing..he ddnt knw abt it..i wanted u to fight wid him n stay away from him..i wanted u to b wid me taani..humesha ke liye..main tumhe bht khush rakhungga😃..main

PLAK!

*Before karan could finish his sentence, taani slaps him hard across his face..she was too shocked n hurt by wat she heard from karan..she was so angry dat she cudnt control herself n just slapped karan hard..she misjudged evry1 because of him..she trusted him more den her own brother, her frends n even rey whom once she loved n still is in love wid..she thought hw cn she b so stupid in trusting karan..nw she just wanted to get out of here..she ddnt wanna c his face anymore*

Taani(shouting) - HOW DARE U KARAN!😡 Tumne yeh sab kiya..i trusted u more den any1..i thought u were my frend..bt nahi I ws wrong!! 😡U bas***d..ur so disgusting!😡 I dnt wanna c u ever in my life again u get dat?! 😡I hate u karan..aaj se tu mere liye kuch nahi hai samjha na..kuch nahi..nw gve me d keys n let me get out of here warna..😡

PLAK!

*Karan den slaps taani hard across her face..it ws wid so much force dat she fell to d ground..her cheeks had nw reddnd n her lips ws cut n blood ws dripping out from it..karan den moved towards taani n held her wrist tightly, making her stand*

Karan - warna kya haan? Warna kya?😡 Kya karlegi tu? U knw wat, tu mujhe ese nahi chod sakti..u cnt leave me nw😡..i cnt loose u anymore..y cnt u understand dat I love u!😡

Taani(crying) - k..k..karan pls😭..chod mujhe..mujhe dard ho raha hai..pls karan😭..lets just go home n talk ok..pls kanu tu mujhe dara raha hai

Karan - NAHI! Hum ghar nahi jaengga😡..i cnt loose u motti..ab bas ek hi rasta hai to make u mine forever!

Taani(scared n crying) - k..k..k.kya matlab?😲 Karan wat do u mean? Pls kanu let me go😭

*Karan den drags n pushes taani against d wall..she was crying n trying to escape from karan bt his grip ws really tight..she ws crying for help*

Taani(crying) - HELP!! Pls koi hai..pls kanu u cnt do dis😭..pls chod de mujhe..i beg of u..HELP!! KOI HAI?? BHAI!! REY!!😭 Pls

Karan - ssshhh..motti yaha bas hum hi hai😃..maine guards ko yaha se bhaga diya so its just us here..no1 cn hear u motti..nt even ur bthr or ur lover mr.reyansh singhania..nw stop moving so much..it will b easier if u dnt move so much😉

*N a dangerous smirk ws seen on karan's face..Taani ws nw damn scared..she ddnt knw wat to do..she cudnt recognize d person infront of her..she ws screaming n crying her heart out bt dre ws no1 dre to hear her..meanwhile wen all dis ws happening, dre in rey's house, swaron were trying to convince rey to talk to taani n tell her d truth*

In rey's house

Swayam - I cnt blve tum logo ne mujhe iss fake break-up ke bare mein nahi bataya!!Dude rey, im so happy!! U love taani!!😃 tune sab kuch uske future ke liye kiya..wow rey..nw u hve to tell her!!😃

Sharon - yeah rey..go n tell her evrythng..im sure she will understand n come bck to ur life again😊

Rey - nahi guys..i cnt do dat..she has moved on guys😭..woh ab karan ke sath bht khush hai..she told me herself..she said she hates me nw n she is happy wid karan nw😭..i dnt wanna destroy n take her happiness away from her

Swayam- WAT?😲 Tu pagal ho gaya hai kya..itna mahan kyu ban raha hai dude?n taani, meri behen, in love wid dat Bandar karan?😆 Tu pagal hai kya..no ways..dats nt possible rey..i knw my sister..she is just frends wid karan n nthng else..she dsnt love him dude!!😕

Sharon - yeah woh bas ese hi bol rahi hogi as she ws angry wid u rey..dat ws her frustration talking..after d break-up den d article..so she is just frustrated, dats all..tum bas uske saath baat karo rey

Rey - but swayam, sharaon..maine..maine uspe shaq kiya😭..ab she wont talk to me..milegi bhi nahi mere se

Sharon - come on rey..dis is so nt d rey we knw!!😲 U should fight for ur love rey..itni aasani se har kyu raha hai?😲

Swayam - haan dude..i thought u luved my sister!😲 Nw go n talk to her..u wanna loose taani to dat Bandar mr.kanu?😕 rey tu har nahi man sakta..ab jaa aur manale apni star ko..go!!

Rey - u guys r rght!!😃 I hve to talk to her..n dat mr.watever ko toh main!!😡 Taani im coming..tumhe mere life main firse lane ke liye aur tumhe firse pane ke liye main aaraha hoon😃..lekin swayam woh kaha hogi abhi?😕

Swayam - I guess ghar pe

Sharon - wait.. nahi..maine usse ghar jaane se pehle puccha tha ki woh kaha hogi..she said she wud b in d library..kuch kaam tha use😊

Rey - oohh..okok..bye guys..im going to get her back😊n thnx guys..tum log nahi hote toh

Swayam - haan haan...bas ab jyada dialogue mat mar😉..nw go warna mera possessive bhai mode on ho jaega n I wont allow u to go n meet her alone😕

Rey - okok salle..jaa raha hoon..bye!!😃

*N he ran from his house to his car..he ws too excited nw..he cudnt wait to get her back into his life..he knew wat he did ws wrong in pointing his finger on her character..he shudn't hve trusted dat article..nw rey left his house n ws driving towards d collge..meanwhile in d collge*

In college

Taani(crying) - Karan chodo mujhe😭..pls..u dnt knw wat will happen to u aggar rey aur bhai ko pata chalega!!😡So just leave me..pls karan u dnt wanna do dis

PLAK!(another slap by karan to taani)

Karan - shut up taani😡..maine bola na stop moving n stop shouting! Mujhe aur gussa mat dilao!!😡 N weise bhi hume yaha pe koi nahi sunega..hahahahaha..nw u will b mine only motti..always mine😃

*As taani struggled from karan, his grip on her grew tighter..he moved closer to her n removed her dupatta(she ws wearing a suit)..she ws screaming for help n struggling even more..her cheek ws nw swollen n more blood ws dripping from her lips aftr d second slap..karan den rips abit of her blouse n ws trying to kiss her..his face ws just inches away from hers'..just den taani wid all her force n might, kicked karan as hard as she cud..he fell to d ground from d force..dis ws a chance for taani to escape..she quickly took d keys from him n ran as fast as she cud..she reachd d main hall n saw d karan ws allrdy halfway towards her..she could hear him shouting her name in anger..she opend d door wid d keys n ran..she ddnt even realize of d rain dat has poured heavily..she just ran n ddnt stop widout looking back..den suddenly a car stopped infront of her..a guy came out of d car n taani ws surprised to c him dere*

End of chapter 10 😃 wow 10 chapters allrdy!! i hope u guys liked it..sorry if it ws nt upto d mark..dre were so many distractions wen i ws writing it 😕 i promise 11th chapter isse accha hoga..will write it in some peaceful place 😛

pls dnt 4gt to like it n commnt!! jitne likes aur commnts hongey, utney hi inspired main honggi n will cont writing..😃 silent readers pls at least like toh kardo yaar 😉

Edited by forever18able - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres

just completed resing ur whole story in one go..

it was just awsome.. bechara rey karan bich me aa gaya..

n dat karan how could he just do dat... i want to kill dat karan...

it was awsome..


Edited by Archi_Tarrey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
karan🤬
ny ways nw rey n taani wl b togthr... atleast i hope so...
aur us karan wl b🤢
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amaging update and that karan was suck a jerk and at last the misunderstanding was cleared plz update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg awsum yar
arghhh tht karan idiot
updte soon plz darln
cnt wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG that was an amazing chapter ! Karan !! 😡 🤬 How Dare He Do That To Taani !
Why Did you end it at Cliffhanger !
Will be waiting for the next update !

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