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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Raila1014

The last 2 chapters were beautiful and melancholic. You can almost feel the deep chasm between their 2 worlds but then love has no border right? Matters of the heart cannot be controlled and you do not pick that person as they have already been picked for us and we just simply need to find him or her. We have to fight all odds and make a way to turn the you and I into us. They are fighting themselves too hard trying to stay true to who they are. They need to do that but to move forward, one has to adapt and integrate and this is what they have not realized yet. He keeps saying he does not believe in marriage and she needs nothing but marriage. There is a middle ground there if they get rid of all the feelings that they know and embrace the newer feelings. Devi Mayya needs some help to get these 2 to see reasons, will it be Anjali who will act as Cupid? Evil of you to leave the story with him seeing her at the cross road. Is she going to talk to him and get in his car? Pls update soon!


Originally posted by: Raila1014

Poor man, finally he decided to give this thing a chance only to have his world crumble at the sight of the engagement ring. Was she forced into this or did she simply give in after he said he won't change his views? Well I am a believer of Devi Mayya's reflection that nothing is over yet. Go win her back you silly man!


Hey There!

I really loved your first comment.

@bold & blue: Bingo! 👍🏼 We will head towards that .. 😊

Thanks for reading! 🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago

Tomorrow. Anytime before 10 PM IST. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
i hope it is khushi...!
nice teaser
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meshas

what a beatifull FF, came across your wonderfull FF yesterday and read it till chapter 20 till 1.30 am in the morning, couldn't give it up inspite of having to get up at 630am to go to work.

Both fighting with their feelings and love DM playing cupid.

looking forward to your next update and will certainly read your other works.


Welcome on board. 🤗

Thank you so much for deciding to read this story with so many chapters already done.

Keep reading!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Claire0206

Farah that was amazing update.

Thanks for letting me re-live Arnav Khushi saga again.


The pleasure is all mine dear .. to have you all with me in this journey.

Thanks a lot for the wishes. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Bookmarking! :) Off to read now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hoping he will not take his anger out on her .

Get well soon dear !
Update can wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice precap oops god bless u khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Get well soon... Looking forward to reading the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ramyarn

Good that you haven't mentioned the fiancee part in Precap otherwise the anxiety would have made me insane.


It was really a twist. When ASR was trying to give a chance to their relationship, Khushi moved on . She got engaged.
The way u narrated Arnav's reaction was superb.
I liked the chapter from the beginning . His excitement in doing something new , his response when Khushi broke the silence and finally, his numbness when she disclosed the name of her fiancee.


I know I give mindless precaps. 😳 No more precaps of this story. 😛

You last line .. you have perfectly summarized what I was trying to portray throughout the chapter.

Thanks for reading! 🤗

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