SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: Arshix144
Thank heavens I stayed awake and thank you for updating I am grinning again! I can't stop myself, I think I will be a zombie at work tomorrow but it is all worth it because I got to read a chapter out of my favourite book! You should write a book with Arshi stories u know! :D
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PS. I love the lemon reference and the lemony fragrance, I have always used lemony perfumes too ( rambling again :P)

Originally posted by: Arshix144
😲 U are here wohooo I don't usually reserve but I must do here! So here we go RESERVE!

Unreserved:

What an emotionally charged intense chapter, phewww let me breath in and out for a bit! I never imagined Arnav to suffer like he just did, the way you described the emotions again is so damn brilliant I am all emotional and I don't even know what is it that I am feeling! Maybe it is that little bit of suffocation that Arnav was feeling right at the end of the chapter. You started it so wonderfully with Arnav's realization and his willingness to try and only for Khushi because it hit him that he couldn't do without her. Right when he is at peace with himself and his decision about the possibility of making things all better, Khushi surprises him. Wonder what she went through, wait she already went through her own heart break and now Arnav finally experienced it for himself, you certainly did make him suffer so much so that you made me feel sorry for him. ( I don't usually feel bad for him:P)
Kudos for the following:
The world and existence of Arnav Singh Raizada collapsed in a flash and he did nothing to stop it. She had saved him from his dilemma. He no longer needed to try. It was over.
^^ Arnav's realization at what he was planning to do and how she saved him from trying at the same time turning his world upside down. This ought to make arnav babua realize a few other things as well.😉 As they say you can't understand the value of what you have until you lose it. Let's see how he takes the fact that he lost his Lemon to someone else for GOOD.

Finally thank the lord for my favourite character DM and her statement: "It is not over," she whispered, "Nothing is over till it is really over."👏
Thank you Ma'am for this fantabulous chapter (I am running out of adjectives here)! LOVEEED IT and I am looking forward to more already!

PS. Happy Friday, have yourself an awesome weekend!🤗

Dear!

Did I ever tell you, you are super sweet? And cute?

Can't thank you enough for the wonderful comments you leave in my thread. And thanks for that Khushi-wala dance on my OS Contest win. 😉

You know what? If anyone would want to read a book on Arshi, I would really love writing it .. simply because I love writing on them and I cant write on anything else. 😆

I have read quite a handful of stories in this forum and many of them have focused more on Khushi's sufferings. But I believe Arnav had not suffered any less .. he had his limitations but he was in pain too. So I am just trying to show his side of the story here. Khushi's we can assume and understand .. but this man needs to be understood too. 😊

PS: Keep on rambling! 🤗

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gifttag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

All in upside down and inside out in AR.
ASR angry and seething not a good sign as he is afraid his lemon will be someone else's and he can't have that. I just can't see him suffering.
I hope he has got some plan up his sleeve.
Take care and get well soon.

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Chetna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Dear!

Did I ever tell you, you are super sweet? And cute?

Can't thank you enough for the wonderful comments you leave in my thread. And thanks for that Khushi-wala dance on my OS Contest win. 😉

You know what? If anyone would want to read a book on Arshi, I would really love writing it .. simply because I love writing on them and I cant write on anything else. 😆

I have read quite a handful of stories in this forum and many of them have focused more on Khushi's sufferings. But I believe Arnav had not suffered any less .. he had his limitations but he was in pain too. So I am just trying to show his side of the story here. Khushi's we can assume and understand .. but this man needs to be understood too. 😊

PS: Keep on rambling! 🤗

WOW..

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: ducky_anne
I wonder if he'll ever call her that to her face. My lemon. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA Can you imagine her expression? LOL!

LOL .. that would be epic. I know! Arnav Singh Raizada .. can he do it?

Thanks for the comments. 😊

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#645

hey get well soon sweety...

nice teaser:D

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#646

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
What are they doing =/ They really really need to talk.

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
Oh my. This is so well written.
You showed their emotions so well.
The body language was complementing.

Feeling bad for him. Just when he was thinking to change for her, she dropped a bomb.
I really hope they clear it out before they get more hurt.

It really isn't over yet.

@bold & blue: Bingo!! 👍🏼 This has always been the major problem between the two. I will get them to talk. Dont worry! 😃

Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. 😳

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: crazyforarshi
Omg...my darling girl. Do you even know how beautifully you write??? Every chapter I read, takes my breath away. For all the effort you're putting into your work & for the immense affection you must have for all of us, your faithful readers, to entertain us thus...hats off to you sweetie...keep up the good work!

Originally posted by: crazyforarshi
Absolutely...positively...mindblowingly superb...not just Arnav...I was dumbstruck too...so brilliant luv...do keep it up...ab wait karna mushkil ho raha hai...how is he gonna get her back? How long can she sray away from him...awww...ab jaldise bata bhi do jaani...

When you comment like that, all I think of doing is running away and hiding somewhere. ☺️

Thank you so much for the lovely comments. How is he gonna get her back .. wait & see.

By the way, Are you alright? As you said .. things are not ok at your end too? You are still using my edit as your DP. Makes me feel good .. 😳

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: Serene77
This ss has kept me glued...totally..all I did today was to read ur work along with this ss completely in one shot...how I wish this could be another series with our beloved arshi init...every sentence u wrote..I gladly imagined them and felt so right...fabulous writer u are...I really do think someone should take a look at this and do something with it...with arshi...with ur permission of course:) ...I am new here..and am glad I came across ur work...fantabulous work...now waiting for ur update...eagerly...very unique title...loved it...magical connection between them just drew me in and am in a haze...I'll stop now:) as u can see I m loving ur writing ...and can go on...

Originally posted by: Serene77
I have finished reading your 20 chapters for the umpteenth time now..:) I almost have it by heart..and starting to feel weird about this addiction to this fantastic story...am counting down to Friday as u r going to update... And the fun part is its my wedding day...and I'll treat it as my gift...am waiting patiently...and feel guilty that I'm waiting for this a tad bit more than my wedding day...I ve commented before but I seriously think ur characterization isso fantastic that this actually could be an entire serial ... That would blow all the trps etc etc...:)

Originally posted by: Serene77
Wow.. What an emotional update.. He is heartbroken and torn.. Her engagement gave him a jolt. Am glad the direction story is taking. Absolutely love love love this arnav and kushi..and love the fact that the story mostly revolves around only them. You have a way of writing that is on a different level altogether. Impact full and addictive. You almost have an invisible hold on us readers. Your way of story telling is outstanding.now I see a lemon, I think of kushi:) . I did read everything u wrote . Absolutely loved all of them.

Thank u for updating as I mentioned in my previous post that today is special for me and u made it more special. And I sincerely hope this is just not a hobby for u. U could totally make it ur profession..

Ok! I really dont know how to reply to you properly. All I can say is readers like you really make me feel special. Especially, when you say this story could be just another show around Arnav-Khushi, I feel like my effort to write this story is paying off. Thank you so much.

Thanks for taking time to read my works. I do know some of those are way too lame. 😳

I hope your anniversary was wonderful. 😊

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ENLIGHTENED1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#649

take care dear ... and v r waiting huh just cannot help it

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: GrumpyBee

This SS is one of the most beautifull piece I read in the forum.I was recommended this to read long time back,finally I decided to give it a read after putting down for long.
😳

I am glad i got to read this SS,Its like IPK #2 .The scenes ,dialogues recreated,reused to be woven in same IPK magic.Kudos to u dear👍🏼Its SO beautifully written.

The intial attraction betn. These two.Arnav was bewitched or what with Khushi fragnance of lemon.Whenever Arnav got the lemony smell ,here While reading I used to imagine him breathing in Cinthol fragnance,ONLY lemony smell I can recollect.😆

My fav character ,has to be Devi Maiyya ..She is just SO AWESOME.Her interventions where all so cool.😆loved the humor you put in with her,its refreshing,just like the lemony smell.😉

I also love,loved the way you recreated,improvished the scenes .Like the Jaadu hai Nasha hai,followed by complete Kiss☺️[thanks for putting in Aman's phone call,]then Arnav dropping her off to home,he dint had to search for her like in show ,[I hated this scene,and heartbreak that followed],but ths part here in the story is my fav,later him asking her about her earring ,❤️smile,blush,smirk I love it all.

Liked La character here too.She was just like the way she had to be strong.To walk away with hurt bt head held high,nt before giving advice to Arnav.

The fashion show accident was handled well by ASR.Khushi misintrepretd the whole thing.But I loved the way he held her,and she letting him hold and soothe her.

The last part of the update was so well written-first his fear rising with thought that she wont be waiting for him,,with each passing second as he was nearing the spot,the conflict in his head ' she will be' she wont .Finally the relief seeing her there waiting for him as always.❤️

Beautifull

IPK#2. Can we dream for anything better?

Thank you so much for the lovely words dear. I was quite apprehensive about using scenes & dialogues from the story but I wanted to recreate it .. in a way that would make me and many other feel better. So I feel wonderful when you say that you like my rendition. Cannot thank you enough for the encouragement.

keep reading. 🤗

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