SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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meem17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Wonderful update
Loved every bit of it
Thanks for the pm

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

i was tensed! but the conversation went well.. realities placed before them once again.

but now, why was khushi standing there again , waiting for arnav's car?? is she trying to act normal?

when's the next update coming?

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Awesomeforever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Omg...my darling girl. Do you even know how beautifully you write??? Every chapter I read, takes my breath away. For all the effort you're putting into your work & for the immense affection you must have for all of us, your faithful readers, to entertain us thus...hats off to you sweetie...keep up the good work!

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samarablog

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Wow lady,
in the end, u got all of us; am pretty sure!
:)

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PoochiePie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Hug was the best part of the update today!!<3 Khushi crying her heart out and Arnav there to support her. <3

"Why don't you believe in marriage, Arnav Ji?"

"I .. just don't .."

"Will you ever?"

"I don't think so."

I wish I could hate Arnav for saying so. But can I? 😳 I just know he himself will have to change his answer soon..coz he is already addicted to his lemon! 😆and moreover, I have trust on Devi Maiyya![and definitely on you, Di 😉]

I love this brother sister bond. Anjali just knew that there was something wrong without even Arnav telling anything.

Come on Anjali, its the matter of your Brother's life. Investigation chalao! What is he upto? 😉

I was really heartbroken when Arnav did not find Khushi at their spot..but when the chapter ended, I had a biigg smile on my face!!😃

His lemon is back! Waiting for him!

Arnavji, don't give a hard time time to DM..let her rest for some-time!

Mentos khao, aur dimag ki batti jalao!😆😆..Why don't to realize that Khushi is so important for you because you love her dammit!!

Thanks for the PM! 😊

Its almost 1:30 am here..and I thought to comment or else I'll forget it like the last time.. Im feeling very sleepy...so have no idea what I just wrote..

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sanam

@sanamsky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

thank u for update love it

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deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

the update was just mind blowing. was very beautifully wriiten!

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saga_twilight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

There is a Devi Maiya f0r sure!! This is really an update I can fall in ishq wala l0ve with. First the face-0ff, if I may call it s0, and then the anguish and then the m0st beautiful thing, fear. Fear f0r h0pe. H0w can any0ne win 0ver that? Beautiful

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Dreamcatcher

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Congratulations on new thread!

Beautiful chapter, enjoyed the dilemma of 'to be or not to be' between Arnav and Khushi. But she is still standing at her spot and waiting for him. I don't think it's going to be this easy for Arnav. Looking forward to read what happens next.