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Posted: 12 years ago
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gd morning... this is the day we all arjunians wait for ... saturday.. bt unfortunately today there is no arjun so from my side this is just a small thing to entertain u...
Part 2
New character: senior inspector nishant mallik: tall, dark, handsome, well built body.. and loves to mingle with people.. though sincere towards workk..(thanks for the idea of putting jealousy.)
In the morning.. both were ready .. there was another officer that had cme to help them..
Nishant mallik: gd morning sir.. mein senior insp. Nishant rathore sir ne bataya hoga..
Arjun: good to u insp. Mallik..
Nishant: sir apke saath miss mukherjee bhi?
Riya enters then..gd morning arjun sir..
Arjun: riya yeh hai.
Nishant offered his hand to riya for handshake: nishant mallik.. aur aap miss riya mukherjee am I right?
Riya: yes sir..please to meet u..
Both are smiling and looking at eachother' nishant still holding riya's hand,,,arjun jealous'
Nishant: waise shree ne kahan tha ussee kahin zyada beautiful hai aap..
Riya flashes her dimpled smile: thank u..and aap usee kahin zyada handsome hai..
Arjun: agar pyar mohobat ki batein khatam hogai ho toh chale?
Nishant and riya: jeee sir..
trio went to the jungle.. slowly nishant gave a rose to riya with a wink escaping from arjun's eyes' bt wooh arjun hi kya jiske nishana chukk jay..( I mean riya..)
they roamed in the jungle to find sme clues..nishant always with riya' holding her hand'going close to her..he was actually flat on riya the moment he saw her'and arjun was glaring at them.. bt couldn't do anything abt it..his feelings came out in form of anger..
it was almost going to be sunset..
finally riya found the base camp from where the tribals use to attack.. actuaaly they used to train poor children from their teenage for this,,
nishant: wow riya aapne bohot achcha kaam kiya'apki nazar bohot teez hai..
Arjun: senior inspector nishant I hope rathod ne apko yahan riya ki tarifon ke pool bandhne ke liye nahi bheja hai.. abhi hum sirf monitor karnege. We cant attack on themm.
Riya: (khud toh kabhi tarif karte nahi koi aur karo toh bhi inko taklieef hoti hai.. oh kya karon apne mr . akdu ka) par sir hume etf ko inform karna hoga aur back up force bhi mangani hogi
Arjun: pata hai mujhe.. mein rathore inform kar diya par 2 din tak kuch nahi ho sakta .isliye hume tab tak inse bachke rehna hoga' wapas chalte hai..
Suddenly in the middle of that there was a trap and riya's leg got into it..
Riya: arjun sir'.(riya ko sirf arjun ka hi naam ata hai as usual)
Arjun: riya riya'kahan ho tum' riya..
Bt nishant saved riya from the trap' arjun found riya bt wat he saw added to already risen anger. Nishant had held riya in his arms'(just like arjun did whn she was shot )'and he was giving her so much extra care...
Arjun: yeh riya bhi kisi se bhi madad le leti hai' pata nahi kab badi hogi yeh' aur yeh nishant iski toh mein aise jagah posting karaunga jahan ek bhi nahi ladki nahi hogi..hw dare he flirt with riya??
Arjun: riya sambhal ke kaam kiya karo.. pata rathore ne tumhe yahan bhej diya.. kam se zyada tum par dhyan dena padta hai'
Nishant: arjun sir wooh ek trap koi phas sakta tha..usme riya ki kya galati hai..
Arjun: mein eske saath kaam karta hoon achchi tarah se janta hoon esi musibat ka doosra naam hai riya mukherjee'
Riya was so hurt by his words and even her wound did not give her so much pain'tears were flowing down her eyes..arjun turned his face..he can say harsh words to riya bt cant see her cry'
Arjun: wapas chalo andhera hone wala hai..
Riya: nishant aap mujhe neche utariye mein khud hi chalungii.
Nishant: oh no riya pata nahi chot kitni gehri ho.. please mein apko uthake chalta hoon'
Riya in nishant's arms' and arjun fuming in anger.. clenching his fists.. they reach the hotel..
Nishant took riya to her room..examining her leg.. arjun knew she might have twisted her leg.. so he asked the servant there to gve hot water into riya's room..
Servant: yeh riya memsaab ke chot ke garam pani..
Nishant: par humne toh nahi mangaya.kisne bheja?
Riya: arjun sir ne..
Nishant: jee kisne?
Riya: pata nahi'kisne bheja hai bhaiyaa..
The servant left the bucket.. riya knew arjun couldn't bear sme1 close to her.. even whn shree or chotu were close to riya.. he use to give them a tough work that could lead them away from riya for hours..(jealous rawte)'
Riya: nishant thanks I can manage'
Nishant left the room with a smile..arjun noticed..lagta hai ese samjhana padega ki riya se durr rahe'I hope yeh case jldi solve ho jay aur hum mumbai wapas chale jay.. warna yeh pit jayega mere haathon se..
He went to see riya..to check on her'bt saw her sleeping..slowly went near her bed, sat on the edge of the bed..saw her hurt leg..
Arjun: I m sorry riya tumhe daantne ke liye , par tumhe takliff mein nahi dekh satka issliye tumhe yahan nahi lana chahta tha'
He saw one string of her hair was disturbing her sleep..so hesistently he let it behind her ears'
Riya was in sleep bt hw is possible that she dnt recognize her arjun's presence.. she heard everthing and felt happy that he cares for her,..
Riya: mere akdu kamal hai jahan pyar ki zarorat hai wahan daant aur daant mein bhi pyar chupa hai..

hope u all like it... waiting for ur comments...

Edited by pinkerbell - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
awsum update...
ooo riya hurt...:(
and jealous arjun... cute...
uff arjun bhi na... care karta hai to btata kyu nai...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
amazing update :) loved it
wow new officer :)
arjun was jealous :) great
nishant gave rose to riya 😆 and arjun saw it
yayyy nishant saved riya and arjun was so angry
poor riya was crying
awww arjun can't see her in pain
and riya heard everything arjun said :)
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
awesome update
loved it:)
omg…riya hurt:(
nishant saved riya…
nice to see angry n jealousy arjun…
wow…arjun cared for riya but he was hiding hmmm…
cant wait…
cont soon…
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
awww,arjun cares so much for her
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
awww so cute ...both arjun and riya are so cute...pls continue soon yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Wow superb dr
Add me ur buddy list and also pm list I love ur work
Pls update soon
My kadus rawte
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Awesome update dr.

Nishant was flirting with riya tht too in frony of Arjun. Bad move but i loved it a lot.

Awww Arjun was jealous n vented it out on Riya n made her cry. Poor gal.

Loved Arjun's concern for Riya which was hidden behind his anger.

Thanks for pm.

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Awesome update... jealous Rawte...hmm interesting!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Awesome update.
Jealous rawte.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.

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