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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
nice updt
may be arjun has alrdy fall in love with ri
but did not relise
riya drink musrum soup bcoz its made by arjun
so romantic
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
that was such a awesome update :) loved it
arjun and riya's dance was beautiful
both of them lost in each other ❤️
arjun again scolded riya 😭
so arjun was actually worried for riya
omg riya drunk
but love the way she was answering arjun
love the way he made riya sleep
awww both of them said sorry to each other
how sweet arjun made mushroom soup for riya
oh no riya was allergic to mushroom soup and because of it she got fever and rashes on her face 😭
awww so she drank the soup just because arjun made it :)
glad that arjun realized his mistake
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
WOW ITS IJUST AMAZING THE DANCEN MUSHROOM SOUP😳THNX FOR THE PM WAITING FOR MORE
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Gustakh Dil..
In Evening:-

Shree & Chotu come to meet Riya..

Chotu(suprizingly):-Ri..tu real me crazy he..tu ne soup sirf iss liye piya kyo ki sir ne banaya tha..I just cant belive this..agar kuch jayda ho jata toh..?teri tabiyat jyada bigad jati toh..

Riya:-are par hua toh nahi na..I am fine yaar..

Shree(in mind):-Riyu..tu sach me Arjun sir se kitana pyar karati he..par dar lagata he,Riyu..tera dil kahi tut na jaye..aakhir best friend hu Riyu..agar sir ne tera dil tod diya toh tu bhi tut jayegi..aur ye mein nahi dekh sakhata..hey bhagawan..sab thik ho jaye..Riyu ko har woh khushi mile jispe usaka haq he..

Riya:-Shree..tu nahi chillayega muzpe..?

Shree:-chillane se koi fayada bhi nahi he..

She smile..

Chotu:-dekh..Ri..ham tere liye chinise laye he..you like it na..

Riya(excitedly):-like..?I love it..yaar..

Arjun come in room..

Riya:-Arjun..aapka dinner..?aapko toh chinise accha nahi lagata..

Arjun:-toh kya hua..?ek din kha lunga..jaise tumne mere liye soup piya tha waise kya me tumhare liye chinise nahi khaa sakata..aur waise bhi muze chinise se koi allergy nahi he..

Shree & Chotu suprizingly look each other..Riya smiles..

They take dinner..

Shree:-chal Riyu..ye medicine le..(he gives her medicine & water..)aur ye baki ki extra medicine apne pass rakh le..pata nahi kab zarurat pad jaye..

Riya:-tu he na..toh muze kya tension lene ki zarurat he..

Shree:-lekin isaka matalab ye nahi ke tu apna khayal na rakhe..chal abhi ham log nikalte he..you sleep..& take rest..

Shree & Chotu leaves..

When Arjun come back to Riya's room..she was in sleep..he come near to her..pull blanket over her..& note down name of the medicine in his mobile..& leave..

Next morning:-

Riya get up..& be ready to go office..she come to hall..where Arjun is already waiting for her..

She sit on dining table..

Arjun:-ye lo..(she passes her the boul of soup..)

Riya:-soup..?

Arjun:-ha..par sweet-corn soup he..mashroom soup nahi..

Riya gives him smile..

Arjun:-mashroom soup toh mein tumhe khwab me bhi nahi lene dunga..

She gives him dimple smile..& take the soup..

Riya:-wow..it's yummy...really..I cant belive Arjun..aap toh accha khana bana lete ho..

Arjun(somewhat sadly):-hmm..Roshni ke jane ke baad hi sab sikha banana..

Riya also become sad to see him like this..& take soup quietly..Arjun come to know that due to him,her mood also become sad..he try to cheer her up...

Arjun:-tumhe soup sachhi me accha laga ya tum asie hi meri tariff kar rahi ho.?

Riya(excitedly):-are nahi..sachhi me accha laga..mein toh ye soup roz lene ko tayar hu..

Arjun(with smile):-hey..par mein roz nahi banana wala ha..tum bimar ho issliye banaya he..warna me roz roz tumhari seva nahi karunga ..

Riya(smile):-ha ha pata he..dont worry..mein hi roz aapke liye breakfast banaya karungi..

He smile back to her..

After 2-3 days..

Riya come to Arjun's cabin..

Riya:-Arjun ye file..meine complete kar li he..

He look at her..she has ware a black colour top today..& that colour is really suits her..

Riya:-agar isame koi addition karna ho toh..

Arjun(looking to her):-baitho..

She sits..& looking to him..

Riya(worrily):-kya hua..file me kuch mistake ho gaya he kya..?

Arjun(get up from his chair..& walking towards her):-wahi dund raha hu..kuch toh mistake he..kuch toh chut raha he..

Riya:-oh..god..fir se ye file dekhni padegi..par muze toh yaad he meine sare points add kiye he iss case se related..

Arjun(put his both hand on both side of her chair..& coming closer to her):-hm..now I get it..

Riya(looking to him):-kya...?

Arjun(coming closer to her.his face is very close to her):-you have not ware ear-rings today..

Riya(surizingly):-kya..?

Arjun:-perhaps you forget to ware..

She touches her ear..

Riya(nerviously..as he is very close to her):-ya..I forget..I just come..(she want to get up from chair..but she cant as he has placed his both hand on both side of chair..)

Arjun:-par fir bhi tum itani bhi buri nahi lag rahi ho..

He come closer to her..& his lips are just inches away from her..

Suddenly they hear knock on the door..& he come back to reality..he moved to his chair..& ask to come in..while Riya is still sitting on chair with shock what she had just heared..

Shree come inside..

Shree:-sir..ye file..isape aapke signature chahiye..

Arjun make the signature on the file immigiately & still looking to Riya..

Shree goes..& before Arjun could stop her,she leaves hurrily behind Shree..

Arjun(in mind):-what the hell..?what you were about to do Arjun..?are you gone mad when you see her..?control youself..now..

After 2-3 days:-

They all are gone to commissioner's party..Arjun who don't want to come for this party,just come to that party because Rathod force him to come..

They are chatting..& meeting other officers..Arjun & Rathod are busy in meeting their seniors..

Riya has ware white & pinkish anarkali dress..in which she is looking so beautifull that almost everyone who is meeting to her praises her..Arjun who is busy in talking with some senior..suddenly get view of Riya..

Arjun:-ya..she is looking too beautiful..

He kept looking her from where he was standing..

Rathod(who understand that Arjun lost in Riya):-itana kya dekh raha he usse..ghar pe jake aaram se dekh sakta he..aakhir biwi he woh teri..

Arjun look to rathod..Rathod winked to him..

Riya,Shree,chotu,Sonali..are chatting ..suddenly a officer come to their group..

Officer(looking to Riya):-hey..if I am not making any mistake..you are..Riya mukherji..right..?

Riya:-ofcourse..Aman..

Aman:-oh..ho..kitane dino baad mil rahe he ham..

They both shakes hand

Riya:-haa..delhi se jab meri transfer hui thi tab ham aakhari baar mile the..

Aman:-haa..bilcul..ab tumhari transfer kaha he..?

Riya:-mein ETF ke liye work kar rahi hu..

Aman:-omg..that's gr8..

Riya:-aur tum..?

Aman:-are meri transfer abhi ek month pehale hi Mumbai hui he..

Riya:-gr8..

Upto this moment,Rathod & Arjun also joins the group..

Riya introduce all to Aman..

Aman:-gr8..aap sabse milkar khushi hui..Riya..if you don't mind..will you dance with me..?(he gives her his hand)

Riya:-sure..(she also gives her hand in his hand..)

Arjun(who look this,angrily):-Riya..(take her another hand in his hand..)come with me..(& pull her to him..due to this her hand from Aman's hand get escaped..& she almost hit on Arjun's chest..)

Riya(confusingly):-what..?

Arjun take her to a corner..

Arjun(yelled her):-pagal ho tum..?are you mad..?

Riya:-par hua kya he..?

Arjun(angrily):-kya hua..?tum aise kisi ke bhi sath dance karogi kya..?

Riya:-are nahi..mein janti hu usse..meine aapse usaka introduction toh karwaya na..

Arjun:-tum toh aise keh rahi ho jaise barso se usse janti ho..tum usake sath dance nahi karogi..& it's final...

She gives him angry look..& return to the group immigiately..

Riya:-sorry..Aman mein tumhare sath dance nahi kar sakti..

Aman(who was already suprized whatever happened):-it's ok..Riya.we will meet later on..bye..

Riya:-bye..(& she gives again angry look to Arjun)

All other ETF member are looking to each other suprizingly..

After the party finished..Arjun & Riya in car to return home..

Arjun is driving quietly..

Riya(angrily):-this is too much..meri merzi he..muze jisake sath dance karana hoga mein karugi..

Arjun:-shut up Riya..

Riya(angrily):-why should I shut up..?

Arjun(take a deep sigh..& try to control his anger):-dekho Riya..mein tumhe dance karne se mana nahi kar raha hu..par atleast aise kisike bhi sath dance..

Riya:-he is my friend..I know him..

Arjun:-sirf janane se ye nahi pata lagata ke woh insaan accha he ya bura..I was just trying to protect you..

Riya(angrily):-protect..?I don't need your protection..I am ETF officer ..but perhaps you forget..

Arjun:-I have not forget it..I am just telling you,that jin logo ko ham thik se jante nahi unpar bharosa nahi karana chahiye..

Riya:-gr8..aaj aap Aman ke bare me aisa keh rahe he..kal ko toh muze Shree ke sath dance karne ko bhi mana karege..?

Arjun:-nahi..mein aisa nahi karunga..I know..he is you best friend..

Riya is still fuming in anger..Arjun stops the car..put his both hand on her both cheek..

Arjun:-look Riya..dont take me wrong..but I just try to..(he pause)ok..I am sorry..mein toh bas tumhe usake sath dance nahi karne dena chahata tha..

Riya:-it's ok..

She remain quite..& thinking about what Arjun has just said..

Arjun now just want to make her talk to him..

Arjun:-well..this dress really suits you..

Riya(suprizingly):-thanks..

He smile to her..she also smile back him..

Arjun(in mind):-oh..god..Arjun..kya ho jata agar woh usake sath dance kar leti..?kya ho gaya he tuze..?tu Riya ko kisi aur ke sath dance karte bhi dekh nahi sakta..you are loosing you mind..Arjun..stop it..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Ah ha Arjun jealous... cool... hmm looks like soon he vl tell not to talk to other guys... Riya vl smack him for sure... update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Arjun jealous... cool... Love Ariya moments... continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
superb update...!!!
wow arjun pe riya ka asar hone lag gya hai...!!
he made her breakfast and even ate chinese with her and shreetu...!!!
riya and shreetu convo was lovely...!! loved shree's concern for riya...!!
arjun's cabin scene was very romantic😉 wow he is lost in her...!!!!
aur party mai jealous arjun aur bhi badia...!!!
love the way he made her understand why he did that...!!!
continue soon...!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
hey u again...With again a brillian story...😊
but i didn't saw this in Arjun forum...y it is shifted directly to fan fic...😕
but i guess m lucky to find this..😊
have read it in one go...
Its awexome...the story plot is really great...😊
plzz send me pm wenever u update. n add me to ur bussy list..I dnt knw how to send buddy request...
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
filhaal muje dubaara padne ki jarurat hai beech mein aisa scene aaya ki dimaag ne hosh kho diya lolllzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Awesome update dr.

Loved choree's n Riya convo. Thy really r true friends.

Awww Arjun ate chinese only caz of Riya. Thats so sweet.

Loved Arjun's care n concern for Riya.

Wow I dont knw tht Arjun observed her so keenly.

Waaaooo Arjun felt jealous caz Riya agreeged to dance with Aman n he can't see her with somebdy else.

Arjun always lose his control whn Riya is around him. Thats great.

Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon.

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