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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh NO!! Sikki!! U BAS****
Aur Roshni Jii... Aapki kahaani mein Dam nhi lag raha!
Kuch to choot raha hai..!!
SAMEER BHAI!! R u serious? Mumbai mein kidnap... Baagi to direct DELHI?! R U SERIOUS?!
I KNOW... Main jo bhi bol rhi hoon vo Roshni k khilaaf hai.. Bt M Just too worried for Riya!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update :) loved it
oh no sikander kidnaped riya 😡😡
and sikander is taking his revenge on arjun
roshni is definitely hiding something from them
sikander drugged riya 😭
feeling so bad for riya 😭
hope they find riya soon
and kill that evil sikander
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
please continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
omg sik kidnapped riya
poor riya hope she ll be fine
something is def wrong with roshini
roshini sik's entry, riya's kidnapping there is some connection b/n all these
i am not convinced with her mumbai delhi story, is she with sik???
everybody believes her so blindly, these guys are really gone out of mind
liked shree's outburst
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gutakh Dil..
The video is on now ETF group where Riya is laughing on some joke done by Chotu..Arjun feels something is aching his heart..he has become the reason behind her kidnap..her pain..

Rathod told whole the team that they have to keep the news away from media that Riya is kidnapped..

After sometime:-

Rathod(looking to video):-wait..wait..Shree uss aadmi pe zoom karo..

Shree zoom that man..

Rathod:-woh ussi direction me photo click kar raha he jis direction me ham log khade the.

Shree:-par ye confirmly nahi keh sakte..

Rathod:-yes you r right..aage ka footage dekho..

They view the video & come to know that the same guy has click photos of Riya & Arjun..

Arjun:-Shree pata karo woh kyon he..

Shree leaves..

After Sometimes:-

Shree:-sir usaka naam sub-inspector patil he..

Arjun :-usse abhi lekar aao..

Rathod:-Arjun bhul rahe ho woh bhi police force me he..ham usse aise hi arrest kaise kar sakte he..

Arjun(angrily):-kuch bhi karo Sam..par muze woh apne interrogation room me chahiye..

Rathod make call to commissioner..they get Patil to investigation..

Arjun(yelled to Patil):-batao..tumne Sikandar ko kya information di he..

First Patil did not agree..but Finally you know truth can not hide from our ACP..

Arjun(pointing gun to head):-thik he..tu kuch nahi jante na..?toh fir tum mere kisi kaam ke nahi ho..par mein tumhe aise nahi chodunga..tumhare jaise gaddar ko maar dalunga toh muze koi farak nahi padega..

Patil(get horrified now as he has hear very much about Arjun's anger..):-no..no..mein sab batata hu..

Rathod:-bolo..

Patil:-meine sirf aap dono ki photo click kit hi..

Rathod:-kyo..?

Arjun:-bolo..

Patil:-sir..woh aap ki wife he hi itani khubsurat ke..

Arjun punch him..

Arjun:-ab agar usake bare me kuch bhi bologe na toh sare daat(teeth)tod daluga..muze sirf sach sunana he..

Patil:-woh photo meine Sikandar ke ek agent ko diya..

Arjun:-kaha milega woh..?

Patil told them the address..in slum area of Mumbai..

ETF team hurrily go there..(plz imagine the fighting sceans in slum area..)they caught the agent..but he can not told them more information he just told them that he handover that photo to "Rustam bhai" & told them Rustam's adda..

In ETF Office:-

Arjun(angrily to Rathod):-lekin ham abhi uss Rustam ko pakadane kyo nahi ja sakte..

Rathod:-Arjun..pagal ho gaye ho kya..?kitani raat ho chuki he..iss waqt uss area me jayege toh usake bhag jane ke chances hi jyada he..

Arjun hits his leg to chair..

Rathod:-guys..ab ham sab ghar chalate he..

Arjun angrily leaves..

He reach to home..& collaps on sofa due to frustration..Roshni starts moving her hand through his hair..

Roshni:-Arjun..bahot thak gaye ho na..?tum jao fresh ho jao..meine tumhare liye khana lagati hu..

Arjun:-Rosh..plz..mera bilcul mood nahi he kuch khane ka..

He about to leave but realized that Roshni's eyes are filled with tears..

Arjun (hold her face in his hands):-hey..kya hua..?

Roshni:-sab mere wajah se hua he na Arjun..?agar mein wapas nahi aati toh..

Arjun(put his finger on her lips):-no..aisa mat kaho..isski wajah tum nahi mein hu..aisa kuch bhi nahi hota agar mein Riya se shadi hi nahi karata..(wipe her tears..)chalo kuch khalo..muze pata he tumne bhi kuch nahi khaya hoga..

Roshni:-ek shart pe khaugi..agar tum bhi mere sath khaoge..

He nodded positively..they started taking dinner..after sometime

Arjun(in mind):-pata nahi Riya ne kuch khaya bhi hoga ya nahi..(he remember her scream to Sikandar..)

He get up & started walking to bedroom..

Roshni:-Arjun..?

Arjun:-bas tum khalo..mera ho gaya..

Next morning:-

They somehow caught "Rustam bhai.." he told them another agent's name-"Chota ambar"(hey guys..all these names are imaginary)

Arjun:-what is this..?aise ham kab Sikandar tak pahochenge..?

Rathod(put his hand on Arjun's shoulder):-Arjun..

Arjun:-pehale patil-fir woh agent-fir ye rustam aura b ye chota ambar..aise toh Sikandar tak pahochne ke liye hame kayi din lag jayage..aur tab tak Riya..(he almost teary..but manage to hide his face looking to window..)

Rathod:-ham uss tak pahoch jayege Arjun..dont worry..

Arjun:- par kab..?aur kitani der..?

Rathod(in mind):-I know Arjun ..ke tum kitane pareshan ho..sab kuch bilcul thik chal raha tha..aur muze toh lagane laga tha ke tum Riya ko pasand bhi karane lage the..par Roshni wapas aa gayi aur sab badal gaya..sab kuch..(he take a deep sigh..)

Rathod(looking to chotu):-Chotu..sab informers ko activate karo..muze ye Chota ambar kisi bhi halat me chahiye..

Chotu:-yes sir. (& leaves..)

The next 2 days passes in tesion..they don't get any information about "Chota ambar" Arjun continue bursting on their informers..from the day Riya leaves his house he cant not sleep..& if he fall in sleep due to tiredness..the bad dreams about Riya never let him sleep..

Rathod:-Arjun..

Arjun:-what is this..?do din ho gaye..hame kuch bhi information nahi mili he..

Rathod:-they are working on it..Arjun..try to be calm..

Arjun:-how can I..?ab pure 5 din ho gaye he Riya ko kidnap hue..aur ham kuch nahi kar paa rahe..how can we become so helpless..?

Rathod(frustrated tone):-chalo..conference hall me chalate he..ho sakta he Chotu ko kuch information mili ho..

In conference hall:-

Shree is sitting holding his head..& liza is sitting on chair next to him..

Shree:-liza..Riyu thik toh hogi na..?dekh na..jab se hamne patil ko pakada he Sikandar ka ek bhi phone nahi aaya..kahi usane Riya ko kuch..?

(Rathod & Arjun come to hall & hears the conversation..Arjun's hold body shake with fears about Riya..)

Liza:-nahii..aisa kuch nahi hua he..Sikandar ko bhi toh ab tak pata chal gaya hoga na ke ham usake aadmio ko pakad rahe he..toh woh shayad alert ho gaya he..isaliye precaution ke liye hame phone bhi nahi kar raha taki ham uss tak nahi pahoche..

Shree:-apr Riyu..thik toh hogi na..?

Liza(having tears in her eyes,hold Shree's hand):-haa..woh thik hogi..i am parying for her..god will never let to happened anything wrong with her..

Shree(also keep his hand on her):-aur..woh drugs..?tumhe toh drugs ke bare me pata hoga na..?kya..iss tarah se drugs lene se kya woh drugs addict ban sakti he..?

Liza(don't know how to told him..):-I..woh..ho sakta he ken a bhi ho..par agar woh usse bahot strong drugs de raha he toh..usake drugs addict banana ke chance he..(she look him..he has stop taking breath & looking to her with fear in his face..)par.you know..isase bahar nikana itana bhi mushkil nahi he..& you know..Riya is police officer..she has strong mind..she will overcome..

(Arjun also hears this that there are chance of her become drug addict..he curse himself..& having tears in his eyes..)

Shree(feard & shaking voice):-liz..drugs ka overdose lene se kya hota he..

Liza:-woh..

Shree:-jaldi bata..

Liza:-kuch bhi ho sakta he heart attack or..brain damage..or..or death also(guys plz forgive me..as I write only this just with my imagination..& I really don't know what will happened if someone take overdose..)

Shree looking to her without blinking eyelids..he is in shock..Rathod understand the situation..

Rathod:-Shree..Chotu kaha he..?

Shree & Liza hurrily wipe their tears..

Shree(trying to control himself):-ata hi hoga sir..

while Arjun is still standing where he was..

Rathod(looking back to arjun):-Arjun..?

He come from his thinking..& sadly & sit on chair helplessly..he was only thinking about Riya now..

His thought of chain get breaks when Chotu comes in room..

Chotu:-sir..Ambar ke bare me ekdam confirm news mili he..

They all get excited & hurrily leave to caugh him..

Finally they caught him..& all his men..first he was not ready open his mouth..but you know na..noone can stand infront of our supercop when he started his third degree..

He told them the address of Sikandar..finally they have some hope to catch Sikandar & to save Riya..

They reach to the place where "Ambar "told them..but they don't find anyone there..they return to ETF Office..

Rathod:-dammn it..usane hame galat information di..

Before anyone can speak..Arjun's phone rings..

Sikandar:-kya baat he Rawte..tumhe toh apni biwi se bilcul pyar nahi he..aaj toh mere aade tak pahoch gaye tum..

All are hearing him on loudspeaker..

Arjun:-tumhari dushmni muzse he Sikandar..usase nahi..

Sikandar:-par kya karu..usaka sabse bada kasoor toh ye he ke woh tumhari biwi he..

Arjun(angrily & loudly):-chod do usse..

Sikandar (laugh..):-iatni aasani se nahi Rawte..(he come clse to Riya..open strips on her mouth..)

Riya:-leave me..(she cried out)leave me..(she started crying loudly..)

Sikandar:-haa chod dunga..tumhe..zarur chod dunga..lekin usake liye tumhare pati ko apne aap ko mere hawale karana hoga..

Riya(crying..):-no..no..

Sikandar:-bulao usse..bulao usse tumhari help ke liye..bulao..

Riya(loudly):-no..never..

Sikandar(to arjun on phone):-dekho..tumhari biwi ki aawaz sunane ke baad bhi tumhe usape daya nahi aa rahi..kaise patthar dil insaan ho tum rawte..?

Arjun(angrily):-I am giving you last warning..leave her..

Sikandar(to Riya):-aur chillao..tumhare pati ko sunayi dena chahiye..mein chahata hu..woh zindagi bhar tumhari chike yaad karata rahe..(he give her injection)

Riya:-no..no..plz..dont give me that injection..I don't want..no..no..

Sikandar:-toh bulao..Rawte ko..bulao..

Riya:-no..I never..muze maar bhi daloge toh bhi nahi bulaogi(she cried out loudly..as he snach her hair strongly..)ahhh..no..never..never..

Sikandar(to arjun):-suna tumne Rawte..suna na..

Sikandar come near to Riya & get phone near her mouth..she has gone under effect of drugs now..

Riya(mutters):-no..dont come..dont..Arjun..Arjun..plz..Arjun..dont..

Sikandar laughs..

Arjun(helplessly):-no..dont do anything to her..I will do whatever you say..but leave her..tum jo kahoge mein karuga..sab karuga..par usse chod do..chod do..usako..

Sikandar (laughs..):-then wait for my next call Rawte.. & remember I don't want to see your team..otherwise..tumhari biwi..(he again laugh & cuts the phone..)

Rathod:-Arjun..tum ye kya karne ja rahe ho..?

Arjun:-mein bilcul thik kar raha hu..aur tum log kuch bhi gadbad nahi karoge..jo bhi hoga ab mein karuga..you all stay away from this..ab mein aur Riya ko takleef nahi hone dunga..bas ab aur nahi..

He leaves..

Rathod signal to Shree..to keep track of Arjun's phone continuously..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sik kameen!
riya ko injection diya😈
ab dekh arjun kaise teri chutti karta h

nice

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG wat's Sikki upto... aww Riya
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb dr
Thanx 4 pm me
Sik Tum to gay
Riya ohhh
U r right overdos sai death ho jati hai ya brain damage ho jata hai
Update is superb,amazing,wonderful
Update soon
Sik Arjun ko kya krnay ko kehga??
Mishti
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...!!!

finally they got a clue but waha bhi kuch ni mila😭

aur wo sik ki toh😡😡

how dare he do that with riya...!!! ab to arjun usse zinda nai chodega...!!!!

everyone is so concerned for her...!!! hope they find her soon...!!!

aur ye sik 😡 arjun se kya karwana chahta hai...!!!! hope everything goes right...!!!

continue soon...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
ufff... Its too suspensive... And plzzz jaldi se sikander ko maaro par roshni ka kya vo nakli hai yaa kuch or ufff
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sik ki maa ki...
How dare he touch Riya and drug her...
I will him.
Nahi chorungi uss kamine ko...
Arjun,do something.
Yeh Roshni ki kahani kuch hazm nahi horahi hai.
Oh Lord.
Please bring Riya back.

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