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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such an amazing update :) loved it
so rathore has decided to keep away the news of riya's kidnapping from media
so inspector patil clicked ariya's pictures on sikander's agent request
arjun is really so worried for riya
even shree and liza are so worried for riya 😭
oh no sikander again gave riya that injection
and omg arjun went to sikander's place
hope they rescue riya soon
thanks for the pm
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wala update tha...
but me still angry n Arjun...kyun I dnt knw...
Awww my riya still in pain and dat sik is given her drugs...
Dat sik bast####
Why am I not convinced about this roshini...hey no offence to her lovers plzzz...
So Arjun do care about riya...hmmm
Arjun Went to sik den to safe riya hmmm
Loved the concern shree had...poor shree...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
Love shriza concerned for riya.
Even arjun is worried for riya.
But still i angry on him.
Hope they find riya soon.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update..
So i thnk dre is smthng fishy betwen rosh nd sik..
Aww.. Poor riya..
Hope tf team finds her soon..
Shree is so concrnd for her.. Lovd it..
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice n emotional update dr.

I really want to kill that sik 😡 😡.

I feel like crying 😭 😭 😭 😭 for Riya.

Convo btwn Shriza is really scary.

I hope thy get her back safe.

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon.






Edited by akanksha1371986 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sikky.. Beta Marna to toone hai hi... Ab Riya k saath aisa kar k apni maut ko itna bura banaanee pe kyun chala hai??!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gustakh Dil..
Arjun reach to the place where Sikandar has told him..behind him whole ETf team also reaches..but they found no-one there..just a chair which is having ropes on it..(on which sikandar tied Riya..)

Arjun(angrily):-this is too much..meine kaha tha tumse..mera picha mat karana..usse pata chal gaya hoga ke tum mere piche ho..ab bhag gaya na woh..

Rathod:-woh aise bhi bhag hi jata Arjun..tum akele usse aur usake aadmioko kaise handle kar sakte the..

Arjun:-muze jo karna hota mein kar leta..kam se kam Riya tum logo ke sath hoti..

Rathod:-tum apni hi nahi Riya ki bhi jaan khatare me daal rahe the Arjun..

Arjun:-par jab meine tumhe nahi bola tha..fir bhi tumne mera picha kyo kiya..ab woh aur bhi alert ho jayega..(shaking voice)aur shayad Riya ko aur takleef de..

Chotu:-sir..lagata he usaka yaha rukane ka koi irada bhi nahi tha..

Arjun:-matlab..?

Chotu:-yaha pe ek bomb fit kiya hua he..shayad ek hour se suru kiya he..bilbul aapko yaha ka address banana ke baad..aur abhi sirf 2 minute hi baki he bomb fatane me..

Arjun:-what the hell..?

He starts searching any clue there..

Rathod:-guys..come on hurry up..yaha se bahar nikao..(Shree & Chotu run to door..Rathod look to arjun..he is still looking to the chair..)Arjun..kya kar rahe ho..chalo(he pull him..)chalo yaha se..

Arjun:-no..leave me sam..I have to find some clue to reach upto Riya..I have to..

Rathod:-zinda rahoge toh..usse bacha paoge na..(he almost drag him to door..)come on fast..

They reach to the outside of the place..& behind them..the bomb blasted..

Arjun(angrily to Rathod):-I am giving you last warning..now just stay away from this issue..mein Riya ko bacha lunga..ab tum log nahi mera phone tab karoge..aur nahi mera picha karoge..samaze ya samzau..

He leaves from there angrily..

Rathod(looking to Shree..):-woh chahe kuch bhi kahe..ham na Riya ko khatare me dal sakte he aur na usse..

Shree knows what he has to do..he started tracking Arjun's phone..

Arjun reach to his home..angrily lock himself in room..

Suddenly..his phone started ringing..

Sikandar:-Rawte..meine kaha tha na apne ETF ko sath me mat lana..par tumne meri baat nahi maani..ab isaki saza tumhari Riya ko milegi..(he started laughing..)

Arjun:-no..tum usse kuch mat karna..

Sikandar:-nahi Rawte..aaj toh ye kahani khatam hi kar dunga mein..bas ab choice tumhe karni he..tum ya Riya..dono mein se kisaki maut tumhe chahiye..bolo..(pause..)I know..kitana bhi kyo na pyar karte ho usako..par usake liye apni jaan thodi hi na doge..thik he..sham tak tumhari biwi ki laash tum tak pahoch jayegi..

Arjun(shout):-no..no..tum usse kuch nahi karoge..mein aa raha hu..akele..par tum usse kuch nahi karoge..

Sikandar(laugh):-thik he Rawte..toh fir aa jao..

Arjun hurrily take his gun & leaves..

All ETF team is listening this in Rathod's home..

Rathod:-guys..iss baar ham Arjun ka picha nahi karege..

Shree(worrily):-sir..

Rathod:-ham wahi jayege..jaha Arjun ja raha he..magar dusare raste se..aise raste se jiske bare me Sikandar ne socha bhi na ho..(all nodded..)aur ham log ETF SUV se nahi balki taxi se jayege..ho sakta he ke woh ham pe bhi nazar rakh rahe ho..agar ham SUV se jayege toh woh zarur hame notice karege..let's go..

All leaves hurrily..

Arjun reaches to the place first..It's full of big containers..he hold his gun..

Sikandar:-put your gun down..Rawte..

He come infront of Arjun..but Arjun don't lower his gun..he knows very well that he is surrounded by all Sikandar's men..

Arjun(angrily):-Riya kaha he..?

Sikandar:-oh..hoo..muze pata nahi tha ke tum usse itana pyar karte ho..ke usake liye akele sher ke mu mein chale aaye..

Arjun:-sher kyon he aur chuha kyon..isaka faisala toh ham baad me kar lenge..pehale Riya ko lekar aao..usse jane do..fir ham dono milkar aaram se faisala kar lenge..

Sikandar drag Riya..Arjun just stunned by looking her..she can hardly walk..looking very weak..not even able to open her eyes properly..& the thing which give him more pain is..she is blooding from her stomatch..

Arjun:-meine kaha tha na ke usse kuch mat karna..

Sikandar:-are ye chot..?ye toh thik ho jayegi..agar usse time pe hospital pahocha sake toh..

Arjun:-pehale tum usse chod do..tumne jaisa kaha meine waisa kiya he..usse jane do..

Sikandar(laugh):-nahi..meine tumse apni gun niche rakhne ko kaha lekin tum abhi bhi..

Arjun put his gun down on floor..

Riya(mutter):-no..no..arjun..

Sikandar(laugh):-bas aise hi bebas maut dena chahte tha mein tumhe Rawte..jab tumhare hato me gun na ho..aur tum apne aap ko chahkar bhi bacha na sako..aur tumhe marte waqt ye bhi na pata ho ke tumhare baad mein tumhari Riya ke sath kya karuga..

He point the gun to Arjun..

(plz guys take into account that Riya is under drugs control..& she has also wound at her stomatch..& she is blooding heavily..but in this situation also she is an ETF officer..)

Riya cant see Arjun to be shot infront of her..Sikandar has hold her by one hand..& by another hand he is about to shoot Arjun..suddenly Riya all her strength & push Sikandar..due to this sudden unexpected reaction of Riya, he fall on the ground..(Riya also fall on floor)while arjun manage to take his gun in hand..& shoot to Sikandar immigiately to his head..he dead on the spot..while all sikandar's men get back to sence what haapened..& they started firing on Arjun..(but..dont worry)Rathod & his guys..come on time..& they hide themselves behind the containers..& firing started from both side..Arjun saw that Riya is lying on floor..& struggling to get up..

Arjun(shout..):-no Riya..no..dont get up..lie on floor..I am coming to you..wait..plz..wait..

There are really heavily firing going on from both side..so he can hardly move...but Arjun has fear that some bullet may hit Riya..she has to move to safe side..

He somehow manage to go to her..he take her behind the container..

Arjun(shaking her):-Riya..plz..Riya..aakhe kholo..(she somehow open her eyes..)are you ok..?

Riya:-go..go..& help them..woh bahot sare..aur ham bahot kam log he..help Rathod sir..go..

Arjun:-no..no..you need to go hospital..

Riya:-nahi mein thik hu..jakham jyada gehara nahi he..I can take some more time..you..go plz..

Arjun look her with teary eyes..

Riya:-go..go..

Arjun was about to leave..Riya call him from behind..

Riya:-Arjun..

Arjun(he come back to her again):-haa Riyu..bolo..

Riya:-handover one gun to me..

Arjun:-hmm..(& he leaves..)

He started firing..he found a gun of some goon of Sikandar & he throw it to her..she manage to catch it..& also take position to shoot..

Arjun(shout):-Riya..you take rest..

Riya nodded negatively..

Arjun gives angry look to her..& angrily starts firing to goons..

They fight well..& almost all Sikandar's men get caught..& other died..

After almost half hour..they had finish the battle..they all rush to Riya then..

Shree(shaking her):-Riyu..Riyu..

Riya:-shree..

Rathod:-jaldi guys..ambulance aa gayi he..

Arjun take her in his arms & they hurrily go to ambulance..

They were now on the way to go to hospital..

Shree & arjun both are near to her..shree is holding her hand..& arjun bursting on driver to go fast..while Rathod & chotu(who is teary..)are worrily looking to her..

Shree:-Riyu..kuch nahi hoga..tuze..kuch nahi hoga..

Riya:-I don't want to die..I don't want to die Shree..

Shree(crying):-no..i never let you die..Riyu..I promise..

Riya:-shree..

Before she can say anything she get fainted..

In Hospital:-

All are waiting outside OT..Liza also reached there..they all are very worried..Arjun is helplessly sitting on a bench..& remembering her..while Shree is worrily walking here & there..

Doctor come from that room..

All gathered aroung him..

Shree:-doctor..

Doctor:-she is ok..out of danger..but she is very weak due to very much blood loss..she needs some rest..we required to do some tests of her..but you can meet her after sometime..

After sometime they all meet to Riya..she looks very weak..& closed her eyes..

Rathod(hold her hand):-Riya..ab tum thik ho na..?

She open her eyes..

Riya(weakly):-hmm..mein thik hu..sorry sir..meri wajah se aaj aap sab kitani badi musibat me fas gaye the..mein sach me ETF officer banane ke layak nahi hu..agar hoti toh apne aapko kidnap hone se bacha leti..

Rathod:-Riya..stop blaming yourself..tumse jayda ham sab ki galati he..uss raat to kis mind state me thi ham sab janate he..aur aise waqt me hame tumhe akele jana hi nahi dena chahiye tha..aur kyon kehata he ke tum ETF officer banana ke layak nahi ho..aaj itani ghayal hote hue bhi tumne jo himmat dikahyi he..aur itni chot lagane ke baad bhi tum firing kar rahi thi..I am just proud of you..Riya..

Riya gives a weak smile to him..

Shree,chotu,liza also inquires her..Arjun hold her hand..

Arjun:-Riya..

Riya(remember how she leaves his house..so she avoid his glance & without looking to him):-I am fine..(looking to others..)you all go... & take rest..

Doctor(coming in room):-yes right..they have to go..kyo ki ab mein tumhe nind ka injection dene ja raha hu..so that you can take rest..(he gives her injection..she immigiately hold Arjun's hand very tightly as her nails snach in his hand.. making scratch on his hand..)

Arjun(in mind):-shayad usse drugs ke injection ke incident ki yaad aa rahi hogi..

She immigiately fall in sleep..& her hand holding Arjun's hand get smooth..

Doctor:-aap log bhi rest kar lijiye..mein yaha par itane logo ko rukane ki permission nahi de sakta..(he leaves)

Rathod:-chalo guys..now she is safe..& sleeping peacefully..Liza mein tumhe aur Chotu ko drop kar deta hu..aur..Shree.

Shree:-sir mein yahi pe ruk raha hu..

Rathod look to Arjun that he is leaving or not..but Arjun continue staring to Riya..Rathod understand..that Arjun is not going anywhere leaving Riya..he take a deep sigh & leave..Chotu & liza follow him & leave..

After sometime Shree & Arjun both are also fall in sleep..as the both boys were not sleeped from the day since she get kidnapped..

In morning:-

It's Shree who get up first as his phone buzz off..he look to Riya she is still sleeping..& Arjun also..he try to wake him up..& shake Arjun..

Shree(shaking Arjun):-sir..sir..

Arjun(suddenly get up):-Riya..riya..(he look to her..she is sleeping peacefully..then he look to Shree..)haa Shree..?

Shree:-sir..aap ghar chale jayiye..fresh ho jayiye..thodi der me Chotu aur Liza aa rahe he..fir woh rukenge yaha par aur mein bhi ghar chala jayuga..

Arjun just nodded..he open the door to leave..suddenly look back to Shree..

Arjun:-usake sath hi rehana Shree..usse akela mat chodana..

Shree just nodded..Arjun leaves..

Shree(in mind):-mein toh hamesha usake sath hu sir..sath toh aapane hi chod diya he..
Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update :) loved it
finally sikander is dead
and they saved riya
riya is really so brave
thank god riya is fine now
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super duper fantastic n emotional update dr.

Yippieee Siki is dead 🥳 .

Wow Riya is so brave. The way she tackle herself inspite of her injuries n helped thm to gunned down the goons is truly exceptional.

Happy to knw that she is fine now.

Loved Shree's part in tht whole fiasco.

Also loved his MV about Arjun in the end.

Arjun got his Roshini back.

Nw wht nxt? Wht about Riya?

Eagerly waiting for the nxt update.

Continue soon.


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Posted: 12 years ago




finally sikandar mar gaya...





and my ariya are now together...


par mein kaise bhool gayi ...abhi bhi roshani to hai na un dono ke beech mein


wo jo bhi ho i am happy that riya is safe...

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