SwaRonTanHa FF~Enigma of Fate 2~ epilogue pg 24

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BilluKiBilli

@BilluKiBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

OMYGAWD. Baz, ek week mein do-do updates? :O

YAYYY. <3 Absolutely loved the update and what else can i say? I mean, you being the awesome writer that you are, the update could never be anything less than amazing! :D

AWWW. A trip down the memory lane. I loved it...I remember you used to do the memory lane thing in the earlier chapters of this FF but now it returns and i am SO happy! :D

I loved how Sharon wants to dance with Swayam but at the same time, she just doesn't. Annddd. Swayam being Swayam, he is never gonna let go off of her! <3

Thanks for updating!

Love,

Shagun

Edited by tanhawalaswaron - 12 years ago

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zk456789

@zk456789

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

What a nice chapter swaron lost in their past memories
Love that swayam made Sharon dance but again anger took the place
Mind blowing chapter lovely
Do update soon

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

I wanted to be first! :P But i am not! Screw this light going thing! 😡

Well, well well i can't express how happy i am. Can i? Of course even i try to. I never love you more Baz then i am loving you now.. you proved you aren't cruel, bad, heartless, emotionless, and what so not.. rather you are sweet! [Note the sarcasm Bazzy!] 😆

Well, Ok. Another short one! Arghhh... 😡 Comment bhi pehle walai se short milega! 😆

Sun apne updatee ke length badha warna merai hathun bohat sarai paap ho jayenge! 😛

Well, no doubt update was super awesome! Like me very happy happy ke again se you showed Swayam's POV more.. the way he promised himself to dance first then will make Sharon dance is that thing i was missing, the passion and the Swayam who knows how to tackle Siren, His Siren!

The way you describe how he felt while dancing was amazing, i love the way you describe the details and everything.. it just makes reading more interesting! 😊

The best part was the flashback wala part, OMG i have never read something this cute and romantic on SwaRon, i know that scene was just a flashback and was so small but it was so intense.. loved the cute Sharon and total deewana Majnu in that scene.. so wish ke kash aisa kuch Tanha ke saath dekhne miltai.. warna i wish ke ab dekhne miley show main! This scene was amazing.. and whoa he came and danced for her! I am dead!

The end was a little shocking because seriously 23 chapters are already done so i thought that may be now Sharon would melt a little and dance with him.. but may be i was wrong! I really wanted to close her eyes.. and forget everything for some time and dance and dance and dance with him.. feel the bliss.. though still the scene was beautifully penned down! ❤️

This was amazing update 🤗but it was short again!

Totally going nuts and waiting for next update ASAP or else i will surely make you update no matter what, even if i have to fail in my board exams! 🤣

PS : Again show my fav little kiddo and his hippooo! 😳

-Marium

Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Another update 😛
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unres

Beautiful update..

Swayam dancing n letting his emotions flow out in through the dance.. u described how he felt while dancing was beautiful, Sharon watchng him...Swaron are just incomplete without Dance..

The flashback scene was cute and romantic..Sharon goes to sleep as she watches Swayam dances..😳

loved the whole dance scene..with sharon's feeling..😊

Edited by lassipriya - 12 years ago

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

soo close!!!

so close she was almost about to dance but...

aw man!!!

i loved the little flashback!!!

that was really cute!!!

at the begining i thought sharon was crying for something serious!!!

but she was crying because she didn't get to see her swaym dance!!!

that sooo cute!!!

i sound like a fangirl squealing right now!!!

well i gues i am a swaron fan so that is pretty obvious!!

okay going offf topic...

seriously a great job!!

especially the dancing part it was really beautifully written!!!

CONTINUE SOON!!!

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

A wonderful Update Baz..
It was a pleasure to read Swayam dancing for himself..
I loved the fact that sharon watched him Dance from her hiding..
The flash back where she called him as she could not see him dance and her sleep would not come to her untill she seees him dance was really cute..
And Finally Sharon not able to control herself and moves to Swayam and did a bit of dance and forced to rem the day She is to much broken to be into normal soon..Swayam needs to do a lot more effort I guess..

Brilliant update..

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swapna

@shan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

what an update man...hats off to u... i coudnt imagine the way to brought up the story to dis level...u hve raise the bar very high...the level of emotions ...pains ..thier inner turnmoils ...their helpless situations given by fate ... swayam brakdown ..his POV...n the new hope...the determination to make her dance...n then finnaly sharon ..losing herself to her love... this was amazoing update...was geting damn excited as i read each lines.,...line by line ...my level of curiosity whati ncreassing to know how will swayam make her dance ...

the intimate moments share were awsome ...the dadis interruption part was nyc n swayam reaction on it ...too funny ... " nothin happened ...YET...n sharon turn red...

whic left sharon confused ..what will sharon choose ...damn excited ...but the part ended...

that it witjh my commnets ,,,,m running to read next update...can't wait...

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swapna

@shan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

SIMPLY WOW!!!!

Thanks for quick back to back update in a week...

i love dis update... the swayam's thot of first himself the way he was...the way he used to dance ...

the dance he did ...how lively he felt..the way u descripe the whole dance sequence...n den the flash back mode was just amazing...i love this flaskback thingi ...in ur writeups...so well written...

i was about to jump in hapiness seeing sharon goona dance...but the end was shocking ...

the one part wants her to give up herself to swayam...but the other part still stopping her to do so...coj of the fear ...the fear of loosing him once again...the fear of history repeating...

But well our swayam is the SWAYAM lover boy ...who is not gooonaa lose the hopes soon ...not goona giv up sooon...

m loving it...

go gal go...

n Congratz for ur second thread...keep flying

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

OMG..such a quick update...thank you so much...kya yar thoda time do i need to update comments😭

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

BaZ what a pleasent surprise, you updated so fast, Marium a big big thanks to you for making her write the next part immediately...

Well as usual a super se upar wala update. Aw how i love shantanu dance, he is sooo mast, oops swayam looks heavenly dancing no wonder sharon couldnt take her eyes from him. Swaron❤️The fash back part was the sweetest . BaZ how do you get such ideas re, even the best script writers cant come up with such romantic scenes. I am sure about it.Keep it up hun you are one of a kind... I cant tell which part is more alluring coz it keeps us so engrossed samay ka pata nai chalta, Mast hai re, when will sharon come out and dance and swayam ka postivity is something i love, would really like to see them back to old romantic self, it is time for them.You are amazingly wonderful, Thanks soo much for such lovely updates...