SwaRonTanHa FF~Enigma of Fate 2~ epilogue pg 24

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Trisha paul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Thanks for such a quick update...😊

awesome update as usual...👏

great work..

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

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Its wonderfull update..And such a fast and furious update...Loved the way swayam realised first he got to dance then he will able to make sharon dance once again..

Then flashback scene was something refresing and simply awesome to read...Sharon used to watch swayam dance before go to sleep..Becoz dance is the biggest element through swaron love is attached..I like this part..U just expressed it so so well...Or i can say..it was amazingly written..

So,finally sharon move with the way of swayam's dance..That was little bit moment but i am glad finally she losing herself to dance with him...She wants to dance and she was waiting for this moment from long ages...

So just loved the way u create this whole dance scene..with sharon's feeling and emotions..Slowly her inner walls are breaking down..And i hope swayam will able to make her complete dance...

And its great that swayam is trying hard to convinced her...and he is doing lot of efforts...So just looking forward becoz u stopped at very interesting end...So update soon..

Amazing part..i really enjoyed it..Thanx for PM..
And yes,unres my previous comment on page no.6

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago

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keep guessing =P

@DaShInG_DeViL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

who wants an update today??? If you do then kindly comment or unreserve ur comment as the next chapter is done and trust me u don't wanna wait for it ;)

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Marium

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

^^^ What the hell? Chapter ready? Sachhi? OMG! Yayyy...

All you lazy bums out there.. please unreserve your comments now... plheeezzz..

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keep guessing =P

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
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Tu kyun has rai hai?

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keep guessing =P

@DaShInG_DeViL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: -Marium-
^^^ What the hell? Chapter ready? Sachhi? OMG! Yayyy......Yes, yaqeen nai ata na :P

All you lazy bums out there.. please unreserve your comments now... plheeezzz..

Yes, everyone listen to marium :)