Virman-SS-but I love you!!! part 15

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nimi00

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Anu, awsome update. You have me addicted to your stories with your wonderful writing. I am excited for this Virman trip. Thank you for the update, and will be waiting for the next one. 😊

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

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Ab main kya boluu yaar??? u have again left me speechless !!!! tareef jitnaa karuu utnaa kam hai yaar ~~~ such a beautiful beautiful Mind blowing update starting with virat pov it was soo soo awesomely written👍🏼 his feelings ~~ the way he was hurt, the anger all were described Fabulously !!!! virat who sacrifice everything for simi get nothing but hurt at the end...he juz forgot abt his ambition only n only for simi ~~~ simi is such an idiot n psshh i hate her !!! 😡😡😡she have made virat suffer :(( she never knew at she have lost...but she is don't deserve him !!! go to hell simi 😡 but i m happy tat virat is finally throwing all away this is really needed !! he really need to get rid of tat simi memories n he is doing this yayy~~ Here comes our manvi eeks i love her !!! :D she juz did wat she want n everything she did is juz awesome !!! is lakdi ne dil ko choo liyaa yaar ❤️ "Mamma says a lot of people can understand words, but only a few we can understand silence." man wat a dialogue !!! her style her bubliness eeks i love it ❤️ n the babies part is soo soo memorizing !!! awwn the way manvi explain it eeks i juz loved it alot❤️ A big big grin on my face while reading it ❤️ omg Anu kahaan se laate hoe itne acche acche ideas~~ hats off to u 👏 u r really Amazing ⭐️⭐️ ab toh aur bhi tumhari bari fan ho gayii hoon main 😳 i love u yaar ❤️ manvi is unbelievable usne nurse of ullu banna liyaa😉😆 n the last part is superb cute !! rahul teasing secession is brilliant😉😆😳 I m totally into this ss Anu !!! i m too way excited to read next part ~~~ this is juz too Brilliant n beautiful !!! i have read this update for 5 times now 😃 sacchi yaar i can't get enough of it ❤️ juz loved each n every bit of the update alot ❤️ plz plz continue next part soon ~~ i noe we are being greedy par itnaa accha hai toh humaraa kya kasoor hainaa??!!! 😛 now waiting eagerly for next part :D thank u so much for the pm Anu🤗🤗❤️ n thanx for the long update too :D this is juzz too way beautiful update ⭐️⭐️

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Captain_Pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

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Botluuu awesomeee update!!! OMGOD!! im danceinggg he got rid of all of Simmi's thingsss yippeee, and he is refreshened with Manvi around him! 😳 i loved how she went home when he told her not to come homeee 😆😆 and the hospital scene was cuteee, but i loved Virats comments for Manviii 🤣 her cute antics and stufff 😛 buahahh the way she backfired the nurse when she came to enquire abt them😆 and the office scene, with Rahul hayeee my fav parttt "Hogaya?!" "Hogaya" 😆 Manvi's bubbliness is refreshing love ittt 😃

now updateee soonnn with the HM 😉😛

-Luv Pariii

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vaarya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#294

oye hoe bolto...wat a dhasu update man!!! u rock...tell me wat do u want
...ill grant ur every wish...i just luv u man ...terrefic...the starting part couldn't have been better than this...the way uv described it na..it all seems like m watching it in front of my eyes!!! ...
god bless me now...n mannus humor ...wat is she???? amazing ...kya timing hai har cheez ki...totally loved it!

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Kiekeboe

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Posted: 12 years ago

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the last line cracked me up!! Maanvi and rahul masti! superb!

This story is getting better and better, Virat heartbreak, sadness and demotivation is very well written and than the nightly visit to the nursery-ward very touching ❤️

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JESMY

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

awesome update.
loved it.
why virat still keeping simmi's ring with him.

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Sumana123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Nothing could have made me happier more Anu ...thanks a lot ...*goes to read *

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Still not over the entire update ...hayeee your updates are something else all together .

"Mannu, get some really nice lacy things." <<<<< Rahul said some real important thing with that😉

Maanvi does breath in life everywhere she goes , isn't it ?? Viraat is finally get away from his Ugly Past I must say...Such kind of girls are a real shame for all. While on one hand I too don't promote the notion of sacrificing career for love but then at situation we need to change our priority which Viraat did innocently but Simmi "My Scramble Head Girl" is far high headed to understand that. This is what happens when people fall in love with Wrong Person ...Viraat did fall in love but with the Wrong Girl and result was evident.

Coming to Maanvi I was so sure she is not going to listen to Viraat's advice of Staying away and That is what a True Soulmate Does Always . I m very happy to read this Maanvi. She is different and so it her way of making people realize value of Life and Love. What Viraat said to Maanvi when she asked about that "I hate You" thing was beautifully shown. How can she be so full of life. But now she needs to inject some life in Viraat too before he sinks and I m rooting for this Maanvi she can do it .

I wanted to Read "BUT I LOVE YOU" line somewhere in the Update and I got that too, may be I should have wished for something more in this update and you would have fulfilled that too 😉. Hospital intrusion scene out and out hilarious and apt. Rahul and Viraat conversation 👏👏...Viraat needs to get some brain from people and start believing in things again.

And I wrote a long comment but still I want to go on writing and writing and writing ...totally in love with the story..."Anu ka Jaadu" I must say. Next Station THE BUSINESS TRIP ..I want to see Maanvi getting out the REAL VIRAAT out in the trip ...Make Him Fall In Love Soon

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Sumana

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AKSH

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

awww... so cute update... manvi is so cute... loved it... plz continue soonnn

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#299

Awesome..Amazing..👍🏼First m Happy...cz Virat got over his past Baggage...he actually burnt her pictures and removed her things..1st step to move on..there is clearly huge difference in both the sisters...one belives in career n flying out high and the other values every relation with her career..this was nicely written...Maanvi didn't allow him cry over it..rather sneaked out in hospital...that was too cute n sweet gesture...Waiting for their 1st trip...Thanks for the PM Anu..~!!!!