Virman-SS-but I love you!!! part 15

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ashni0905

@ashni0905

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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: nimi00
Anu, awsome update. You have me addicted to your stories with your wonderful writing. I am excited for this Virman trip. Thank you for the update, and will be waiting for the next one. 😊

ditto...

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manvilover18

@manvilover18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#312

wow awesome update...

plzzz plzzz update it quick...

can't wait to read more...

thanks for pm...

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sweets1126

@sweets1126

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#313

As always! Awesome superb & duper! Manvi r awesome! ;))
Continue soon!

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sakshi_aditi

@sakshi_aditi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

beautifully written..😊😊😊 and its concept and especially manvi's character is very very unique ... plzz continue soon and keep writing! 😊😊 waiting for ur next update!😊😊

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#315

anu seriouslllyyy i have to find out why the hell i get to read your update whenever i peak in at three in the morning buhahahahaha

it was a longgg update and i loveddd it

the flashbacks were emotional but well written...loved how u wrote about virat's suffering and then came manvi the savoir jo mana karo ge wo to zarur karegi but i think she did write the hospital scene was adorableee and what connects me is manvi being a doctor as im a medical student tooo and i loved the part where she said babies know magic...surely they do...the last part was hilarious rahul is dammm awsomeee man bring some lacy stufff omggg lmfao this was something crazy...fav point when manvi said aww but i love ypu justifies the title ❤️ ok enough of the comment my essay is restricted to addicted rofl

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roshreb

@roshreb

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

awesome update anu..but more than that i love ur style of writing..
finally virat letting go of his past... nw waiting for him to embrace his present & future (manvi)...
love manvi's "secret source" ...the hospital part was amazing... as virat earlier said "
"I don't feel anything anymore... Nothing affects me. "... love the method manvi's used to cheer him up...
"Mannu, get some really nice lacy things."😛... lol.rahul n his teasing...
nw waiting for the business trip...

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Coolio1313

@Coolio1313

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#317

FABYDABILICIOUS !!!!

AWESOME UPDATE !xxx

The beginning ...

Aww poor virat hate this simmi !

And when she took him to the hospital.👏

The last bit was

HILLARIOUS !!xx 😆

Amazing as usual !

Could imagine the whole scene so googdly wriiten (I know googdly aint a word but like the sound it makes ! think it sounds german hmm..)

LOVED ITTT !!!!

UR AN AMAZING WRITER

Thanks for the Pm

Can't wait for the next update continue sooon !

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Avika

@Avika318

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#318

Wow !! what an update!!
Loved it!! Maanvi is soo cute!!
I loved the dialogue"Arey par bill kaun bharega?"🤣
Update soon and thanks for the PM!!
x Avika x