BILU is the sweetest story known by me so far,, i dont think its only by me, all must be feeling the same,, everybody wud agree with me.. this whole story is like a rain of sweet things.. in future it'll turn a flood.. but we are gonna love this flood..
i think i shud quote the whole story & write my views for each line,, i dont wanna do it as it'll grab attention but trust me if u continued giving dis much adorable updates,, dat'll be my next move..
owkaii lets get back to the topic..
didnt i tell u dat u are capable to make manvi more & more adorable?? see u proved me.. she's really a pure, innocent angel.. heavenly in thoughts, childish in behaviour, goddess in beauty,,, she's someone framed vt all the gorgeous things on earth.. u are a genius in designing such a manvi.. the immense beauty of her character lies in the way u have delivered it to us.. i mean,, her actions, her thoughts, virat's thoughts about her, comparison between simmi & her, her parents attitude towards her,, all these together gives us the complete manvi whom u created.. my goodness wat a perfect girl!!! she's damn childish, but dat doesnt mean she's not matured.. she's matured enuf or may be more but the thing is she doesnt deliver her maturity like a typical adult rather she delivers it like a kid in the most adorable way... how can someone not adore her?? & after reading BILU how can someone not adore u dii??? u are just out of the world,, i LOVE u ALOTTT!!!!
shall i justify mannu's dis character to u?? here u go!!
the beginning,, as u mentioned before she herself told dat ''If there is something Manvi absolutely cannot do in this world, it is- staying alone - even for a 'few minutes' '' here u proved it again.. she cant stay alone & like a cute kido she checks on poeple to pull them for her company.. wow!! the way she started to tell about her interview to her mom,, & her mom knowing her mannu so well cutting the call & my cute mannu's thought, ''She is so going to repent for this!'' was brilliant!! i cudnt help but smile & smile & smile..
the next move of mannu amazed me more,, ''I decide to chat with my newest friend'' i ROFLD for heaven's sake.. oh my goddd how much cute mannu is... she's sooo innocent isnt she?? she's simply filled vt life.. & dii how are u doing this?? u amaze me alot di!! framing a character, delivering it, maintaining the same character & adding more beauty to it... love is the MOST beautiful thing on earth,, u are made of love dii!! u must be cuddled ryt now..
''Huh! Nobody wanted to talk with Manvi!'' dats another awesome place to drool over mannu's character.. how pretty she is,, she's like Ria of addicted.. i see the pouting Ria in her..
let me prove my point on her maturity.. the one thing dat amazed me since d last update was d samething vch u delivered thru virat here,,'' I am starting to get this weirdo, if something bothers her - 'It is crazy' and if something upsets her - she starts blabbering like a drunken monkey''
now am i correct in telling u dat she's matured enuf but the way she deliver it is interesting?? well,, she doesnt let the stupid things to ruin her,, she doesnt bother about it,, she doesnt share it,, she tries to get over it,, she tries to forget it,, she doesnt like to get sympathy out of it,, she doent clutch her moms dress & cry over it.. this is maturity!!! but chats, blabbers, try to concentrate on other things,, dis is her delivery... wat a girl!!! she's another name for cuteness, another name for sweetness.. a splendid character!! & i wont forget U here,, u are responsible for all beauty of mannu..
i also loved her opinion on talking things & d fact dat she felt embarrassed to cry infront of virat,, she's such a weirdo
manvi's interaction vt her parents is again beautiful.. dey inturn are treating her like a kido, dats even more beautiful..
thanks a billion for virat's POV.. dat cleared alot.. he added beauty to manvi's character.. the quick flashback about virat's selection of a dress to simmi & simmi ignoring it completely & at present manvi wearing saree all day just becoz virat told dat she looks nice in it,, is dere a better way to show d beauty of manvi's character?? u nailed it here!! but u didnt stop vt it.. u gave more things for virat to think & just in two days,, he's already getting over simmi & loving manvi's company.. wow!! the way u made him to think over the incidents & finally concluded the truth atleast now was awesome!!
u cleverly delivered virat's unconditional love for simmi & his analisation now.. i mean, he loved her alot,, didnt bother her ignoring him, always tried to change him for her... u didnt give us a chance to really blame him for this antic of his.. its true dat it irritates manvi & us dat he still has simmi's effect on him,, but u justified it,, ''Just because I don't have anyone else, doesn't give me the right to impose the whole of myself on her'' he didnt give a thought to simmi's action becoz he thought dat he is d one who is at fault,, as he had no experience of a family & love,, he thought dat he's forcing her & he is expecting too much from her,, may be it his first love experience, he always wanted to fix himself for her, adjust himself for her & totally blames him & him only for simmi's attitude towards him.. & only now, he finds the truth
''Everything that goes on around me reminds me of Simmi, not in a good way, in a bad way''
''Mannu reminds me of everything Simmi was not''
''every thing Mannu does, everything she says to me, makes me feel like Simmi never ever loved me''
''My life has suddenly gotten easy - Laughter returned, joy retuned. It's just peppy and light and everyone is just so happy. Even I am trying to let go of things.''
now this not only delivers his complete change of opinions but also answers manvi's once upon a time's question ''do i remind u of simmi?'' i'll give u a wow for it..
i know its long, but i have to tell dis too.. ''she never valued me enough - to cherish and smile about those sweet little things'' dis particular place reminded me of manvi being teased by her bhabi, how she blushed, how she flushed once she saw virat watching her,, where as simmi???
den coming back to the rocking scene of the update,, 'the hug'
i LOVE SIMMI!!! i love her alot,, if she didnt hurt mannu dat much, if she didnt speak so low,, if she didnt stop vt mannu & calld virat aswel,, we wudnt have got such a BEAUTIFUL hug between virman.. i love u simmi!! i was once an evil soul who expected ur return after virman's marriage,, but ur rocking entry thru the call in dis update, took BILU to its peak..
coming back to u dii,, u must be a highly romantic person, are u?? wat a heavenly hug,, i strongly trust in hugs,, they are the remedies for most of the emotions,, u are very clever in bringing such a remedy here & the description of the hug is mindblowing!! (it haunted me all night)
& my di's uniqueness is,, never forgetting things & being always in track,, ''I go near him on my knees and put my hands around him. Initially, he is very stiff and I felt like he was going to move away, but he slowly relaxed and patted my back. It was like I hugged my aunt or uncle - very distant, very guarded. But, to my extreme delight, I did hear him smile'' dat was deir first hug, to tell the truth, i was bit disappointed at dat time becoz mannu felt it like it was from her aunt or uncle,, but ur treat to my trust in u was thru dis update,''HE HUGGED ME! Not the stiff uncle-ish kind of hug but a cute and caring one, stroking my back softly. It felt sooo good'' dat was Beautiful, romantic & HEAVENLY!!!
den again my mannu's thoughts came into action ''Maybe my sister should come and see this! Not only does he notice me, he also cares about me!!!!!!! Screw you Simmi! I don't care what you think about me or him. He is a rare diamond. Throwing a diamond in dirt does not take away its spark!'' childish & adorable,, am i to rofl here? smile here? adore her here?? she's perfect!!
''I look at him and being so close to him was doing things to me.'' she's so falling for him isnt she?? um waiting to observe more such adorable things.. dey are a cute couple.. if i call her a kido, den he's a pappa.. gets her very well,, pats her,, is in a mission to pour her vt all her needs.. & wat did he tell?? '' Love can make a man, but it is equally capable of destroying a man! I am never walking down that road again'' let me see how long he'll keep this theory... he'll fall for her unconditionally & vl screw simmi..
um excited lottt for next part.. make it fasttt
see i still feel like im not done.. its all becoz of u.. i badly want u here to give u a hug.. i love u beyond limits dii.. ur updates are making me to get attracted to u more & more day by day.. Im so gonna ruin my life but i love it!! wat to do?? owkaii dats it.. love u loads, get my hugggsss & kisses & love & love only.. Hats off for ur brilliant brain, beautiful writing & for the heart throbbing person u are!! ❤️ ❤️
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