Virman-SS-but I love you!!! part 15 - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago

Anu di i am giving my review for both the updates 😊 i mean 4 and 5 😛

manvi punched that doctor very good 😛 he needs that 😡 loved the way both manvi and virat's secretry are chit chatting 😆
virat took her for dinner out yipieee... and there she told about that idiot doctor who misbehaved with her
virat gave that doctor good punches 😛 and he said " my wife" yeah!! 😃
manvi's list was super awesome and funny 😆 bt the first poing was the best 😃
this part was midblowingg... 😃
why virat wants to buy her a car man 😔
she was hell bored and that idiot simi called her that to saying virat is her husband 😡😡😡 i will kill her 😡 i hate her from the bottom of my heart 😡
good manvi threw her phone in anger 😃
manvi was cuddling to her mummy awww so cute ❤️❤️❤️
and she is saying her mom to increase her student's marks hahaha 😆 that to 100 times 😆
virat is now hating simmi little little good 😃 and even got angry on her that to because of manvi its a good news 😛
but he doesnt want to love again 😔 what will happen then 😔
manvi's mom and virat are teasing her always 😆
manvi's dad and her bond is so cuteee... ❤️ they fight like brothers and sisters hehe 😃
virat is so understanding he got to know that simmi had called manvi too and he hugged her wiped her tears ❤️
both manvi and her dad were runnin like children haha so cutee.. 😃
and manvi will be going with virat yipieee...

"Dad, you are such a liar, you just want me out of your hair so that you can spend some alone time with mom." I snap at him.

"Why did we get you married Mannu? So that you will leave us alone. Par tu toh jaane ka naam hi nai le rahi hai!!!" Dad teases.

"You are such a meany!!!!!!! What did you say?" I run to get him. There is only one way to annoy my dad. Tickle him! We both run round and round our grill party as Virat and my mom shake their head, enjoying their sandwiches looking at us laughing like they were watching a cartoon show.

this was the best part 😃 love this bonding ❤️
update asap di 😃 and pm me too 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anu wonderful update!! ⭐️⭐️👏👏 Fabulous!! Finally Virat is letting Simmi go!! Thank god 😃.. Loved both Virat and mavi's pov.. Superbly written 👏👏.. I just hate that Simmi 😡.. Such a low life 🤬.. She is actually jealous of Mannu.. I guess Simmi is not really happy with her present life & now she is regretting her decision but still that witch is not ready to accept her fault.. I'm so so glad that Virat didn't answer her call .. Virat is a sweet heart 😳.. Loved his pov.. He is now moving on in his life.. He realized that he chose a wrong girl for him.. "Mannu reminds me of everything Simmi was not." "Mannu is like a breath of fresh air to my tired muscles. Maybe Mom and Dad are right! Maybe she is exactly what I need. " - Loved these lines ❤️.. He knows Manvi is a gem.. Really felt sad for him.. Simmi treated him like a doormat 😔.. Though he is not ready to fall in love again but who can resist this cute and adorable Manvi!! 😃 After all she is so lovable 😛😛.. Virat understands her so well.. " I am starting to get this weirdo, if something bothers her - 'It is crazy' and if something upsets her - she starts blabbering like a drunken monkey. " 😆 He can read her easily.. Loved how he pacified her.. And their hug was just beautiful ❤️.. "Not the stiff uncle-ish kind of hug but a cute and caring one " 😛 ❤️.. Her mom and dad are just awesome 😎.. Love them.. I hope Virat takes her along with him for this business trip! 😛 Awesome update Anu ❤️❤️.. Loved every bit of it.. Thank you for the pm.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Take care 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice update i liked it
virat and amnvi are so cute they understand each other so good
i don't like simmi i hate her how can she say those things to manvi
so virat is finally letting simmi go
is he falling for manvi😳
please continue soon and thanks for the pm😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice 😛 but i so wish tht simmi rots in hell 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was sucha nice update

i enjoyed it alot while reading

update soon...plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update dear
loved it
thanx 4 the pm
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
BILU is the sweetest story known by me so far,, i dont think its only by me, all must be feeling the same,, everybody wud agree with me.. this whole story is like a rain of sweet things.. in future it'll turn a flood.. but we are gonna love this flood..

i think i shud quote the whole story & write my views for each line,, i dont wanna do it as it'll grab attention but trust me if u continued giving dis much adorable updates,, dat'll be my next move..
owkaii lets get back to the topic..

didnt i tell u dat u are capable to make manvi more & more adorable?? see u proved me.. she's really a pure, innocent angel.. heavenly in thoughts, childish in behaviour, goddess in beauty,,, she's someone framed vt all the gorgeous things on earth.. u are a genius in designing such a manvi.. the immense beauty of her character lies in the way u have delivered it to us.. i mean,, her actions, her thoughts, virat's thoughts about her, comparison between simmi & her, her parents attitude towards her,, all these together gives us the complete manvi whom u created.. my goodness wat a perfect girl!!! she's damn childish, but dat doesnt mean she's not matured.. she's matured enuf or may be more but the thing is she doesnt deliver her maturity like a typical adult rather she delivers it like a kid in the most adorable way... how can someone not adore her?? & after reading BILU how can someone not adore u dii??? u are just out of the world,, i LOVE u ALOTTT!!!!

shall i justify mannu's dis character to u?? here u go!!
the beginning,, as u mentioned before she herself told dat ''If there is something Manvi absolutely cannot do in this world, it is- staying alone - even for a 'few minutes' '' here u proved it again.. she cant stay alone & like a cute kido she checks on poeple to pull them for her company.. wow!! the way she started to tell about her interview to her mom,, & her mom knowing her mannu so well cutting the call & my cute mannu's thought, ''She is so going to repent for this!'' was brilliant!! i cudnt help but smile & smile & smile..
the next move of mannu amazed me more,, ''I decide to chat with my newest friend'' i ROFLD for heaven's sake.. oh my goddd how much cute mannu is... she's sooo innocent isnt she?? she's simply filled vt life.. & dii how are u doing this?? u amaze me alot di!! framing a character, delivering it, maintaining the same character & adding more beauty to it... love is the MOST beautiful thing on earth,, u are made of love dii!! u must be cuddled ryt now..
''Huh! Nobody wanted to talk with Manvi!'' dats another awesome place to drool over mannu's character.. how pretty she is,, she's like Ria of addicted.. i see the pouting Ria in her..

let me prove my point on her maturity.. the one thing dat amazed me since d last update was d samething vch u delivered thru virat here,,'' I am starting to get this weirdo, if something bothers her - 'It is crazy' and if something upsets her - she starts blabbering like a drunken monkey''
now am i correct in telling u dat she's matured enuf but the way she deliver it is interesting?? well,, she doesnt let the stupid things to ruin her,, she doesnt bother about it,, she doesnt share it,, she tries to get over it,, she tries to forget it,, she doesnt like to get sympathy out of it,, she doent clutch her moms dress & cry over it.. this is maturity!!! but chats, blabbers, try to concentrate on other things,, dis is her delivery... wat a girl!!! she's another name for cuteness, another name for sweetness.. a splendid character!! & i wont forget U here,, u are responsible for all beauty of mannu..
i also loved her opinion on talking things & d fact dat she felt embarrassed to cry infront of virat,, she's such a weirdo

manvi's interaction vt her parents is again beautiful.. dey inturn are treating her like a kido, dats even more beautiful..

thanks a billion for virat's POV.. dat cleared alot.. he added beauty to manvi's character.. the quick flashback about virat's selection of a dress to simmi & simmi ignoring it completely & at present manvi wearing saree all day just becoz virat told dat she looks nice in it,, is dere a better way to show d beauty of manvi's character?? u nailed it here!! but u didnt stop vt it.. u gave more things for virat to think & just in two days,, he's already getting over simmi & loving manvi's company.. wow!! the way u made him to think over the incidents & finally concluded the truth atleast now was awesome!!
u cleverly delivered virat's unconditional love for simmi & his analisation now.. i mean, he loved her alot,, didnt bother her ignoring him, always tried to change him for her... u didnt give us a chance to really blame him for this antic of his.. its true dat it irritates manvi & us dat he still has simmi's effect on him,, but u justified it,, ''Just because I don't have anyone else, doesn't give me the right to impose the whole of myself on her'' he didnt give a thought to simmi's action becoz he thought dat he is d one who is at fault,, as he had no experience of a family & love,, he thought dat he's forcing her & he is expecting too much from her,, may be it his first love experience, he always wanted to fix himself for her, adjust himself for her & totally blames him & him only for simmi's attitude towards him.. & only now, he finds the truth
''Everything that goes on around me reminds me of Simmi, not in a good way, in a bad way''
''Mannu reminds me of everything Simmi was not''
''every thing Mannu does, everything she says to me, makes me feel like Simmi never ever loved me''
''My life has suddenly gotten easy - Laughter returned, joy retuned. It's just peppy and light and everyone is just so happy. Even I am trying to let go of things.''
now this not only delivers his complete change of opinions but also answers manvi's once upon a time's question ''do i remind u of simmi?'' i'll give u a wow for it..

i know its long, but i have to tell dis too.. ''she never valued me enough - to cherish and smile about those sweet little things'' dis particular place reminded me of manvi being teased by her bhabi, how she blushed, how she flushed once she saw virat watching her,, where as simmi???

den coming back to the rocking scene of the update,, 'the hug'
i LOVE SIMMI!!! i love her alot,, if she didnt hurt mannu dat much, if she didnt speak so low,, if she didnt stop vt mannu & calld virat aswel,, we wudnt have got such a BEAUTIFUL hug between virman.. i love u simmi!! i was once an evil soul who expected ur return after virman's marriage,, but ur rocking entry thru the call in dis update, took BILU to its peak..
coming back to u dii,, u must be a highly romantic person, are u?? wat a heavenly hug,, i strongly trust in hugs,, they are the remedies for most of the emotions,, u are very clever in bringing such a remedy here & the description of the hug is mindblowing!! (it haunted me all night)
& my di's uniqueness is,, never forgetting things & being always in track,, ''I go near him on my knees and put my hands around him. Initially, he is very stiff and I felt like he was going to move away, but he slowly relaxed and patted my back. It was like I hugged my aunt or uncle - very distant, very guarded. But, to my extreme delight, I did hear him smile'' dat was deir first hug, to tell the truth, i was bit disappointed at dat time becoz mannu felt it like it was from her aunt or uncle,, but ur treat to my trust in u was thru dis update,''HE HUGGED ME! Not the stiff uncle-ish kind of hug but a cute and caring one, stroking my back softly. It felt sooo good'' dat was Beautiful, romantic & HEAVENLY!!!

den again my mannu's thoughts came into action ''Maybe my sister should come and see this! Not only does he notice me, he also cares about me!!!!!!! Screw you Simmi! I don't care what you think about me or him. He is a rare diamond. Throwing a diamond in dirt does not take away its spark!'' childish & adorable,, am i to rofl here? smile here? adore her here?? she's perfect!!
''I look at him and being so close to him was doing things to me.'' she's so falling for him isnt she?? um waiting to observe more such adorable things.. dey are a cute couple.. if i call her a kido, den he's a pappa.. gets her very well,, pats her,, is in a mission to pour her vt all her needs.. & wat did he tell?? '' Love can make a man, but it is equally capable of destroying a man! I am never walking down that road again'' let me see how long he'll keep this theory... he'll fall for her unconditionally & vl screw simmi..
um excited lottt for next part.. make it fasttt

see i still feel like im not done.. its all becoz of u.. i badly want u here to give u a hug.. i love u beyond limits dii.. ur updates are making me to get attracted to u more & more day by day.. Im so gonna ruin my life but i love it!! wat to do?? owkaii dats it.. love u loads, get my hugggsss & kisses & love & love only.. Hats off for ur brilliant brain, beautiful writing & for the heart throbbing person u are!! ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved d update continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow... amazing update dear...😃
virat is jus so sweet...😳
cruel simmi hate hr for hurtng virat 2 dis extend...😡
it if she hadn't done dis den how could virat b togethr...
so in anthr way she did a good job...😉
d update ws awesome... flawless...⭐️
i jus love dis virat... n manvi as wel...😳😳
thanx 4 d pm dear...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
aaawww YES he hugged her even though I really dnt lyk this simmi im glad she foned at least we got to witness this cute hug moment im sooo happy that he consoled her - wiped her tears made her feel better aaawww waiting for next update eagerly - thanx for a fab update 😉

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