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Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

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Oh my god!!! It was beautiful! I am really speechless. I need some time to recover. How dare you call THIS shit??!! How dare you?? Sucha beautiful piece of work. So beautiful. Dunno what more to say. Words aren't enough to describe how beautifully you have written this. N yeh mazaak nahi hai.. direct dil se aa rahi hai yeh baat..

I so wish ki mai bhi tere jitna acha likh paati.. I just so wish.. I hate my writing.. meri writings are nothing in front if this.. gosh.. this is your talent shreyu.. this is it.. but *sigh* mere me yeh talent bhi nahi..

Loved it like really!! U are an awesome writer. Sachchi. Just wish mai bhi itna acha likh pati.

And I hate this! I seriously am not liking this. Yeh wala OS. It could have been so much more beautiful! Sigh. I hate it!

And shut up alright! Tu jitna accha likhti hai waisa main nahi likh sakti. The Swayam POV. Woh kitne beautifully aur acchi tarah se likha tune. Uska kya? Ab don't start making me count the stories, alright. Tu bhi bahut accha likhti hai.. Samjhi?

Originally posted by: taareylove

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awesome os shreya loved it so much 😛😛

it's such a emotional os and aage se aisa kuch likhna ho toh plz attached tissue paper with it 😉😉

coming to os it's simply awesome the way you portrayed rey and shnaya feeling were awesome 👏

and in the end that line is like whole summary of that story👍🏼

loved it to the core 😊😊

thanks for the pm dear😃😃

Thanks a LOT for the comment di! Made me smile wide!

Originally posted by: priyal_TaaRey

it's so heart touching dear 👏

sweet and emotional😭 😭 😭

beautiful os

Thank you so so so much!

Not shit, just diff. Its good

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

And I hate this! I seriously am not liking this. Yeh wala OS. It could have been so much more beautiful! Sigh. I hate it!

And shut up alright! Tu jitna accha likhti hai waisa main nahi likh sakti. The Swayam POV. Woh kitne beautifully aur acchi tarah se likha tune. Uska kya? Ab don't start making me count the stories, alright. Tu bhi bahut accha likhti hai.. Samjhi?

Shut up alright? This one iss sooo beautifully written. And main acha ka A bhi likh lu na toh bhi apne aap ko dhanya samjhungi. Tere iss talent ka mujhe 0.001 % mile toh I'll consider myself to be blessed by god.. sigh. I'm an untalented git!

Originally posted by: ShivThak23

Not shit, just diff. Its good

Thank you, di..

OMG OMG it was mind blowing di
Superrr se bahut bahut bahut upar!!!
I am speech less yaar it was heart touching yaar
Literally I am crying di
How can u write so nice
I luv u di luv u a lot
So many hugs from me
Keep smiling

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

Shut up alright? This one iss sooo beautifully written. And main acha ka A bhi likh lu na toh bhi apne aap ko dhanya samjhungi. Tere iss talent ka mujhe 0.001 % mile toh I'll consider myself to be blessed by god.. sigh. I'm an untalented git!

Shut up, okay? Mujhe chane ke jhad pe chadane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.. Alright? This one was not beautiful.. I didn't feel so. I had so much more in my mind but nahi likh payi. And don't you dare call yourself an untalented person! Maar khayegi, samjhi?

Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

OMG OMG it was mind blowing di
Superrr se bahut bahut bahut upar!!!
I am speech less yaar it was heart touching yaar
Literally I am crying di
How can u write so nice
I luv u di luv u a lot
So many hugs from me
Keep smiling

Thank you so much! And please don't call me di! Please! 😳