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Aditi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

updated my comment on page 81

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Aditi

@uv-crazyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: ShikhaKhushi

Thanxoo meri jaan! ❤️ You want a chapter of Friends? *sigh* I'll see what I can do, but I won't promise anything! Let me finish Forbidden and Tumult then I will TRY to write a chapter for you. Just one chapter and just for you! Okay? Because you are one cute and consistent reader and Lovvveee you! Theek hai?

I am holding onto your words Shikha ji...you will try to write a chapter of friends just for me? awwiee thank you Shikhaji 😳...aww shukriya hamari tareef karne ke liye 😳 Love you too Shikhaji 🤗

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

this story was recommended and i absolutely loved your arnav his character was close to a real man and loved that he did not stop trying to make her give them a chance loved that he knew that she was the one yes he screed up but it was not intentional but he knew it was his mistake loved his confession and her acceptance awesome ss beautifully done well pened .

Edited by dumas - 11 years ago

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ruark_22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

Absolutely loved it!!!! Every time you finish a story I go in to depression!!! I start missing it sooo much!!! Keep writing the awesome stories!!!

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#555

Due to being unable to keep up with too many stories I've been sticking to OSes and Completed Stories and when I come across one of yours I am already smiling! :)

There's just something about your stories, I always know that there will be a happy ending, but yet you somehow present us with a new and beautiful story each time.

I don't know why, but at times I got teary eyes while reading this. I guess the struggle and pain both Khushi and Arnav went through kinda got to me!

I had a pleasure reading this SS! Thank you of writing it :)

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msmarple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#556

Very nice story. Enjoyed it!

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Nandz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#557

Such a cute story shikha!!! Absolutely loved it!
God Arnav's persistence is the star of the story! Had he not been so persistent n relentless in his chase for khushi, no ways khushi would have ever given him a chance!!
N i have to say khushi was right on her part! When you know how your parents are, what kind of thinking they possess, n how conservative they can be then its better not to do that! Whats the point in getting your heart , the guy's heart and your parents' trust break!!
N she would have succeded in keeping Arnav away too had he not been so determined to get her!!
Loved how their love won against all odds, how Arnav won over her parents, how khushi supported him when he needed her the most and how they are there for each other forever!
The epilogue was good too! It signified that life is not the bed of roses and it os not necessarily happily ever after! Life is uncertain n unfair but it is always beautiful n worth loving when you have that one special person person with you! Who will always love you n be with you!!
Loved it!!
Thanks cheeni for recommending it!!

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meghnas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#558

a beautiful end to an amazing story!!

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Chandana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#559

Beautiful... Very cute & lovely Epilogue...

Loved how they stood by eachhother & came accross all the hurdles...

Very well written...One of my fav SS..

Love to read more from u..

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

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Posted: 11 years ago

#560

Res...

Edited!

I loved this story, cause it was like a fairy tale. An Indian girl from a conservative family goes to study abroad, to pursue her dreams and is away from all this relationship jhamela when the hottie of the college suddenly develops an interest in her. She keeps ignoring him, running away from him, but soon enough gives into temptation and starts feeling for him😳

On the other part, things with him are also the same! He wants her in his life like no other girl and to make this happen, he waits for her yes...he gives her time and space...everything ❤️

And their dates were also nice ones, with no cheesy things and all. Glad he saw what she is and not how she dresses ❤️

All's well that ends well. I enjoyed reading it. You are one hell of a writer 👏

Edited by dj_arshifan - 11 years ago