Arshi SS Tumult :: Completed Pg81 :: 17/01 - Page 55

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Posted: 11 years ago
That is really cute! Perfect ending! Could u pls pls continue with shaapit when u have time? Pretty please! Thanks for the email.
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you. will read it today.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it Di! But why ending it! My fav story! :( hope u update other stories!
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful end 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shikha,
Meri jaan what a brilliant end to a brilliant story.
I loved the way both did everything they could to make the other happy, the evoloution of their love, the comfort and the beauty of it only growing after five years together. *sigh* I loved it Shikha I really did :) x
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was a nice ending.. I just wish they have their very own bundle of joy soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tumult was a very beautiful journey...enjoyed every bit of it...thank you Shika
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Posted: 11 years ago
Baby!

Res!

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You write so well! See I will frankly admit that this was the typical shy, beautiful girl meeting the popular, handsome boy story. But the way you wrote it made me want to read it till I didnt finish it. ⭐️

Arnav put Khushi in a tumult since the day he met her. Be it kissing her and insinuating things between them when he first met her or each of those incidents when he kept adding charms and making his way to her heart (and allowing her to make hers in his), or when they had a misunderstanding or how they fought, took a break from each other (only physically, dil-o-dimag main toh bas ek doosre ka hi khayal tha), then confessed and made up and went ahead to marry and to make a baby together 👏

But Khushi put him in a tumult too by making him behave uncharacteristically, making him stalk her, not allowing her an option but to be with him, going out of his way to make her enjoy in their time together, pursuing her during the misunderstanding and finally when she made him confess the love he felt for her... 👏

Khushi is so like any other girl in India. Wants to pursue her dreams of a Prince Charming with whom she can have a happily ever after but doesnt want to upset her parents in the process. That was so realistic! Good Arnav turned out to be a keeper ⭐️

And am glad Khushi had a friend like La to direct her amidst the heartless acquaintances she lived with. Btw, it took me a lot of time to figure out NK is Nathaniel Knight aka Nate. Last chapter main samjhi main 😕

Aww... Arnav cant play hockey anymore... He was so passionate about it... In fact their early dates centered around the rink... Ironic, first he took her for hockey and now she does. 👍🏼

I am so glad I read this happy story. Bas!

PS: 1, 4, 9, 14, 22, 28, 35, 42, 50, 64, and 72... I made a note on a pg this time (Index girl! Index!). Now I will go and 'like' the chapters 😃
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arww such a cute update perfect
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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful ending...will miss this story...thanks for the PM

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