Arshi SS Tumult :: Completed Pg81 :: 17/01

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#561

superb ending.. loved it.. hope arnav and khushi made many babies.. 😃

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Mbean

@AmidstTheWords

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#562

Loved the story.

Once u fall in love,u fall hard and then there is no going back.

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#563

Shikhz you do know that you rock, don't you! Seriously your every story is just beautiful and you always end on such a happy and delightful note that one can't help but gush about you work! I still can't believe Tumult is over, I haven't been on IF much lately but I just had to drop by to read the finishing chapters of my favourite stories.

Tumult has been an exciting, fun, entertaining journey from the get go, the Arnav and Khushi you portrayed here have been unique and lovable in their own ways. If Arnav was persistent we all knew that he meant well, Khushi was the innocent, sensitive girl who had no choice but to give to Arnav's demands of dates and what not. Arnav giving her gifts for each date and making each date super special was portrayed brilliantly my friend. What can I say you have a way with creating the most wonderful relationships between our Arshi here take the epilogue for instance, I never expected this story to end like this you always exceed expectations Shikhz.

Loved the way you showcased our Arshi as the married couple who have each other's pillar of support and just as inlove as they were before tying the knot. Khushi's possessiveness in the beginning of the chapter was just adorable and Arnav's reaction even better. Arnav finally managed to crack down all of Khushi's walls and even turn her into his possessive wife. It was great to see him still be as affectionate and loving towards his lady love as ever. Her crying for one of her patients was just too cute and Arnav comforting her even sweeter. What I loved the most though was the ending where Arnav assured his wife whether they have a kid or not he is always going to love her come what may.

Now I just want to thank you for making us all a part of this heartwarming journey of Tumult, I have loved every single chapter including the perfect ending and I can hardly wait to read more of your work! ❤️

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#564

wow... very beautiful intense story...

i loved it so much... hats off to u :)

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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#565

read the entire story in one go...that was amazing loved it...

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Sidda

@Sidda8

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#566

Aww, thanks for this lovely story Shika! It was one of my favorites at it took place in Canada, my homeland. Arshi's love story was unique and refreshing. I'm happy that they united and got married. It's sad to know that Arnav is no longer a hockey player but he still has his love to support him.

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#567

This ended too early for my liking!! :( I absolutely loved this story, I just didn't want it to end...

I am glad things have finally settled now in Arnav and Khushi's lives. After such a horrific past, Arnav has finally pulled himself together and learned to live again, all thanks to Khushi. A happy ending finally! :)

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Auchi

@Auchi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#568

Nice story...i have read all of urs mmm shall i say stories. All of them r nice and i am eagerly waiting for the updates . So plz update the rest of it too...plz