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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

beautiful ending of a lovely tale...
brilliant writing dear...
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thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Beautiful . A very touching story very sensitively told.

Thank you for sharing it with us .

Thnx forthe pm dear.

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kotha

@kotha15

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

it ws amazing...very beautiful story..

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desilover101

@desilover101

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

that was amazing, just amazing.

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

That was really beautiful. ... thank you for finally giving us d chapter. .. it was a very lovely tale... :-)

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

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I agree completely! Your stories are too heavy duty. Thank you for writing this 😉

I was in love with the story as soon as Arnav was told he would fall in love with the violinist. Bas!

That Khushi was deaf came as much as a surprise to me as it did to Arnav. That she has a 'gravelly' voice shocked me too. He walked out breaking both her heart and mine. Even though she is used to such behaviour from people, I am sure it breaks her heart every time it happens.

That he cant get her, her music, her beauty, that he feels bad about how he conducted himself with her and gives her a jacket and the lift were so dreamily done IS

But I had never expected Khushi to be this cute (what if you kidnap me?), witty (I am a very tasty snack for the wild animals) and sarcastic (That must be the enigmatic charm of yours). She speaks her mind through sign language but that hasnt made her lose touch with her bubbliness either.

Arnav trying his hand on rather his lips on lip reading and Khushi finding an excuse to meet him again... aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi hain 😆

'Nothing can beat paper and pencil' (and later texts) but two hearts need more to communicate. Khushi cant speak before him after his reaction to her the first time. But this is Arnav Singh Raizada we are talking about. He learnt sign language for her. 😳

Khushi is beautiful, talented and has never probably felt incomplete as she does when she is before Arnav as he is the hot guy who need not be nervous around her. He is perfect according to her.

But she is a girl... with dreams... with hopes... with love...

And who could possibly deny a proposal as heart felt and heartwarming as that?!

Anyone would say that Khushi got lucky. But I am sure Arnav would deny. Because for him, he got the fairly tale

I loved this story. Bas! ❤️

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Oh my God, this was terrific! Such beauty in your writing, and lovely characters in such few words! I never wanted it to end.. though I thought the ending was perfectly timed and stunning. I feel so emotionally overwhelmed after reading this - the music fills the air just with the power of your words... and you play with words the way your Khushi plays with the strings of her violin, she strums a little and there - you've got music.

This was brilliant, really.Easily one of the best pieces I have ever read on the Forum.

PS - Thanks Saiyyu (Rasgulla_sp) for recommending this one 😃

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Here on Vgedin (Twiggy)'s recommendation but I just skimmed through the first part and I know I have treasure :) This story doesn't deserve skimming. I will be back after reading the way one savors art. :)

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SaRunHolicc

@SaRunHolicc

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

simply beautiful ❤️ it was brilliantly written <3

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Thank you Saiyyu, willl come back and read.

Just beautiful.

Written with such sensitivity and flair and not once did I feel bad for Khushi, loved her lively spirit and they way she lives life, that she had a handicap did not hinder her living a full life in every way.

I loved how he was drawn to her and also loved how he felt uncomfortable and uneasy and ran off , it was natural. But loved that once he deals with it himself he cannot keep away.

Loved how she says she is worried that he might kidnap her or leave her midway, summing up his previous visit. I loved her wit and humour.

I loved how her mother loves to hear her speak. I love how all the feelings and emotions were written wit such clarity and crispness, not evoking sympathy.

Loved the progression of their relationship from friends to more the journey was written brilliantly.

Loved how he learns to sign for her, loved how she speaks for him...and for them.

Loved the end too, the butterflies...! Just perfect...

Thanks Saiyyu for bringing me here!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago