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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#211

M so happy that you completed it. :)

The last part was beautiful that it would have made my heart dance if that would have possible. I really do have a soft corner for such stories.

That Arnav learnt sign language for her really did deserve running into his arms. And it was endearing to see that it initiated text exchanging. Khushi was so honest to herself when she wanted to live in the moment and yet her half hearted attempts ( because she too had fallen for Arnav and some part of her did know that she trusts him with everything of hers) to make him not say it...that it he loves her and wants to spend life with her was understandable. I absolutely loved the part where she voices out that she loves him too.

Lovely!! Wonderful read! :)

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Peda

@Peda

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Hi

Another lovely story. I read all three parts together.

I really liked the way you described Kushis ability to produce sound in similarity to the ocean.That two lines for me highlighted what I perceive was the way that she affected Arnav as well. Arnav means ocean. I don't know if the symbolism was intentional or am I reading too much into it?

I would have liked to read more about Anjalis reaction to Arnavs news...that bit felt like a loose end.

Otherwise a really beautifully descriptive piece of work, one that I enjoyed reading.

Thank you so much for taking the time to pm me.

Looking forward to reading Photographer.

Enjoy the rest of your week and all the best with school.

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#213

It was really really beautiful story <3 simply loved it so much ❤️
Sweet and beautiful
Loved this Arnav, and u wrote it so beautifully,
He saw the beautiful heart Khushi have ,her real beauty without any flaw.
Loved every bit of it <3
Loved last part, the piano playing, proposal ❤️ his feelings, her voice and feelings <3 just another fab piece by you,you are too good

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Great way to end the story!!! Loved it!!

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

That was an amazing end to a beautiful story... This was the kind of tale which makes you want to believe that the world around is full of goodness and nothing can go wrong. When you read something like this you feel enveloped in a cocoon of happiness and warmth you never ever want to leave...!!!😊

Thank you for writing this😊

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

wow that was just wow
well am glad she gave herself a chance
sure their beginning was rocky but then no relation is perfect
and the fact they got what they deserved in the form of one another is what we would have wanted
it wasnt easy for her to do this
but she had to do it for herself and him
also their love
cheers for pm

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Beautiful..so heart warming...this is the kind of story which makes you want as wonderful partner as them.
Lovely.

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Such an amazing and heart warming story !!!!!!!!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#219

THAT WAS AMAZING LOVED HOW HE TOLD HER HE LEARNT SIGN LANGUAGE JUST FOR HER LOVED THEIR TEXT EACH OTHER AND LOVED THE BUTTERFLY BEAUTIFULLY ONE AND THEIR DATE LOVED THE CONFESSION AWESOME ENDING THANKS FOR TAN AMAZING STORY AND PM