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Posted: 11 years ago
vgedin's status lead me here.

Thanks Twigster.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Only you could have given this story such a beautiful fairy tale ending!


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Posted: 11 years ago
Very very beautiful !
I salute to people like Arnav. I'm not saying that physical challenged are any less but to stand by them and assure them that they are not anything less when the society has made them believe otherwise is indeed great.

My cousin is deaf and dumb and I have seen her struggling hard. We can't even imagine their situation. She is very beautiful and no one can say that she has hearing impairment unless they talk to her. And the looks they give once they get to know is pathetic. On the brighter side, she is an awesome painter. For her to be what she is today, she and her parents have struggled like hell.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...so beautiful...once started to read could not stop...I could imagine both this Arnav and this khushi right front of my eyes...khushi an beautiful nymph and Arnav cool dashing raizada...once they got together it was matter of heart...they both got beautiful heart
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh god...m so very thnkful to vgedin(i stiil dnt have the authority to call her twiggy di 😉) for referring to dis...oderwisei would hav missed dis beautiful piece...

dis was a perfect love story between a perfect man and an imperfect woman...a woman who was perfect in her own way...a woman who was perfect in the eyes of the man whom she loved...a perfect woman in the eyes of the man who loved her...

every emotion ...every word...every sentence of ur story was just beautiful...he learnt her sign languages for her...uhh dat was WOW...

his gft was beautiful...

the confessions were ever so beautiful...she was self concious abt her voice ...she ought to be...bt the moment she shed her inhibititions around him...it simply meant she trusted him wd all her heart...nd wen the woman you love trusts u wd all her being...no words ...no sound can be as beautiful as dat of her voice dat claims dat she trusts u ...she loves u...

love is nt abt conditions...love is nt abt status...love is nt abt how u look...bt its just abt hw u feel...love is unconditional...

by the end of the story ...i did even feel dat khushi is deaf...for me dey were just communicating like a normal couple...nd dats the beuty of love...nd ofcourse ur writing...

u are truly an unconventional writer👏👏

P.S: i was reminded of dis scene in ZNMD where farhan akhtar nd his gF spoke two diff languages...none understood wat the oder was saying...yet dey could understand each oder...the gal knew he was sad...dat scene to me looked beautiful...

m sorry i used too many beautifuls...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very Beautiful 3 shot. Thanks Disha for telling me about this.
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a beautiful way to end this story! I just could not stop smiling all throughout the last part. First their text messages, my heart was just softly titling in their favor reading their responses to one another. It was utterly adorable. Then, when he sent her the butterfly, I was shocked. Of course at first I did not understand why he had sent it but later on Khushi's thoughts allowed me a more closer look at the meaning behind it.

The proposal at the beach. I think only ASR could bring a piano to the beach? But it was perfect. Romance and sound. He never forgot the sound. I think that was the highlight for me in a way. I would have loved to see them playing it together once again at the end. This is why you need to write another part. Yes (don't shake your head). I absolutely loved how he pointed out small details about her like she left notes everywhere or how she murmured...too sweet.

Like you said miracles are rare but we she should never stop believing in the possibility of one. Khushi found her miracle. The one man who was strong enough to bear the weight of her heart. Wonderful. I still can't stop smiling. One of the most beautiful stories I have read on these two. Definitely a favorite.

You must write a similar story in the future. The possibilities that could be etched out are endless. I would love to read your take on it. I am sure someone like you could handle it with the gentleness it needs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it! arnav and khushis journey was a delight to read, one can live with obstacles if love is there, because it gives u the strength!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its awesome. wow .Speechless.I don't know how I missed it.Thanks to Rasgulla-Sp for the link.
Its beautiful like beautiful melody .Soothing comforting wow.
That window scene its just different
Their sms conversation then mom .I love all the characters..
Mr .Malik was right Arnav by her smile music and all...
I was curious to know Anjali's reaction...
I love it

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey..thanx for writing ...
the most beautiful short story ever...
lovely...
thnx for pm...
it was simply magical

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