'Parinay' THD1, Next CHP up in THD 2, Link PG 131

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

What a start! The description of the nervous bride, her anxiety, her trying to come to terms with her fate... it was beautifully described. Khushi's innately positive and hopeful nature also comes across.

Now where is her husband ? And does he spell trouble, or will he take all her troubles away? I'm looking forward to this one :)

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_disha_

@_disha_

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

😃 Bookmarked !

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

sound interesting

looking forward😊

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Start is very beautiful.. will be looking forward to next update... to know how the husband of new bride behaved with her.. Khushi is married at such a tender age.. hope she gets all the happiness and the dulha who was supposed to come in few minutes and have not turned up even after 40 minutes is good husband..

hope to receive pm's of this SS. HAPPY WRITING 😊

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thesis

@thesis

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

thanku once again basanthi for choosing an intense concept again i hate the mushy genre n thats y i love both cd and p now seriously am waiting for it to unfold and am begining to think this is the start of something magical like cd is oh pls update sooon eagerly awaiting

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

A different concept altogether from CD. Can't wait for the story to unfold.

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sanja_here

@sanja_here

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Interesting...now waiting for this story too

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

What the!! You started new story.. Wow I am not complaining but pl pl post ch 28 too..
Off to read the Parinay in a while.

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-Tinker.Bells-

@-Tinker.Bells-

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Amazing Concept 👍🏼

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

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Oh the nervousness of a bride in an arranged marriage. And someone who was at the brink of a professionally illustrious career - given up for what? emotional blackmail from parents, an ailing grandparent, a proposal that no one could say no to, financial trouble, just coercion from a family that wants to finish off their "duties"?

Sigh...So many real lives mirrored so.

And the man - is he someone just as pressured?If he is forty minutes late - you have no idea how much I'm wishing he is stuck with a bunch of teasing freinds and nothing more!

Waiting for the story to unfold. Great that you have most of it written...

Edited by meera30 - 12 years ago