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dildostidance09

@dildostidance09

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#211

both last update and this is fantastic..!! 👏

after reading the last update i was so happy to read armaan and shilpa..!!

nw coming to this update..!!

sneha shouting at taani and taani reply to the question how can u be my sister was hilarious..!!🤣

and shilpa and taani were screaming and jumping after seeing each other was so cute..!!😆

felt so bad when rey ignored taani at the party and took shilpa away from her..!!😔

and armaan entry was jhakasss..!!

and the flashback rey shouted at taani for no reason was so sad..!!

hope rey open up to taani soon..!!

and what happpend b/w shilpa and armaan...so waiting to knw...!!

nd i jst loved the way u write..!!

keep up the good work..!!👍🏼

do update soon and thanx for the pm..!!

P.S. My first long comment ever..!!😛

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Prasanna

@PRASSI

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Its fantastic and super awesome update...!!!!

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Goonies4Ever

@Goonies4Ever

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#213

anova gr8 update👍🏼update soon

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Lavender_Luna

@Lavender_Luna

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

it was totally a complete entertainment with all emotions...

i want to write so much but tabiyat thoda kharaab hai...

pls dnt mind...

mujhe khud accha nahi lag raha that m nt able to coment...

pls update soon...

awesome blossom update!!!

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Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

nice update...

it ws really long...

rey's outburst on taani ws really rude...

his unpredictable mood swings r really horrible...

i really want rey to tell evrythng to taani...

update soon

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Priyanka Datta

@taani.priya1997

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

poor taani

its interesting waiting for the next

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sreelakshmi

@sree689

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

super duper awsum update...

luved the party scene a lot nd the jiju saali part too...

i thnk swayam shud hint taani abt kriya but the details shud be given by Rey only...it will strengthen their bond...

do update soon...

waiting impatiently for the next chapter...

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Debu

@crazy2012

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Thank You Vishi for giving this beautiful update in this weekend. I enjoyed it so much😃
Now telling you why:

First today is my holiday and I am enjoying with Taarey
And the most special one for giving me Armaan Maalik and Shilpa. I am personally thankful to you for bringing them in this story. please try to show them as couple though I wont interfere in the plot😳
I am a true and die hard KaShian since DMG days and I think, we similar here, jo humari dosti aur pakka kar degi😉😆😆

Now about the update, very goo portraying of Taani's character. She is care free in nature, i guess. I mean she tells her heart's talk (in reference to Mom and Dad's act regarding how she came in this world)
She is very cautious too. But she doesn't know that when heart starts acting, it doesn't listen any equation. payar mein hisaab nahi chalta😛😳

And she is honest too..she is the representative of all the young age Indian girl.
I liked it so much Vishi.
Please carry on with the story soonish..eagerly waiting.

Love You
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dh19

@dh19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#219

sorry for the late commnet
just read all chapters
its awesome
loved this different story of taani and rey
loved taani and arman's first meet
and now gang is trying to patchup between them
she excpeted that she had crush on rey..
well any one can have he is so hot man
do cont. soon.
waiting for the next update