TR SS: CONVOLUTED (Completed) - Page 21

Umm... Reserved?!
So sorry, di. Will unres this comment and the previous one ASAP! Sorry! :-/

-Edited-

"How can you be my sister!?" She asks in an exaggerated tone.

"Errmm…because mom and dad had sex without protection once again after you were born?"

😲 Di! i am just 14 here! 😆 😛

I liked the Sne-Titli talk.. Hehe! That's why I prefer sisters over brothers.. And I imagine Sneha di as Sne (Duh!) so I love it when I read that Shaan is her boyfriend.. 😳 I am visualising Shaan and Swayam as the same people.. 🤣 And I am so sure that I am gonna love Titli-Shaan bond too..

And woah! Shilpa's Shaan's cousin! I thought it'll be a guy. 😆 😳

Loved these parts..

"Shilpa?"

"Taani?"

"You both know each other?"

Me and Shilpa hug while my Jiju ponders over what was happening.

"This is amazing!" I yell out in excitement.

This really was great…I mean who would have thought that my classmate kum friend would turn out to be a relative as well. Shilpa has a dear place in my heart, she was filled with positive energy and it always made me want to stay near her.

"I know right! We're related!" She jumps in excitement and I laugh…she was so cute!

I mean, I am so loving Taani and Shilpa's bonding too.. <3

And oh! I so so so loved it when Taani started saying that she should have dressed well... Haye! The fact that she wants to look great in front of Rey - Hot and Handsome Singhania - is so adorable.

Daaayyyuuummm!

Okay. I wasn't really expecting Shilpa and Rey to be such good friends... Not expected but cute. 😳

The flashback was kind of scary.. And intense too. I could feel the TaaRey waala feeling. Sigh. You recreated it for me. My favourite parts from the flashback..

Rey stood there and I smiled but he glared at me. His eyes were burning red and his hands were in a fist.

"Shut this thing up…NOW!"

He yelled at me and threw my smart phone at me. I fumbled with it and unlocked it to stop the music from playing.

Of course I just had to do everything that a normal person wouldn't, I was born a rebel. So I shout knowing it would make him angrier.

"What the…what was wrong with the song?!"

"That's none of your damn business!" He yelled back and now he was an inch away from me. His nostrils were flaring in anger and I was shell shocked for a moment. Was this the same guy who had been telling me Santa Banta jokes a few minutes ago?

I stared at him, my heart was beating fast out of fear but I knew this was my fault. I had made him angrier and I had to do something about it.

And the best, best, best... 'Bestest' part was..

"Rey," I said calmly placing a hand on his cheeks, "please calm down." My voice was pleading as he continued to stare at me angrily. He looked at me a bit more before letting his eyes fall on the ground while taking a few steps back.

"Sorry." He mumbled then hurriedly got his stuff and walked out of the room.

Gosh! Seriously, di.. I could imagine it all.. All of it! Gosh! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

And then Taani saw his and Kriya's pic in his wallet and kept it back where he left it. And the fact that even Taani felt that they looked like just good friends make me more confused. But then their pic was in his wallet... But that doesn't mean that they were in love, right? Or maybe it did.. Or maybe not... Ugh!!

Loved the Armaan-Taani convo too.. He seems nice... (Imagining KSG! 😆 )

Shipa and Rey came in hand in hand? 🤓 Didn't expect that either..

Armaan and Shilpa? 😕 So many suspences, di? Now I get why you named your FF 'Convoluted'.. 😳

And the Taani-Rey part in the car... I don't know why but I simply loved the way Rey asked her why she didn't give him his wallet... That was really nice.


Slowly and painfully...

Would love to see some Taani-Swayam scenes.. But I guess you have written the next chapter by now.. 😆

I am completely confused about Kriya-Rey.. And about letting Taani know about her.. I would love to see Rey tell it all to her.. But in the end its your wish.. I again, I think you have already written the next part.. 😆

Update soon, di.. Please. Waiting eagerly now... Excited!

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

Umm... Reserved?!
So sorry, di. Will unres this comment and the previous one ASAP! Sorry! :-/

Lol. Thats fine sweety! Take your time (:
And omg! You are using my sig of VD! I almost forgot about those ones

res i know u must be cursing at me
but im so busy :'(
and arrrggghhh not the 1st one 😡 😭
oh well 😆

Res

Originally posted by: -3raser-

Awww...your so cute! It's okay doll! Take your time and read whenever you want.
Thanks for the comment though!

omg!! U called me doll? Datz really sweet of u! 😳 😳 😳
n didi..i read bth the parts together! 😊
u r a F.A.B writer!!! 👏 👏 👏
loved d way u write!!!
Truly awesome yrrr!!! 👏 👏
bt wat i loved d most was TAANI'S NAME=> TSUNAMI!!🤣
n d second one was TAANI'S EXPLAINATORY NOTE ON SNEHA'S QUESTION!!! 😳 😳
GOSH!! 🤣 🤣 🤣

nice update!! hm i think maybe armaan is shilpa's ex n rey n shilpa no clue!!! luvd the upd

AWSUM UPDATE..