The Photographer # 2: New thread Link Pg 142 - Page 23

aaahhh!!
despite all her resistance and stubbornness of letting him in or opening upto him someone is seeing green by mere presence of a model near ASR!!! and here i cant stop grinning at all!! 😃
ohh and they are connected from the past! she was looking for her mother and he waned to help her! i wonder what could have happened that they disappeared so suddenly! really really curious...
and dear you are one of the fabulous writer i have come across to IF..ever since i've come across this story i recommended this to every single friend of mine who reads FFs.. im in madly with love with this story n your writing.. :))

I loved every line u wrote ofouse it happens with every update of urs , u r very good at choosing words ,and I am stunned by words u use that make beautiful lines ,that actually needs a lot of thought and a feel from within to come up with such beautiful lines and in a way it says many things about the writer herself ,how she feels ,what she thinks and how she views life to be and lot more ,leaving aside all this I must say I am loving the momentum of the story and the way its evolving and how unkowigly though arnav and kushi r exploring each other ,I loved that childhood connection between then and I am waiting for the day for arnav to realse that small girl was indeed kushi

i loved chapter 11 and 12:)

hey!! I follow your other story "choices" and just came across this one...

so they are connected aint they
she was that girl he was thinking of right
but then where did she go
guess she went with her now parents huh
but why is he thinking of that today
its because of khushi right
things have changed between them and this is just the start
hmmm it seems that what ever is between them that they tried to refute is not letting them get away from each other
not that they wanna get away
hmmm who would have thought he would think about his past
and yes she is jealous man
and why not so far she had him to herself
even if she didnt realise the same but the entry of sonia or was it sanya
sorry didnt pay attention to her name
more on what khushi was feeling seeing them together
awww dont you just love it he was worried for her
and now she is mad about this new entry
cant wait for more
cheers for pm

I'm sorry you felt less appreciated as a writer! I genuinely think you are a wonderful writer and shouldn't be fazed by the amount of readership or feedback I know how important both are for writer but you're bigger and better writer than that so don't worry!
Coming to the chapter hmmm so khushi was that little girl arnav was warned not to play with. I wish khushi let arnav in more like open up more to him I feel like she is very closed off but I like that she is jealous atleast she is coming around.

arnav's concern & worry for her was nice... she questioned him abt the reason for his kiss.. 😉 guess the green eyed monster defo hit her... 😛loved d update!

Not good at giving back lengthy feedback, but ill give it a shot :/

The conversation on the staircase was a shock for me i didn't think they would talk about it so quickly
Ooh the green eyed monster when involved with ArHi is always great
Great update

Loved the update. :) loved the conversation part