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.Brooke.

@.Brooke.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Awesome update.

Staircase conversation was beautiful and meaningful.

Loved to see jealousy in Khushi.

Thanks for the pm.

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

awww...
jealous khuhi...treat to read...
lovd da way their relation ix progressing...
another beautiful update dear...
waiting to knw more about their past...
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thnxxx 4 pm...

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nazifa

@nazifa

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

😉jealousy part i always love

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kushigowda

@kushigowda

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

SO KHUSHI'S MOTHER WAS SERVANT OF SHESH MAHAL!!!
NICE UPDATE😊

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kiran1992

@kiran1992

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Very nice dear...
Superb update...
I loved d conversation between ArHi abt d kiss they shared...too good yaar...
Finally she s jealous...
I love ur Arnav so much...He is so caring...
Eagerly waitn for d next update... 😃

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

i love this chapter... some sort of progress for both of them. Thanks for the pm.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

So excited as usual to see an update from you ...

Love this story ...

Arnav reminiscing about his childhood and also the little girl who he was quite fond of ...

who apparently was the servants daughter ...

Arnav and Khushi's conversation on the steps was quite stimulating ...

Arnav being so upfront about their jaunt in the kitchen last night ...

both are so aware of each other but their egos keeps them at loggerheads ...

wondering what his reaction would be when he gets to know that the little girl has

grown up into Khushi ... 😆

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter ...

Thanks ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Fantastic update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Aww, Arnav was worried for Khushi.

So Arnav and Khushi are linked from childhood.

Arnav's remembers the little girl he once new and wondering where she is now.

Some Interesting developments happening between Arnav and Khushi.

I love the camera and blackberry talk.

Aww, Khushi is jealous.

I can't wait to read more.

Thanks.😃

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#219

I am so glad to see this update! That too at this hour, it's 5 in the morning! :P

The green eyed monster, eh??? Oh the love bug has stung!

You gave a lot of insight with this update. I was somehow expecting Khushi to be related to Raizadas, like a family friend or something, but nothing in that sort. Arnav is still thinking about Khushi, and here is Khushi trying to join her past together. I wonder if he will find out who she really is, in the next update, especially now that he has a hint of what she is up to.

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#220

u r good at dialogues writing. i liked the below words

"'' Sometimes what you want is not entirely what you need. What do you need Arnav? I need guarantees. I need promises. I am not going to wear my heart on my sleeve because I know I am the only one who is going to end up hurt.''

good job... loved the update. continue writing. waiting for next update.