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Shiza,

A Big thank you for the long update!!🤗

LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!👍🏼

I can't enough of this Arnav and Khushi in this story and the story itself and your writing always leaves where I struggle to find the right words to write my comments or express my views, because it stirs so many emotions inside me. I feel like my words won't do justice to your writing.😳

The banter between Arnav and Khushi was like watching Tom and Jerry, Harry and Sally. Slowly and steadily Khushi is taking over Arnav's heart and mind and Arnav is losing control over himself and letting his instincts take over hence the kiss. I think he teases and irks Khushi to get a reaction from her.☺️

One moment we are on a teasing riot and next moment you drop us into emotional turbulence of Khushi. It's hard to say that a girl like Khushi has so much pain, turmoil inside her and the battle she is having between getting closure on the past and living in the present, it's hard.😭

NK is definition of a friend, he knows when to make Khushi laugh, pull her leg, push her, support her, lend his shoulder and give space. He totally trusts Khushi and Khushi trusts him equally, no wonder she brought him along.👍🏼

Of course Arnav is more worried than angry at Khushi. He got a glimpse of a lonely lost girl behind the spit fire, free spirited Khushi.

I usually never ask any of writers to update the story soon or when they will update but I am going to ask you "Haq se", when will you update next? And can you update soon please😳?

I loved the update!

Wonderful update..their kiss...

dark secrets understood.. white lies??

Originally posted by: JRia

dark secrets understood.. white lies??

Loved reading u..

Originally posted by: IPKKNDkaur92

OMG THEY KISSED

fantastic update...looking forward to know what the mystery is about...loving the story...keep it up

Originally posted by: Crazy4Sobti

Shiza,

A Big thank you for the long update!!🤗

LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!👍🏼

I can't enough of this Arnav and Khushi in this story and the story itself and your writing always leaves where I struggle to find the right words to write my comments or express my views, because it stirs so many emotions inside me. I feel like my words won't do justice to your writing.😳

The banter between Arnav and Khushi was like watching Tom and Jerry, Harry and Sally. Slowly and steadily Khushi is taking over Arnav's heart and mind and Arnav is losing control over himself and letting his instincts take over hence the kiss. I think he teases and irks Khushi to get a reaction from her.☺️

One moment we are on a teasing riot and next moment you drop us into emotional turbulence of Khushi. It's hard to say that a girl like Khushi has so much pain, turmoil inside her and the battle she is having between getting closure on the past and living in the present, it's hard.😭

NK is definition of a friend, he knows when to make Khushi laugh, pull her leg, push her, support her, lend his shoulder and give space. He totally trusts Khushi and Khushi trusts him equally, no wonder she brought him along.👍🏼

Of course Arnav is more worried than angry at Khushi. He got a glimpse of a lonely lost girl behind the spit fire, free spirited Khushi.

I usually never ask any of writers to update the story soon or when they will update but I am going to ask you "Haq se", when will you update next? And can you update soon please😳?

Originally posted by: IronButterfly

Even though it must be painful but Khushi had to do this. Her past needs a closure.

The kiss came as unexpectedbut sometimes it's okay o live in the moment and not think of concequences.

Would I be repeating myself, if I say I really loved the chapter? The title is so apt for it. When I started reading, I was curious. I thought we might see a revelation of Khushi's past. Which of course we saw and I had to say there is so much mystery still. I am so eager to know how Khushi and Arnav's past entwines. I think Khushi's mother wanted to come back but couldn't/ Since you showed her parting words, it's evident that Khushi was loved. How is Khushi's mother related to the Sheesh Mahal, since she lived there. I have a bad feeling here. I find myself worrying about Khushi and Arnav's future. Will the past become a roadblock for them? I am so intrigued. Please. Please. Please. update sooner.