#2 Virman ff- Tumse Hai Zindagi *LAST UPDATE* Pg.74 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh wow sara... that was awesome!!!!!!!!
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o so little update n romance was also short but loving the way stor s going plz asa mat krna k ab manvi dukh mai kahin bhag jae n seperation ho aje kuch nya hona chahye loved it sarah continue sooon
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omg dat was a lovely update,
da precap seems very interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
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promo is more interesting
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read last two parts n bth were superb...loved d training part...bt wts dis TT is upto nw??? lyked d way virat dealed wid him...i love dis acp virat...ekdum dhasuuu...bt precap is scary... cntinue soon...Sarah darling... 😉 ❤️
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awesome updatewoah this is getting more n more interesting love the small sweet virman moments bt precap is very scary- distance between virman coming up oh nobt im still very excited to read next partcontinue soon plz 😉sorry for commenting late
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Next part

Walking towards the room..
manvi started pouring all her questions
Manvi : k...k..kya ?? k...k...kyun ??
Virat : Kyun matlab ??
Manvi : i meann ?? aap kya ker rahe ho ??
Virat : bataunga naa...! pehle room mein toh chale...
sab DETAIL mein bataungaaa...
Manvi : (she started protesting by moving her legs back and forth) nai nai naiii...
Virat : kyun ?(stopped in his mid way)
Manvi : pehle neeche utaaro.. phir bolungi !! (she demanded)
Virat : (thought sumthing serious,and he landed her feet down on the floor) bolo !
Manvi : (started dramatically) woh actually...!!
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kuch important tha...
Virat : (little curious,yet calm) kya manvi..? bolo !!
Manvi : Virat.. main...Main...Main aapke bacche ki maa banne waali hu !!
Virat : (Jaw dropped..shocked out of his wits,sense..like his heart jumped up and came in
his mouth,whr his mind boggled) KYAAA ?????
Manvi : (was enough to crack up manvi,and she burst out laughing out soo loud that her
shrills was echoing all over the place)
That is when he understood she just threw a drama line on him,and his lips curved in to a
smile..
Manvi : (trying to breathe in between her laugh,she manages to say) ek.. min(she burst
out laughing again) ...
(controls a bit) aa..aapki shakal...(burst out laughing again) hahahaaa... shakal dekhe..
laayek thi.. Hahahahaa ...
Virat : tumhe pata hai.. Tumko..Museum mein rakhna chahiye... ticket lagni chahiye tumhe
dekhne ke liye..!! Aisa piece aaj tak nahi mila mujhe boss..!!
tum iss duniya ki he ho..!
i doubt sumtimes..
Manvi : (proudly) SOLO PIECE hu...duniya main east,west-north,south.. kahi nahi milega aisa maal..!! Ur ITEM !! (Wink)
Virat : ek dum theeki mirchi ki tarah...
Manvi : uummm... Mirchi ?? woh kyun ?
Virat : (ran his arm from her waist to her back,and pulled her closer,sticking her body against his) Theeki as HOT..!!
(raising his eyebrow) ha..not as hot as meee...!
She just stare in his eyes...the light color... deep as sea...mysterious as other side
of the moon...she thought and lost herself in his desirable eyes...the passion.. the
calmness..the protectiveness...the possessiveness...the Love...ONLY reflect love... his
eyes hypnotizing her already...
Then virat was as in same condition like her... Lost her beautiful eyes...which reflects
naughtiness...craziness...her eyes deep tempting his desire...He leans closer to her
face... feeling her hot,sensual breathe on his face...Craving for love,he just smells the
seductive fragrance from her cheeks,brushing his nose on it a bit..not completely though
She doesn't shut her eyes...neither she stops him... He move his hand further more at her
back wrapping his arm completely...his nose approaching towards her jawline... making
her breathe go a little abnormal...smelling her sudective fragrance till his heart fills
up..and he places a kiss on her jaw...she tilt her head against his a little...
He moves back...but his grip still over her... He leans to capture her lips..but
WRONG TIME !!! His phone rings... TRINGG...!!
He makes a face and she chuckles suppressing her laughter
He takes the call,as he saw diya's name flashing
Vi : hello ? Ha diya ??(She finds a way out of his grips,as he loosen his arms around her

)
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What ??? per kyunnn ??
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Ohh.. Okk...wapas kab tak aogi..??
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Fine..Take care..
Yeah byeee...
(Disconnects the call)
ND she escapes,as she ran from thr...
Nodding helplessly,he walked behind her...calling her "maaanvi rukooo..!!"
She ran in her room...laughing loudly..
He qucikly ran in the room following her...
He shut the door and locks it..with his naughiest smirk over his lips
Virat : (funny evil laugh) sher ke ilaake(place) mein aaker shikaar kab tak
bachega...Hahahaaa...
Manvi : (laughing more louder,she saidin a filmy tone) maut ke muuh mein se bhaag ker aai
hu... toh yeh sher kya cheez hai !!! Hahahaaa...
(virat kept chasing her,she kept running and running)
Manvi : (running around the bed) ek min ek min.. pause pause please..!!
main thak gayi..!! time please..!
Virat : (even he was tired running behind her) okk...(controlling breathe)
Acha theek hai..
chalo ?
(He ask her hand offering his hand...)
Manvi : kaha ???
Virat : Iss ghar ki best jagah hai
comee...
Manvi : (walked upto him and place her hand on his hand)
He takes her to the balcony..seating area


The song starts
"Aasan nahi yaha" from Aashiqui 2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LxaJo-J-Qdg

Music - They settle down in the middle of the seating area..
(He hug her from behind..embracing her in his arms)

Wo o o o... (He turn her head to him and smiled)

Aasaan nahi yahaan aashiq ho jaana (She started her chattering mouth)
Palkon pe kaanton ko sajaana.
Aashiq ko milti hai gham ki saugaatein( He kept staring at her without blinking)
Sabko naa milta yeh khazaana..(He adores her smiling face)

Wo o o o... (She asked him sumthing...and he kept answering her lovingly)
she laughed at what he answered...smiling,laughing sumtimes

Baaton se aage, waadon se aage(she kept explaining him sumthing..as if very important)
Dekho zara tum kabhi ho o..(but he was least interested in her words,he kept admiring her

features)
Yeh to hai shola, yeh hai chingari (She kept blabbering,and giving Hi5s to him for

cracking jokes)
Yeh hai jawaag bhi

Wo o o o... for a moment she stopped laughing,when she caught his gaze only at

her..staring,smilingly...
He joined his forehead onto hers...she look down blushing a little)

Jismon ke peechhe bhaage ho phirte (he tighten his arms around her stomach,and place a

kiss on her cheek)
Utro kabhi rooh mein ho..
Hota kya aashiq, kya aashiqhi hai (they open thr eyes and look at each other)
Hogi khabar tab tumhein (he smiles a little...she reciprocated with a smile)

Wo o o o...(He looks at her lips..and leans a little,She doesn't move back...
Before leaning closer,he again look in her eyes...Her sparkling eyes were inviting him
She shut eyes softly..and virat soon in no second placed a soft kiss on her lips..
He parted his lips from hers... and looked at her...She opened her eyes and smiled to him
Thats all a heavenly feeling to be in each others arms...
She rest her back in his arms...laying her back on his chest..He wrapped his arms around her stomach...
(they both loked up in the sky..at the stars and the moon...
Virat : kaash hum humesha aise he reh paate..!!
Manvi : (confused) matlab ?? aap konsa mujhe chod ker jaa rahe hai ?
Virat : ek baat kahu ??
Manvi : kya ?
Virat : Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.. mujh se duur mat jana..!!
Manvi : (smiled) don't worry...manvi-col ka jodh hu.. itni aasani se nahi chodungi..
Virat : aur na he main chodunga...! (hugging her more tightly)
Manvi : I hope humaara aane wala kal bhi aisa he hoo...Hum humesha ek saat rahe...
Virat : Hamara kal jaisa bhi ho manvi.. hum saath milkar usse khoobsurat banayenge ...
lekin agar tum saath nahi rahi ... toh na mera aaj hai, na aane waala kal..!!!
His words were sooo meaningful...Manvi could clearly feel the fear in his tone
Manvi : (she assure him) main kabhi nahi chodungi aapko..!
aur problems toh sabki life mein hoti hai...
Jab tak hum andhere(darkness) ko nahi mehsoos kerenge..toh roshini(light) ki kadar(worth)
kaise jaanenge hum ??
Virat : Main tumhe kabhi andhere mein nahi rakhunga manvi...
I promise..
Manvi : mujhe andhere se darr nahi lagta..!!
aap saat ho.. toh koi bhi problem ko hass ke saamna ker lungi...
He smiled...As he remembered how weak she was earlier...and now she is this strong
enough...BUT...He still fear of loosing her
Virat : I hope humari bhi sabki tarah Happy ending hoo..
Manvi : hmmm...!! aur agar na ho toh ???(just casually)
Virat : (the most horrifying thought to live without her)..Nai..!! Aisa kabhi nai hoga...
Manvi : arre main toh aise he bol rahi thi...
Aur waise bhi...Agar happy ending na ho..toh woh End he nahi hoti..
Aapko wohh...Shahrukh khan ki movie..Om Shanti Om ka dailogue yaad hai...??
"Filmo ki tarah sabki life mein Happy ending he hota hai...aur agar Happy ending na
ho...toh woh End he nahi hai...Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost..!!!"she said looking at him
She continued" Dekhna...humaari life bhi "happy ending" wali hogi.. aur agar na ho...toh aap usse Ending kabhi mat maanna...!!
Virat : And i Love You...
She turned to him all of a sudden...
She smiled and replied
Manvi : I love u tooo...
they both chuckle looking at eachother...
Virat took her hand..and kissed her knuckles..she felt that quick rush of happiness in
her heart when your lover kisses ur knuckles...she just admire him... his Love...
Opening her fist,He kiss her palm... before he look at her,She moved to him and kissed

his cheek...not a surprise for him...but he felt really nice..when her lips crashed his cheek as a kiss..
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Virat lift her in his arms... and manvi wrap her hands around his neck
he walk into the room...towards the bed...
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Placing her carefully on the bed...He landed on top of her..looking into her eyes..
giving rise to his Passion and Desire...She cup his cheek in her palm...and place another
hand over his neck...He place a kiss on her forehead...That single kiss conveyed all the
possessiveness,protectiveness towards her...She shut her eyes in order to give away her
soul to him...
He lean into her neck..kissing softly at first and then speeding nuzzles in the same place...
She frowns when she felt his love bites in her neck..but that was one heavely
feeling..being loved soo much by Only your soulmate...Living the moment forever..raise
her head up to give him sign to love her more...
He cup her cheek and jawline in his palm...he stops and comes to her face..and place a
hurried kiss on her lips...making her gasp at ones..and then soothingly rubbing his lips
against hers till she melts in the moment...
She move her hand from the bed to his shoulder...
Soon they moved to thr comfort level in each other's arms
(don't expect me to describe the whole scene,i m writing it..but i m very sick..Sorry)
Free from all the barriers...
They wrapped eachother in a silk bed sheet...Virat moving on top of her...
Leaving all the love marks over her neck and throat... entwinning his fingers onto her's
holding it against the bed...
showering his kisses on her face,neck etc...
They were continuing the rid of love..
..BUT
..His phones rings..
Virat stops..
Virat : (sitting up,irriated) urrrghh...!
Manvi smiles pity on him
virat takes the call
Unknown : ACP Saab...! khoob maze mein ?? (evilish tone)
This fades virat's cute expressions...frowns narrowed his eye brows in anger
He looked at manvi who was smiling,blushing at him...sitting beside him,resting her head
on his shoulder...holding the sheet agaist her chest
..He fake smiles..and sign whisper in her ears "i'll be back...!"
He get up from the bed..Still wearing his jeans..but No shirt...
He walks out of the room,shuting the door silently behind him
Virat : (walkin away from the door of the room,in supressed anger tone) Vishnu
reddy...Kyun phone kiya ??
Vishnu : Haal chal poochne phone kiya..
waise bhi..ab thode he din reh gaye hai na...uske baad tujhse yeh poochne wala bhi nai
hoga...I mean..woh ladki nai hogi na..
Virat's blood boils at what he tells..
Virat : kehna kya chahta hai haaa ???
Vishnu : arrre gussa mat hona.. main uss ladki ko kuch nai kerunga..
Dushmani toh meri tujh se hai... maarunga toh main tujhe..
Aur tujhe maar ker..uss ladki ko uthaa lunga..aur MERE SAAT rakhunga...taake tu marne ke
baad bhi teri aatma tadap ti rahe...(full evil tone)
Virat : tujhse phir keh raha hu...USSE beech mein mat laa... teri dushmani mujh se hai...
yeh hum dono ke beech he rakh...
Vishnu : arre main usse kaha beech mein la raha hu... ab woh khud teri zindagi mein teri
kamzoori(weakness) ban ker aa gayi.. toh main kya ker sakta hu... Teri kamzoori he toh
meri taaqat hai... woh nai hoti toh.. direct tu he hota...
ab wo mere liye ek raasta ban gayi hai...tujhe barbaad kerne...
agar usse barbaad karunga..toh tu kahi ka nahi rahega...
Theek he hai na ??
Virat was boiling all badly... He veins were ready to blast out.. He want to scream out
loud, bring out his frustration..and abuse him...but he is HELPLESS now... Vishnu
clearly mentioned that he will be USING manvi to get him... what else can Scare the hell out of him...??
Vishnu : (laughing evilly) hahahahaaa... main jaanta hu tu kitna gussa ho raha hai..
arre bol de... gussa nikaal he de...warna uss bechaari per gussa nikaalega...
Virat : (blurred out) Tujhe dene ke liye toh is duniya mein koi gaali bhi nahi hai...!!
Vishnu : toh taareef he kerde...
lekin kuch toh bol..
Woh ACP ki akkad kaha gayi ?? sone...yaa uss ladki ke saat hai ?? ha ??
Tch tch tch...kitna bura waqt aa gaya hai tera...
Virat : Waqt bura ho ya achcha ... ek na ek din badalta zaroor hai
ab tera waqt chal raha hai... Jab Mera waqt shuru hoga na ...us waqt tere waqt ke saat
saat tu bhi khatam ho jayega...!!!
Vishnu : jaisa bhi waqt hoga... lekin uss waqt bhi..Main maarta jaoonga ...tu harta jayega
Virat : Tere jaise log is desh ke liye shraap hai...!!
Tujhe khatamm kerna bahot zaroori hai...
aur jab tak yeh ACP Zinda hai...manvi ko tu haat toh kya uss pe nazar bhi nahi daal sakta...
Vishnu : aane wala waqt he batayega..ke tu usse kaise bachaayega...
Lekin mera bhi vaada hai tujh se...jab tak Uss ladki ko tujh se door nahi ker dunga

main..aur tujhe barbaad na kerdu main.. tab tak marunga nahi...
Virat : tujhe barbaad kerne ke liye zinda he nahi chodunga...
Vishnu : bahot jald humaara aamna saamna hoga...
uss din uss ladki ko main chodunga nahi..!!!(He disconnects the call)
Virat hit the pillar nearby him in damn anger...!! Now he is getting on his nerves...
HEL...!! Targeting manvi !!! He actually agree over here..that if manvi's wasn't in his

life today.. he would hav never fallen weak..!!! Manvi has becum his weakness by now.
His world is all spinning around now...He is falling apart nowww...Something is going

wrong... all not able to figure out is MANVI'S LIFE...IS IN DANGER...!!
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half n hour since..
Manvi n the room..
Still sitting in the bed,wrapped in a sheet..hugging her knees and sitting waiting for

him..
Manvi : kaha gaayeb ho gaye yeh ??
she looked around and found her night robe hanging at the head post of the bed...
She thought for a moment..and quickly left the sheet..and wore her night robe...
She came out of the room...looking around and searching him
She peaks down,but he isn't thr..its all dark in the living area..
she scanned the upper area of the house..but didn't find him..
Thinking twice,she walked down stairs...it was pitch dark...she was convinced he might

not be here and was going back...BUT..Stopped..when she found that another living area's light switched on..She followed the light..and reached that living area...
There she saw him...standing at the bar counter...and gulping down the drink...
Something she wondered was...why is he drinking now ??
She called him "Virat..."
He turned immediately and saw her standing at the door...looking at him puzzled
He stared at her with his drowsy eyes...
Vishnu's words echoed in his ears..
"ab woh khud teri zindagi mein teri kamzoori(weakness) ban ker aa gayi.."
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"Teri KAMZOORI he toh meri TAAQAT hai..."
"Teri KAMZOORI he toh meri TAAQAT hai..."
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"ab wo mere liye ek raasta ban gayi hai...tujhe barbaad kerne mein..."
"ab wo mere liye ek raasta ban gayi hai...tujhe barbaad kerne mein..."
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"agar usse barbaad karunga..toh tu kahi ka nahi rahega..."
"agar usse barbaad karunga..toh tu kahi ka nahi rahega..."

(His words repeating again and again in his mind)

"Teri KAMZOORI he toh meri TAAQAT hai..."
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"woh khud teri zindagi mein teri kamzoori(weakness) ban ker aa gayi.."

Frustrated by his own thoughts...He turned back to the back...and started gulping the
whole bottle...
Manvi got even more confused
Virat Already DRUNK...And drinking again...
manvi comes in and ask him confused
Manvi : Virat...aap yaha ???
itni raat ko ??
Virat : (ignores her...as he was fuming in anger)
manvi : A...A..ACP Sir ?? Kya problem hai..? (little hesitating to ask,she came to him
and keeps her hand on his shoulder)
JUST THEN...He burst his anger out by throwing the drink bottle sumwhr and yelling on her
on top of his voice..
Virat : DAMN IT..!! TUM HO PROBLEM...!!!
She jerked back abrubtly...frightened by his sudden anger behaviour
Ohh no..He is drunk and he didn't stopped yet
Virat : (Yelling and shouting like never before) JAB SE AAYI HO MERI LIFE MEIN...
SAB KUCH GALAT HO RAHA HAI !!!!!!!!!
DIMAAG KHARAAB HO RAHA HAI MERA...
MUJHE TUMSE PYAAR KERNA HE NAHI CHAHIYE THAAA...SAB MERI GALTI HAIII...!!!!!
Manvi : (scared by him,she took a step back and asked him) K...kya..kya hua ??
Virat : TUM PROBLEM HO MANVI..KAHA NA MAINE...TUM PROBLEM HOO..!!! MERI LIFE KI SABSE BADI GALTI..!!
MAINE KHUD APNE LIFE KHARAAB KI...TUMSE PYAAR KERKE..!!!!
(Manvi's heart was broken into million peices)
Virat didn't stopped yet
Virat : (never like before,she was screaming at her) SAB MERI GALTI HAI..!!!
TUMHE USS DIN SADAK KE UTHAA KER SEEDHA HOSPITAL MEIN CHOD DENA CHAHIYE THA... MERA DIMAAG KHARAAB THA...JO MAIN TUMHE... YAHA LAAYA...
NAAHI MAIN TUMHE YAHA LATA..NAAHI TUMHARI CARE KERTA... AUR NAAHI MUJHE TUMSE PYAAR HOTA...!!!!!
(She couldn't believe her ears...and tears rushing down from her eyes)
Virat : YAHI TUMHAARE AANSU HER WAQT MUJHE KAMROOR KERTE GAYE...!!!!
ITNA KAMZOOR KE AB MAIN KHUD EK KAMZOOR INSAAN BAN GAYA HU...!!!
TUM MERI KAMZOORI BAN GAYI HO DAMN ITTT...!!!!
(She doesn't want to hear anything further...supressing her sobs..wiping her tears..she
was about to run away from thr...When he caught her wrist and pulled her back to him,like
her hands crash onto his chest and he looked at her angrily
Manvi : (sobbing badly,and trying to fre her hand,she apologized) i m sorry... sorry...!! (crying)
But virat was drunk...her tears were not working on him...neither was her words...Virat
Virat : I m not done yet !!!!!(said firmly)
She raised her eyes and looked in to his eyes...!!
For virat,obviously he was attracted towards her... and now being in non-sense
state..drunk state...he couldn't go any wilder as he ran his one hand around her waist to her back...and pulled her against his body..much closer to him...Her teary eyes popped out...she have no idea what he is up to...
Virat : (looking passionately into her eyes,he said rubbing his nose against her cheek)
Sab galat ho raha hai manvi !!! sab galat ho raha hai...!!!! (leaning down in her neck
and nuzzling)...Kamzoor bana diya iss Pyaar ne mujhe...!!!!!
Manvi's tears were flowing down to her cheeks...she was not blinking...Now she very well
know his intentions...
She tried and freed her hand from his grip...
But virat was damn angry...He 1ns again caught her wrist...turned her over and pinned her against the bar counter..She is damn scared now !!!
He didn't waited and burried his face in her neck,bringing all his frustration out by kissing and assaulting her...
She gasped in her shocking sense "Viraaat..!"
Thr was a room connected to that living area..
AND
Soon she realized herself on the bed...under him..under his control...
She had no guts to say a word...she was helpless...she attempt to stop him..by slightly
pushing him...But he was soo out of control that he caught her wrist and pinned it again the bed...this shocked manvi again !!!! he is all trying to get over her...
ripped off her night robe...! his fae in her neck nuzzling and biting...!
Yes...she could feel his wild bites on her neck...silent tears were making thr way out of her eyes corners...His hands travelling all over her waist and back...
He stopped in her neck and came to her face...He didn't waited and captured her lips... kissing as wild as he could...
He broke the kiss quickly.and nuzzled wildly in her cheek...She tried to free her hands from his grip..but every time he tighten his grip...
He was bringing all his Anger and Frustration out on her...
(i can't explain more guys... i m extremely ill)
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Next morning !!!
The sun rises...
here in the room...!(not virman room)
Virat sleeping flat on his stomach...But manvi wasn't thr...
He moves and turn over to other side..in that action..his sleep gets disturbed
he open his sleepy eyes.. at first he didn't recognize whr he is... But widely opened his
eyes and jerked up sitting on the bed...looking around...he realized he in not in his room..he is in the guest room in the separate living area..AND Manvi is not around...
He Thought for a moment and recollected last night...
he had a bad convo with vishnu...then he was drinking alcohol..Manvi came to him
AND...AND...AND...! He burst out his anger on her..
He still remember his harsh words on her...
THEN...THEN...THEN... He assaulted her...he just remembered how he forced her last night...yeah..that was forcible...
He scanned the room with his eyes...and manvi was not thr..
he qucikly got off the bed... still in his jeans but not in his shirt...
He walked out quickly...! manvi was nowhr in that living area..
He searched her in the hall area.. she wasn't thr..
He ran up stairs in to his room...AND Thr she was sitting on floor,resting her back to the bed...hugging her knees and sobbing her sleep..
He quickly rush towards her... as soon as manvi realized virat in the room..
she jerked up standing and started backing off...! Yes...SCARED she is...!!
Virat : (trying to walk up to her) Manvi..i m sorry..!!!!
Manvi : (backing off) mujhe kuch nai sunnaa..(crying)
Virat : manvi.. i can explain..! please... listen to mee..
Before he could get to her...She escaped and ran into the washroom..shutting the door harshly...
Virat ran his palm over his face and hair... he is all tensed now..!! worried !!! guilty !!!!
He curse himself for doing that...!! she should hav controlled himself...!!

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Promo will be posted later..i m extremely sorry for disappointing update..! i m really very sick... can't even talk..! so please spare me.. SORRY again..!!! 😭


Sarah..

Edited by princess_sara - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
the update was awsomeee sara
worth waiting it was and also worth reading
im seriously loving this gusse wala acp virat
the song was perfect and the dialogues were beautiful fear of losing manvi was clearly explained from virat's side...
the romantic moment was adorable and yeahh hate that jerk vishnu he should get a piece of mind but he was right all of virat's anger was targeted on manvi and that was what he wanted but didnt expected virat to do this kind of stuff with manvi and her reaction was obvious waiting for the teaser update soon really cant wait 😉
Edited by vamps1996 - 12 years ago
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