#2 Virman ff- Tumse Hai Zindagi *LAST UPDATE* Pg.74

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shaimah

@shaimah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Amazing update

Excited for the next update

Excited to see how virat apologises for his mistake..

Continue soon and please do pm me!!

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Kirti

@kirti.taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

u calling it DISAPPOINTED...😡
IF it is disappointed then wat wud be ur update wich u call great..😲😲
seriously sara update was amazing..👏👏👏
v had witnessed manvi's anger many time..bt its d first ever v have seen virat's outbrust on manvi..
beautifully written...👏👏
badly craving to read their apology any making up session🥱😳😳

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shaalivirman

@shaalivirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

OMG!!! tat was awsome...wowww!!!! update sooonnn...i cant wait fr next update...eekkkss ❤️👏

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pritivirman

@pritivirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

the updt was mndblwnggg.. xctd for nxt updt.. cont soon..

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Nikhita Dixit

@ambarsariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

SUPER HIT UPDATE...😉

CONTINUE SOON...😊

BT WHY R YOU NOT UPDATING IN ANOTHER STORY OF URS???😕😭

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Rofl yeh kya hogayaaa??? Desh ka rakshak bangaya rakshas lmafooo! Bad boy virat I loveee it... When anger takes over its hard to control n that's Wat he did... But poor manvi.. Her sweet lOve making dream became a wild n a bad one... 😳 Now weak point will be out of his hand...hope he regrets his action.. Which he will I assume..let's see if manvi will leave humor not..
This part was sexy :)
You take care girl!!!! Rest well n thanks for writing although U we're sick

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Haila...ki hoya kudiya? Bataya bhi nahi...huff...ill catch u later on FB

wowww mindblowing updt...trually fantastice...thier kuchi ku moments were so beautiful...n much decent...lolzzz...but kamina vishnu ill kill this man 1 day...always spoil the moments...huh..hwww virat unintentionaly scratch those old wounds again...poor manvi i hope she understand his situation...cont soon...n take care..no need to hurry...get well soon...muwhhh

Edited by rasp_berry - 12 years ago

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luvmanat

@luvmanat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

hey sarah even if it is sad update but it is part of story and u have described well good or i'll say u hv done ur best
i love ur stories bcoz u really hv that talent
i loved ur updates
take care of urself

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

nice update

plz update soon..

n take care of urself dear...

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paddu503

@paddu503

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Amazing update...loved the song and their romantic moment...angry virat...he showed his anger on manvi...,..now what he will do???...,whole update was superb...dialogues were amazing...-...continue soon,...take care...

Edited by paddu53 - 12 years ago