Virika FF: Married At 18 Ch.21 Pg143 - Page 99

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Posted: 11 years ago
. What was your first impression when I came with a story like this?
i luv d concept of the story very much...

2. What was the first thought that came on you, when I mentioned that this story is inspired by a Wattpad story?
i have'nt read it so it did'nt bothered me!!!

3. What do you think on characterization of Viren as a bad boy?
its something unique to see him in badboy character...

4. How much do you like Viren in this story?
i luv his attitude very much nd his sometime caring nature too...

5. If you got a chance, what advice would you like to give to the main lead Babydoll?
i want that she should face her stepfather boldly...

6.What are the limitation you find in this story? [Note: BE SINCERE AND TRUE , nd it can include my writing skills too!]
no limitations seriously...

7. What all improvisation do you want in this story?
it is just perfect:)it does not need any improvement.

8.Rate the pace of this story - Fast , Medium or Slow!!
medium...

9. Which was the chapter you really got bored and made you skip it
i havent skipped any chap yet all are very interesting...

10. Last but not the least - How bad/good am I as a writer ? What are the good points in me and my limitations.. how do you guys want me to improve!
u are a superb writer...
the story is always in flow nd i never feel bore reading it so hats off to u:)

11. Rate the writer of this story at the scale of 1 to 10...
its perfect so i will give u 10 on 10


this part was also amzing
thanks for pm
i just adore your writing:)
cont soonnn...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shobrakapooor



1. What was your first impression when I came with a story like this?

umm i was like 🤢 coz i thought because of this story i wont concentrate on fwp .. 😆 bt now i like it more than fwp 😛

2. What was the first thought that came on you, when I mentioned that this story is inspired by a Wattpad story?

well tht dosent matter to me .. its cool so chill baby

3. What do you think on characterization of Viren as a bad boy?

sometimes i dun like it whn he was talking to alishah to .. ummm 😉

4. How much do you like Viren in this story?

i justtt loveee himmm whn he flirts wid jeevika ... eben i blush at tht tym [LOl]
so over all hes fine .. nd i think maybe his all tht bad bad things are justified coz os kripa .. shahyad ..

5. If you got a chance, what advice would you like to give to the main lead Babydoll?

i want babydoll to flirt wid bad boy [LOL[

6.What are the limitation you find in this story? [Note: BE SINCERE AND TRUE , nd it can include my writing skills too!]

well thts a difficult thing ..aaa
well everything is perfect ..
i think i am still confused wid the character of alishah ..

7. What all improvisation do you want in this story?

i just love the way it is .. NO NEED TO CHANGE ANYTHING ... i dun want u to loose the charm of this story

8.Rate the pace of this story - Fast , Medium or Slow!!

it depends .. sometimes i feel its slow (whn jeevs met her sis .. u took really long to describe all tht ) sometimes its fast (temple scene )
9. Which was the chapter you really got bored and made you skip it!😛

no one actually

10. Last but not the least - How bad/good am I as a writer ? What are the good points in me and my limitations.. how do you guys want me to improve

ur an excellent ..jsut like professional I MEAN IT .. no need to change PLEASEEE .. I JUST LOVE THE WAY U ARE

11. Rate the writer of this story at the scale of 1 to 10...

CREATIVITY CANNOT BE EXPRESSED IN NUMBERS ..
BT FR U I'LL SAY 10
12.Jot down your thoughts about the official siggy/Avi maker of this story!😛 [Juju, what is MA 18 without you , so had to include you here]

WHICH ONE ?? the kiss wala ?? well i must tell u .. whn i have saw tht literally fr one minute i forgot abt ur story nd was drolling over it 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
soory fr the short comments on ur long long upfates
actually its 1 am nd i dun feel like to type :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
i guess these are my last comments coz m going
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Posted: 11 years ago
bt m gonna read all the updates i would be missing soon afterwards :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOL SPAMMING
after soo long
❤️
i love this
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Posted: 11 years ago
next update would surely be on next thread :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
advance congo fr the new thread
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg page 149
ohh balle balle
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Posted: 11 years ago
well dun worry i am nt going to finnish this thread
coz i knw many more comments are in the line

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