Virika FF: Married At 18 Ch.21 Pg143

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veronica.syl

@veronica.syl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#991

first of all...

GOD...Y M I SO LATE????!!!!

ANYWAYS...my internet was down...n den dose stupid xams...dats d reason y i cudnt commnt...( told u in d beginning...m not a good spammer)😛 😆

coming 2 d story...totally short of words...how come my virenji turn lyk dis????😆

u seriously needed 2 send dese story 2 d cvs...😊

coming 2 d questions...

1. What was your first impression when I came with a story like this?

i always wanted something new on virika (a gr8 virikian u know)😛 , apart from wht we saw in d show... n i somehow came across dis story...after dat...got addicted to it😆

2. What was the first thought that came on you, when I mentioned that this story is inspired by a Wattpad story?

never read any stories from wattpad...so it was cool wid me...😊

3. What do you think on characterization of Viren as a bad boy?

what i thought was virenji can never turn a bad boy...always referred to him as VIREN JI... d man who spoke little n never spoke to a girl... When i first read his character...i was like 😡 but somehow d flirticious-yet-goody good at heart Viren was innocent, charming n yet a Cute Jerk😆...but as d story progressed i fell in luv wid d Jerk..!!!! never thought dat he wud get so flirty n possessive...something which was missing in virenji...(but still Virenji is best)...😉

(Note- I would luv 2 see d man Karan Tacker himself pay such kind of role, in future)❤️

4. How much do you like Viren in this story?

i dont like him...I LOVE HIM...🤣.but still would like 2 see his good nature...😉

5. If you got a chance, what advice would you like to give to the main lead Babydoll?

Keep making VIREN jealous😆 i luv dis side of viren's...n also no matter how much he irritates u n fights with u...he is d best anyone can ever get...😊

6.What are the limitation you find in this story?

although i luv d story dat i keep reading it all over again...but i feel dat some tyms d story goes offtrack...didnt want Emma to come whn Rhea was enough to create probs...😕 n didnt want sanjay whn sam was der...( i know dat he was introduced later...but still)

7. What all improvisation do you want in this story?

no improvisation...just dont let it go off track...n wud luv 2 see characters similar to swamini bua, inder chachu n kadambari chachi in d story...😊

8.Rate the pace of this story - Fast , Medium or Slow!!

medium

9. Which was the chapter you really got bored and made you skip it!😛

i never skipped any chappie...d storys 2 good to do dat...😃

10. Last but not the least - How bad/good am I as a writer ? What are the good points in me and my limitations.. how do you guys want me to improve!

u r just fabulous...i personally love jeevs portrayal...make me cry😭

n whn she's bold enough to slap her hubby n insult him( but he is too good for dat too😉) i m lyk '''You Go Girl''

plz dont improve...ur story is gud d way it is...if it is needed in future...will definitely inform u...😉 😛

11. Rate the writer of this story at the scale of 1 to 10.

i wud say 9.75/10 (dat cute jerk got slaps...dats y -0.25)😛

12.Jot down your thoughts about the official siggy/Avi maker of this story!😛

it's too gud...10/10😃 (just lyk any movie poster...wud luv to see more in upcoming parts of d story)😊

so dats all...hope u havent felt offended by my views😭

if yes den sorry

keep continuing dis beautiful story...😊

loads of luv...

Edited by veronica.syl - 11 years ago

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veronica.syl

@veronica.syl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#992

first tym in my life...such a long comment...😆🤣

anyways luv u navya (n ur story)😆

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Aaliya

@-Aaliya.KryAn-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#993

The thread is already completed!!

Cheers Zainab. 🥳

*Waiting* 😛

Edited by krystu05 - 11 years ago

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starsshinex

@starsshinex

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#994

I demand the next update soon in a complete new thread Navya. 😆 Congrats for finishing this. 🤗

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808226

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#995

New thread please Navya...I have lots too unres 😉

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Afsha

@iLuvYellow

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#996

Please update ( on a new thread) 😃

Edited by iLuvYellow - 11 years ago

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#997

first sorry! navya for comenting itni late... Kia karu about my net still not rep[ared 😒 you hw eager for your update.. but Damn! this net dunno hw long it gonna take to get repared nw it\s been more den 3 mnth 😡

navya what should i say aboput your update or you ghosh! you alwayz meft me speecless man! seriously im running short in words to praise it's way too beyond My word raelly Appreacitate 👏 thsi all i can say ❤️You are Truly An Super duperr! Writer! 👏 🤗 ❤️

coming to Update...

Loved it! Love the dream! for moment i thought it's happening!

the most and best part i loved is rohan-Jeevika im loving the fact is rohan liking Jeevika i really wanted to see this can we see moer of rohan-Jeevika 😳 i want to see possessive & jealous viren 😛 Please!! 😳

And love the concern in viren's eyes for Jeevika for her lips 😆 i alwayz preferd very shy Jeevika as m 😳 Toh im enjoying Every bit of your Update it's very much of my taste ❤️

coming to last part ghosh!!!! It Wass ☺️ Seriosuly it made me the way he said i was literally Blushing! ☺️ how you manage to write such Amazing Navya!!! 👏

last bit was quite like the Dream Haina ?😳

ghosh! now i really want a very jaldi se Updatee navya...!!!! Can'tw ait sachiii mein!! 🤪

navya my net droping down for 2-3 days is liye im comnting late Okay! sorry! will surly answer your each question! 😊

-MehaK

Edited by -NightDreamer- - 11 years ago

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#998

1. What was your first impression when I came with a story like this?

❤️ Was Super Happy as i read ur previous story FWP that was one of my favrt! .

2. What was the first thought that came on you, when I mentioned that this story is inspired by a Wattpad story?

I Did'nt bother abt it I was just excited as u r writer! 😃 Sachi (sorry u noe m ur Huge fan)❤️.

3. What do you think on characterization of Viren as a bad boy?

have seen viren as vry good, caring. loving sweet guyz was actually super excited and really enjoying!❤️.

4. How much do you like Viren in this story?

Well! in the begning i was confuse wedar he is Positive or negative😃 but after some time i started loving him bcoz the way he gt married to jeevika evryone can't do this i know he is flirty but as being Bad boy the care & love he gave to Jeeviak was appreciatable! !!.

5. If you got a chance, what advice would you like to give to the main lead Babydoll?

I want her to be Strong & Brave as she is Actually nothing im loving the way she is .

6.What are the limitation you find in this story? [Note: BE SINCERE AND TRUE , nd it can include my writing skills too!]

Are you serious! Ghsoh! navya you are seriously Amaizng writer i said this 100 times i really mean that! 👏 nothing ! but if you really want give us more of romantic virika scene as u noe da show is noi more 😛

7. What all improvisation do you want in this story?

Well what i wanted is the current track! i wanted guyz who falls for Jeevika

i want that track can we want to see jealous and possessive viren 😳

8.Rate the pace of this story - Fast , Medium or Slow!!

Perfect! Mediun! 👏

9. Which was the chapter you really got bored and made you skip it!😛

Not a single oen navya i have never gt bored reading any of your single Update...!!😃

10. Last but not the least - How bad/good am I as a writer ? What are the good points in me and my limitations.. how do you guys want me to improve!

Bad And you! are you serious! navya 😃

You are beyond muy word ghoshh!! jsut Tooo Goood you perfect se bhi perfect! ❤️

11. Rate the writer of this story at the scale of 1 to 10...

Is der option of 1000000 10 is to less for you! ❤️

12.Jot down your thoughts about the official siggy/Avi maker of this story!😛 [Juju, what is MA 18 without you , so had to include you here]

All of them are Good! 👏

It was really fun answering all of them I hope you like it!

sorry for long comment kia karu i alwayz fail to coment short one😳 😃

-MeHak