Virika FF: Married At 18 Ch.21 Pg143

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Fairuz Maliha

@virikamaliha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#971

Awesome update...
Loved the last part...
Update soon...
1. What was your first impression when I came with a story like this?
Enjoy all virika's stories...
2. What was the first thought that came on you, when I mentioned that this story is inspired by a Wattpad story?
I didn't bother that...coz loved the story...
3. What do you think on characterization of Viren as a bad boy?
Superd interesting to see viren as bad boy...love it..
4. How much do you like Viren in this story?
Love viren as a bad boy...love his attitude towards jeevs...always see viren as a good boy but treat to see viren as a bad boy...
5. If you got a chance, what advice would you like to give to the main lead Babydoll??
I want jeevika become brave..give a compitition to viren...love the way jeevs ans back to viren...
6.What are the limitation you find in this story? [Note: BE SINCERE AND TRUE , nd it can include my writing skills too!]
there is no limitation...
7. What all improvisation do you want in this story?
No need..love the way the story going on...
8.Rate the pace of this story - Fast , Medium or Slow!!
Fast
9. Which was the chapter you really got bored and made you skip it.
Love the all parts...
10. Last but not the least - How bad/good am I as a writer ? What are the good points in me and my limitations.. how do you guys want me to improve!
U r superb as a writter..coz i love the story and also fwp...u are just awesome...
11. Rate the writer of this story at the scale of 1 to 10...
9
12.Jot down your thoughts about the official siggy/Avi maker of this story![Juju, what is MA 18 without you , so had to include you here]
fab...great wrk juju...

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#972

Mind blowing 👏

i loved the dream part where viren was apologizing

hahaha nearly every1 has noticed jeevs swollen lips including viren's mom 😆

alisha got it right... 😉

so cute of viren, he applied ice on jeevs lips and asked her to trust her... and this is what she has been doing since the day they've met 😊

not to forget the bad boy he charged jeevs for applying the ice and gave her a peck... or i may say that was jeevs 2nd kiss

1. What was your first impression when I came with a story like this?

I thought if Navya is writing it, it ought to be mind blowing 😉. And it sounds totally different.

2. What was the first thought that came on you, when I mentioned that this story is inspired by a Wattpad story?

I haven't read Wattpad story so it was not a problem as u mentioned it will be different for the original one.

3. What do you think on characterization of Viren as a bad boy?

Have always read many FF & OS where Viren is the best son, brother and husband but here he is totally in a new avatar, a BAD BOY aged 22 and he got married to girl who is only 18.

4. How much do you like Viren in this story?

VERY VERY MUCH, yeah i agree he is the bad boy but still he has a clean heart, he always got concern seeing Jeevs scars and when he discovers the reason for these scars he decided to free her from that hell FOREVER...

5. If you got a chance, what advice would you like to give to the main lead Babydoll?

Please try to make Viren a bit responsible so that he can concentrate on his studies and all... and try to change him from a playboy to a good hubby. Make Viren fall for her, make him run after her and make him jealous everyday 😉

6.What are the limitation you find in this story? [Note: BE SINCERE AND TRUE , nd it can include my writing skills too!]

I hate the fact that Viren is still flirting with that rhea even after being married and that too in front of Jeevs and I am a bit sad that Jeevs is not react to this act.

7. What all improvisation do you want in this story?

This story is damn perfect and I was want Viren & Jeevika to become VIRIKA soon... Make the story take a leap and they have come to an end of their contract marriage. Make them realise their love for each other BUT don't end the story here,😭 continue with more virika romance...

8.Rate the pace of this story - Fast , Medium or Slow!!

neither fast nor slow, medium...

9. Which was the chapter you really got bored and made you skip it!😛

I actually read all chapters but i don't remember if even i came across a chapter which was boring.

10. Last but not the least - How bad/good am I as a writer ? What are the good points in me and my limitations.. how do you guys want me to improve!

To be honest i consider u as a good writer from the days i had started reading your FF 'Friend wala pathi'. If i'm not mistaken someone had saud u are god gift and i agree with that person 😃...

Come on stop blushing now 😆

11. Rate the writer of this story at the scale of 1 to 10...

It would be an insult to your writing skills if i will rate it... It cannot be rate but i can say each and every chapter of this story is mind blowing, awesome... 👏

12.Jot down your thoughts about the official siggy/Avi maker of this story!😛 [Juju, what is MA 18 without you , so had to include you here]

The siggy is awesome... 👏

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Marzii

@Marzii

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#973

Navyaaa im so so so in love with this story..sorry for not commenting on all of them, but believe me i read all three updates that i missed in more than a week :( thats how busy i am!!! your updates are always so long, but its never enough for me :P i still wanna read more more more n more...loving every bit of the story so much...please give us the next update faster please please please...

P.S. why you giving us homework dude??!! im too lazy to answer all those questions, you and we all know how good you and your stories are so no need for those questions 😆 but ima try to answer them soon okay?!! love ya <3

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Marzii

@Marzii

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#974

rez for questions 😕 i still dnt want to answer them hahah

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kryanfan1

@kryanfan1

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#975

Awesome Awesome Awesome update...!!
I am completely loving it..! 😉
Update soon...cant wait for more..!!😛
And here are the answers to ur questions:

1. What was your first impression when I came with a story like this?

-I was very excited...I wanted to read further...😛

2. What was the first thought that came on you, when I mentioned that this story is inspired by a Wattpad story?

-I was excited..!😊

3. What do you think on characterization of Viren as a bad boy?

-He is a bad boy but I love him in this story.He is being so caring towards Jeevs and you are showing true love in this story.(How I wish this story could be another show of Kryan..!!😉)

4. How much do you like Viren in this story?

-I am loving Viren in the story.

5. If you got a chance, what advice would you like to give to the main lead Babydoll?

-Dude,just say Viren that you love him and accept him as your husband forever.He loves you too and will definitely keep u happy.. 😊

6.What are the limitation you find in this story? [Note: BE SINCERE AND TRUE , nd it can include my writing skills too!]

-No limitations at all...Perfect writing..But plz update fast...we are dying to read further.

7. What all improvisation do you want in this story?

-Nothing...You are going on the right track..Continue.. 😊

8.Rate the pace of this story - Fast , Medium or Slow!!

-Medium.. 😃😃

9. Which was the chapter you really got bored and made you skip it!😛

-No such chapter..I have read all of them more than twice..

10. Last but not the least - How bad/good am I as a writer ? What are the good points in me and my limitations.. how do you guys want me to improve!

-TOOO GOOOD..!!😃😃😃

11. Rate the writer of this story at the scale of 1 to 10...

-11

12.Jot down your thoughts about the official siggy/Avi maker of this story!😛 [Juju, what is MA 18 without you , so had to include you here]

-Awesome..!!😛

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Grusha ! :)

@Kryan_SanDhir

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#976

1. What was your first impression when I came with a story like this?

At first I thought , hope this story is not completely a dark story..but I was like , who cares ? I'm gonna read it anyways :)) :p

2. What was the first thought that came on you, when I mentioned that this story is inspired by a Wattpad story?

I thought hope it's not the same..

3. What do you think on characterization of Viren as a bad boy?

It's good to see him as a bad boy as v have always seen him like a good , well behaved boy and it's much more amazing the way u have shown his character.. The way u have written it is really good..

4. How much do you like Viren in this story?

I love Viren in this story.. Yes In the start I dint like him but now I'm loving him.. The way he irritates Jeevs and then protects here is amazing :))

5. If you got a chance, what advice would you like to give to the main lead Babydoll?

Please realize that u love viren and tell this to him fast..

6.What are the limitation you find in this story? [Note: BE SINCERE AND TRUE , nd it can include my writing skills too!]

Somewhat I feel that u are bringing new characters in the story.. Though it's ok but then it becomes confusing to remember so many ppl.. I feel u should continue the story with the same characters for a while now..

7. What all improvisation do you want in this story?

No improvisation ! It's just perfect !

8.Rate the pace of this story - Fast , Medium or Slow!!

Medium

9. Which was the chapter you really got bored and made you skip it!😛

None of the chaps

10. Last but not the least - How bad/good am I as a writer ? What are the good points in me and my limitations.. how do you guys want me to improve!

U r amazing as a writer.. I love your works, well, he limitations I just wrote above ki u always get new character in the story,, try and go ahead with the same characters..and the good points I'm u are that u are beautiful as he writer.. U know how to keep people engrossed with your story .. And keep the suspense going :))

11. Rate the writer of this story at the scale of 1 to 10...

I would rate it 8!! Don't mind ha ,.

12.Jot down your thoughts about the official siggy/Avi maker of this story!😛 [Juju, what is MA 18 without you , so had to include you here]

Oh she's awesome.. I love the siggies and the avi's and love her stories too.. :))

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Jennifer

@jenna_p

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#977

Awesome update...Loved it..

Hope Viren and Jeevika realize their love towards each other...

Thanks for the PM..Continue soon..

Coming to ur questions

1. Was shocked to see u write on a serious subject since this was regarding abuse..

2.Never have read anything similar to this story in Wattpad so it didnt make any difference

3.Character is very well written..Its believable

4.Liked the character for saving a girl from abuse..

5.The character is strong enough so no advice needed.

6.I guess its perfect..

7.I am not a writer so I cannot answer this question..the author is a great writer so ur imagination will do justice to the storyline..when people start pouring in more ideas it can change the plot of the main story..

8.Its going in an Ideal pace so - MEDIUM

9.None till now

10.You are a gifted writer...Do explore more on other genres as well..

11.I wuld rate it as 9

12.Great work on the Siggy!!

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sushmakryan

@sushmakryan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#978

awesome update thanks for the pm

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TeriMaaa

@TeriMaaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#979

part 20
omggg first kiss
eekss
seriously havent expected this so soon
bt this was hell hottt
i am just loving this story

and yes ur are a god gift navya fr us
and god has gifted u such a wonderful blessing i.e YOUR WRITINGS

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TeriMaaa

@TeriMaaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#980

PART 21
omggg this is amazingly awesome yaar .. i mean just waoww .. i just love virika in this story .. the way viren helps her .. everything seems just perfect ..i must say i love u ms god gift .. and tht cute peck was just soo adorable ..this seems tht viren maane ya na maane he loves her 😆

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