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crizal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -Shwetz-
wowww well done 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

thanx 🤗
😛

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crizal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: surprising
wahhh...quite good😊

I try sometimes to do so😳

here's 1

MISGUIDED

Delightful light
Dew drops on pearls
Faded rainbow
All are nearer to GOD...

Darkness of black-whole
Dryness of stalks
Thorns of lotus
Belong to yearning-PLEASANT!

A heart that wants to get into darkness
What if...it embraces the mother of light...FORTUNE!!

ohh god 😲
Really ur poem is soo amazing 👏👏
so deep dear 😳
U shd also post it 😛
n thanx fr d comment dear 🤗

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crizal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Nichuss
awww...crizu...

finally u posted...

nice work...

kutss...u made her post it... gud work cb...

i loved it crizu...😉

Amma 😆
I m glad u liked it 🤗

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crizal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: hariyamalik
o my God Ashu!
tuje ye sab b ata hai?
wow...loved it...
u r rocking babes...
thnks for the pm...

love ya<3

Itna jade kuch bhi nahi aata baby 😆
n thanx fr ur comment dear 🤗

Edited by crizal - 12 years ago

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crizal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Loved it..

Dee

thanx dear 🤗

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crizal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: aayt
good job dear

Welcome 🤗

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crizal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
Awesome poem

thanx dear 🤗
😛

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MamiaRehman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

OMG... Aayushi ... what a beautiful poem.. 😲... u have got such a great talent ...👍🏼 bless u dear... 🤗

i m so touched with the last 9 lines ... its really amazing... loved it...

thanks for the PM... 😊