crizal's Night Moon Light Corner -UPD PG 39 - 23/6 - Page 17

was that inspired by John Donne? or r u fan of him?

Originally posted by: Shree.Nanda

was that inspired by John Donne? or r u fan of him?

said that coz acc. to me he's the master of love poetry

n ur poem was so so so awesome

don't have enough wrds tto tell how brilliant it was

absolutely loved it <3

mwahz!

write more soon 😉

Originally posted by: surprising

SECURE
In Eternal Arms


I lay bared with all the belongings I have
basking in his warmth
dipping myself in the sweetest of sweetest fragrance
He retracing my features carefully with his warm fingers
shussing me to sleep in his warmth
He hid me from the world
Into his own magical world
In which only I n he belong
caressing my face by fanning his warm breath on me
It made me feel complete in every sense
made me secure of all evil
I now just lay all bared
opening my every little secret to him
Just basking in his warmth
Like old times

The feeling that touches you
With an unknowingly known warmth,
The care that cheers for you,
The eyes having amazing azure
Without any grotesque possession...
Make you feel Paradise in the form of thosae eternal arms.

Originally posted by: crizal

Joan Donne ?? ..who is he 😕
This is d first time i m hearing this name 😆
I don't read any poems...I just write them 😳
But thnak you fr ur awesome comment 😃

Originally posted by: crizal

Ohh god mind blowing poem 😲 👏

Seriously i m nt capable to stand soo much of appreciation tat u write poem but i really love reading them

This means much fr me 🤗

n the title u added ...I really love it 😳